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Look don´t get me wrong, when I saw the title and the picture of your novel I thought that would be completely different from what I just read. The novel has nine chapters ( 10 if we count the author doing his schedule for his novels ), and they all are equal to the first film, the only difference is the addition of Geralt from Riveria as a secondary character. Yes, the author said that he would introduce Geralt as a secondary character, but the guy barely showed until chapter five, and have less then five sentences. In conclusion, the writing and the characters are good mainly because they seem a carbon copy of the film, it is not my cup of tea so if you like, enjoy it
I just have a question... What does HTTYD stand for? How To Teach Your Daughter is the first thing that popped into my head. 😅 I feel like I should know what it means though.
very interesting story. Very good writing quality. The characters are very well written I can't wait to see what the rest of the story brings
Geralt stands for harem yeah.............................................................................................................................................................................
Shameless Author here.. Thank you for trying to read my novel. As I said any and all advice in writing is helpful So please, if you do leave a review, I would always appreciate the commentary and advice. Thanks [img=recommend] img
Look don´t get me wrong, when I saw the title and the picture of your novel I thought that would be completely different from what I just read. The novel has nine chapters ( 10 if we count the author doing his schedule for his novels ), and they all are equal to the first film, the only difference is the addition of Geralt from Riveria as a secondary character. Yes, the author said that he would introduce Geralt as a secondary character, but the guy barely showed until chapter five, and have less then five sentences. In conclusion, the writing and the characters are good mainly because they seem a carbon copy of the film, it is not my cup of tea so if you like, enjoy it
I just have a question... What does HTTYD stand for? How To Teach Your Daughter is the first thing that popped into my head. 😅 I feel like I should know what it means though.
very interesting story. Very good writing quality. The characters are very well written I can't wait to see what the rest of the story brings
Geralt stands for harem yeah.............................................................................................................................................................................
Shameless Author here.. Thank you for trying to read my novel. As I said any and all advice in writing is helpful So please, if you do leave a review, I would always appreciate the commentary and advice. Thanks [img=recommend] img