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good story but the worst love interest ever .the love interest can be anyone but not her
While it contains the usual monkey biz our man shouldn't write any hero complexes anymore as his moral grey style bleeds through and just makes this an absolute irritant for me due to how conflicting his personality feels at times.
Hm, Not gonna lie this is probably the worst monkey fic I've read. I'm just not vibing at all with this character he's a complete joke and not the funny one.
Man author really doesn’t want mc to grow up, everything in novel felt great but mc just have to be a idiot having no kill policy when his enemies are killing his students infront of him.
this story started off so good and was really looking forward to the rest of it and then the mc became a p***y out of nowhere and it completly ruined the story for me ...and if that was bad enough bringing hermoine to kamar-taj sealed it dropping this at chapter 54. it started good and just got worse as time went on
I've gotten to chapter 19 the MC is very relatable with the whole learn magic because magic is magic. it so fast seems very fun and I'm looking forward to continuing
The grammar is good, so this is easy to read. Some of the character changes come off a little forced or cringy but not a huge issue. I think my only real complaint is the OC's overwhelming need to be morally right. Basically he's poor magic Batman.
I rarely leave a reply but this book deserves it I honestly no idea how this fanfic is not more popular it’s simply that good it’s humorous and have good character development and it’s honestly a good read so yea totally recommend it
Basically the only thing this book has going for it is comedy and even that's starting to die out, so like the only reason I'm even continuing is it's Monkeys book.
Classic monkey but no simping more into heroics. Though unlike all the other fics this one has a hero complex that thinks all life is sacred. Though it is quite intriguing if he can be magic batman or succumb to the greater good type of hero.
Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development ⭐ Character Design ⭐⭐⭐ World Background ⭐ Total 2.8 This is just canon with extra character nothing changes author doesn't want to change anything major or small.
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Surprisingly good, the first few chapters are a bit confusing but not bad tbh, after that it really gets going and you find out more about the world in quite satisfying ways
I've read about 3 to 4 chp... couldn't read any further. There are just too many things going around and no explanation, like there is no MC background story for...it gives you the feeling like you are starting your story from middle of the book. I think MC already has a love interest and we have got no explanation how they met or anything, and the jokes are lame and MC can't even converse without joking around. Sorry not for me.
i am very bad at writing rewievs, but this story is surprisingly very good. waiting for new chapters
Really like this and it has the potential to go on for a while since there is are a lot of different magic’s that he hasn’t even touched yet, like voodoo, witchcraft, Druidic magic, asgardian magic, even technomancy, in marvel and he has a passion for learning them.
It's good, like surprisingly good. Maybe a little rough near the beginning but it smooths out afterwards. 5/5 keep them chapters coming.
I am right now at the chapter 60 and what I have read till now has surprised me, it was very a enjoyable read. I don't know why there are so few comments or even reviews so, I wanted to leave mine to help a bit.I hope the author to keep updating as I am intrigued to see how the story unfolds. Many thanks for creating this story, keep up the good work!
good story but the worst love interest ever .the love interest can be anyone but not her
While it contains the usual monkey biz our man shouldn't write any hero complexes anymore as his moral grey style bleeds through and just makes this an absolute irritant for me due to how conflicting his personality feels at times.
Hm, Not gonna lie this is probably the worst monkey fic I've read. I'm just not vibing at all with this character he's a complete joke and not the funny one.
Man author really doesn’t want mc to grow up, everything in novel felt great but mc just have to be a idiot having no kill policy when his enemies are killing his students infront of him.
this story started off so good and was really looking forward to the rest of it and then the mc became a p***y out of nowhere and it completly ruined the story for me ...and if that was bad enough bringing hermoine to kamar-taj sealed it dropping this at chapter 54. it started good and just got worse as time went on
I've gotten to chapter 19 the MC is very relatable with the whole learn magic because magic is magic. it so fast seems very fun and I'm looking forward to continuing
The grammar is good, so this is easy to read. Some of the character changes come off a little forced or cringy but not a huge issue. I think my only real complaint is the OC's overwhelming need to be morally right. Basically he's poor magic Batman.
I rarely leave a reply but this book deserves it I honestly no idea how this fanfic is not more popular it’s simply that good it’s humorous and have good character development and it’s honestly a good read so yea totally recommend it
Basically the only thing this book has going for it is comedy and even that's starting to die out, so like the only reason I'm even continuing is it's Monkeys book.
Classic monkey but no simping more into heroics. Though unlike all the other fics this one has a hero complex that thinks all life is sacred. Though it is quite intriguing if he can be magic batman or succumb to the greater good type of hero.
Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development ⭐ Character Design ⭐⭐⭐ World Background ⭐ Total 2.8 This is just canon with extra character nothing changes author doesn't want to change anything major or small.
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Surprisingly good, the first few chapters are a bit confusing but not bad tbh, after that it really gets going and you find out more about the world in quite satisfying ways
I've read about 3 to 4 chp... couldn't read any further. There are just too many things going around and no explanation, like there is no MC background story for...it gives you the feeling like you are starting your story from middle of the book. I think MC already has a love interest and we have got no explanation how they met or anything, and the jokes are lame and MC can't even converse without joking around. Sorry not for me.
i am very bad at writing rewievs, but this story is surprisingly very good. waiting for new chapters
Really like this and it has the potential to go on for a while since there is are a lot of different magic’s that he hasn’t even touched yet, like voodoo, witchcraft, Druidic magic, asgardian magic, even technomancy, in marvel and he has a passion for learning them.
It's good, like surprisingly good. Maybe a little rough near the beginning but it smooths out afterwards. 5/5 keep them chapters coming.
I am right now at the chapter 60 and what I have read till now has surprised me, it was very a enjoyable read. I don't know why there are so few comments or even reviews so, I wanted to leave mine to help a bit.I hope the author to keep updating as I am intrigued to see how the story unfolds. Many thanks for creating this story, keep up the good work!