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It enjoyed it (obviously too lazy to do a proper review but I enjoyed the possible inspiration from matpat's game theories) one of the more higher tier minecraft fanfictions. The pacing felt off in the beginning but slows down when he got to a certain place.
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The plot is an engaging mix of adventure and nostalgia, incorporating in-game elements effectively. The novel successfully evokes the joy of playing Minecraft, although pacing can be uneven.
Honestly not that bad, Firstly I wanted to put my notes I took on this novel: - Split long paragraphs, majority of readers read from phone and long paragraphs can put off new readers because of the long length - Nice title but every first letter of it should be capitalized - Shorten sypnosis - Add periods in long sentences/paragraphs or else it’ll be a run on. Naturally like if one was taking you need to have to add ‘pauses’ - After quotation marks the first letter should be capitalized. Example: “Hello?” Instead of “hello?” - I think when the MC is thinking/inner monugluge should be like: ‘Just as I thought.’ Instead of, “Just as I thought.” So readers don’t get confused if the MC is speaking out loud or thinking What I liked: - Easy to follow narration - Unique idea (from the title alone is what hooked me) - Natural way of speaking between the characters This novel has potential! Keep writing author [img=recommend]!
I enjoy this novel 1. because it is minecraft 2. it is not ridged with minecraft rules for example Steve and his greatsword 3. it's over all quality is pretty good.
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This book had a very interesting concept which I haven't seen on here before. I'm surprised that I actually really enjoyed it since I usually don't read Minecraft books, but well yeah it was good. I wish there were more chapters right now but I guess that makes sense since the book just recently came out but I'm happy I even found this book. It has the right amount of drama, suspense, and slice of life that I like. Keep up the good work author! ;)
It enjoyed it (obviously too lazy to do a proper review but I enjoyed the possible inspiration from matpat's game theories) one of the more higher tier minecraft fanfictions. The pacing felt off in the beginning but slows down when he got to a certain place.
揭示劇透 The plot is an engaging mix of adventure and nostalgia, incorporating in-game elements effectively. The novel successfully evokes the joy of playing Minecraft, although pacing can be uneven.
Honestly not that bad, Firstly I wanted to put my notes I took on this novel: - Split long paragraphs, majority of readers read from phone and long paragraphs can put off new readers because of the long length - Nice title but every first letter of it should be capitalized - Shorten sypnosis - Add periods in long sentences/paragraphs or else it’ll be a run on. Naturally like if one was taking you need to have to add ‘pauses’ - After quotation marks the first letter should be capitalized. Example: “Hello?” Instead of “hello?” - I think when the MC is thinking/inner monugluge should be like: ‘Just as I thought.’ Instead of, “Just as I thought.” So readers don’t get confused if the MC is speaking out loud or thinking What I liked: - Easy to follow narration - Unique idea (from the title alone is what hooked me) - Natural way of speaking between the characters This novel has potential! Keep writing author [img=recommend]!
I enjoy this novel 1. because it is minecraft 2. it is not ridged with minecraft rules for example Steve and his greatsword 3. it's over all quality is pretty good.
揭示劇透 Would you like to exchange ratings and reviews?~~~twitter:@JingLuoTouJi ~~~twitter:@JingLuoTouJi ~~~twitter:@JingLuoTouJi ~~~twitter:@JingLuoTouJi
This book had a very interesting concept which I haven't seen on here before. I'm surprised that I actually really enjoyed it since I usually don't read Minecraft books, but well yeah it was good. I wish there were more chapters right now but I guess that makes sense since the book just recently came out but I'm happy I even found this book. It has the right amount of drama, suspense, and slice of life that I like. Keep up the good work author! ;)
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