1評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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The start is alright, but I wish the author can improve a little on grammar. The main characters development isn't shown in detail though
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寫檢討The start is alright, but I wish the author can improve a little on grammar. The main characters development isn't shown in detail though
The start is alright, but I wish the author can improve a little on grammar. The main characters development isn't shown in detail though