9評論
- 寫作品質
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寫檢討
Great so far. I liked your first rendition and second of the book. I just hope you don’t give this one up and go for another rewrite.
Great to have you back with this novel! The idea and the MC was intresting, also I really liked the interactions between different characters. Really looking forward to this new version!
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揭示劇透
Loved your Clone General Novels and Revan is my Favoriten Charakter in Star Wars so I am pretty excited were this one will be going
This is kinda like a major rewrite of my previous stories, their were way too many mistakes for me to continue them and I had some other stuff going on. Either way, this should be an interesting and good premise. I definitely liked where this story was heading, hopefully you do too! Enjoy~
a month without updates huh. it looks like the beginning of another revival 😂.
Great so far. I liked your first rendition and second of the book. I just hope you don’t give this one up and go for another rewrite.
Great to have you back with this novel! The idea and the MC was intresting, also I really liked the interactions between different characters. Really looking forward to this new version!
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揭示劇透 Loved your Clone General Novels and Revan is my Favoriten Charakter in Star Wars so I am pretty excited were this one will be going
This is kinda like a major rewrite of my previous stories, their were way too many mistakes for me to continue them and I had some other stuff going on. Either way, this should be an interesting and good premise. I definitely liked where this story was heading, hopefully you do too! Enjoy~
a month without updates huh. it looks like the beginning of another revival 😂.