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Synopsis: Floating in the air just in the middle of Times Square in new york was a strange crack in the air that emitted a strange golden light, set as a perimeter around said crack, were countless US Soldiers, Tanks, Attack Helicopters, and jets flying overhead.
Suddenly the crack let out a deeper glow for a second as a figure materialized just next to the crack.
It was a man, or what appeared to be a man.
Pale white skin, glowing blue flames where the eyes should be, a strange crowned helmet, long snow white hair, strange armor with a skull molded onto the belt, and knee guards. In the man's hands was a glowing blue long sword with a skull just between the blade and guard.
Suddenly, dozens more figures started appearing around the crack too. Men and women wearing strange armor with decayed skin and missing flesh. They were undead. And each of them had the same blue flame inside their eyes and mouths...
The Lich King and his army have arrived in a new world.
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Very good has lots of potential, but the thing I’m most looking forwards to are the animals and ecosystem that will be created. Do to the dungeons action moving forward. Ps; on chapter 2 there are also only two chapters soooo…[img=update] Pss: add something like this plz so when a hunting group come in there just takeld by a 150 pound cat out of no were it will be very funny and you can also make it the pets of the local human/elf’s/beast kin/sapient animasl
Great premise with a lot of potential. Even though there aren't a lot of chapters by the time this review was posted, specifically at Chapter 9, it was an enjoyable read and I'm looking for more.
卷 1
- 1 C: 1 - The Birth of The Dungeon of Stories 1 years ago
- 2 C: 2 - The First Monsters 1 years ago
- 3 C: 3 - First Enchantment 1 years ago
- 4 4 - The 'Dome' 1 years ago
- 5 5 - Monster Creation 1 years ago
- 6 6 - Breach and...IKEA? 1 years ago
- 7 7 - Visitors! 1 years ago
- 8 8 - Visitors Part 2 1 years ago
- 9 9 - Arrival 1 years ago
very good so far I can't say that it will remain good in the future but you can read it without fear because so far it's doing a good character development