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another loser mc who gets his powers and changes his life around. tbh i don't have the Patience to read past chapter 10
honestly this author writes incredible books , the only reason i continued to read this was because the writing was that incredible. but i honestly dislike the tragedy genre too much to continue. It's a great tragedy story and if you like that genre then this is the perfect book for you . it's just not my cup of tea honestly but this is still one of the best writtern books i've read so far and the author is incredible . keep up the good work author 👍🔥
1. I have a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked
Im in chapter 188. Just wondering, does he get another right arm or does stay an amputee?
Unlike many novels in this genre, the MC has a realistic personality that doesn't inexplicably shift as he gets stronger. I highly recommend this book!
This book is just perfect. Not only is the plot really good, the characters are diverse and not one dimensional. I certainly recommend this book if you like darker stories.
I really like this take of ability users characters. we, well i have never seen a character that has to sleep with others to get abilities. usually how it works the main character never gets a girl in bed but I see authors are going a different direction for me i first noticed that by reading my vampire system but it was only one weak moment but this is so detailed like what I would read on Kindle. definitely needs to be 18 and up to read this, do to how dark and the adult situations.... I'm currently on chapter 23 and had to stop and rate this book before i dive back in. i don't think you would be disappointed if you read this, a little frustrated about the world this story takes place in, reminded me of shield hero how people would falsely blame something on an innocent person
This novel is a phenomenal work of art. It's funny, serious, and exciting. The MC is extremely likeable so that's a +1 for me. So please Author, do NOT drop the novel, I'm begging you 🙏
I give it 5 stars because I want to know if Spider Girl enters the harem, dear author, please, I hope you answer me since I want to clear up my doubt quickly.
Well not that interested after seeing the authors note on chapter 11 bc I took it the mc will be pethatic for a long time...well may be I'm wrong but I ain't staying to check it out.
This is a great book. Cultured, dark, funny and overall extremely entertaining, it has a bit of everything. Couldn't put it down once I started. I hope the author keeps writing it!
This book is fantastic! The characters are well thought out and the world building is intriguing, with so many books on here that do with gods and powers sometimes you find that the stories get boring and repetitive. THAT IS NOT THE CASE WITH THIS BOOK! The MC is original and while the story might have similarities to others like the power scaling or nobles vs commoners, the mc treads his own path not just moving through the ranks but completely destroying them and moving unfettered through society. The only downside I have to this book is the updating stability, as I looked through the authors history there are a lot of dropped works and we’re currently down to 1 chpt/week and right now on day 9 with no update. AUTHOR I KNOW YOU WANTED THIS BOOK TO DO BETTER IN THE RANKING BUT WE ARE HERE NOW AND WE WANT TO READ WHAT COMES NEXT, PLEASE KEEP GOING AND DONT DROP THIS BOOK 🙏🏽
Strange mixture of comedy and murders with lust. Sadly can't find this novel anywhere else. Does anyone know where to read this novel?
Good mornings for you too mate I hope it doesn't work for him to get to work and you too love you so so so much for your help with your work and I love it doesn't it be a bit better for you
揭示劇透
this is a magnificent novel i read the free chapters and it made me hunger for this 9.6 out of ten
Amazing book so far, only beef is the whole sister thing, with the power he has anyone would ve gone after it already, specially someone as broken as him, guess the author wants him as a final boss or smt but it leaves a real bad taste reading it and the whole Stockholm syndrom
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Pretty good story and decent world building, the only disappointing aspect for me is the seggs which is under described or even skipped in some cases which is sad because you would expect good seggs scenes from a novel with this title
This one is carefully written while keeping moat of the things as realistic as possible
Love it please keep this one going! Everything is well written and easy to read and the plot is easy to get hooked on.
Great story! High quality writing, been a rollercoaster of emotions through out so far, and it keeps on giving! Keep it up 🙌🏼
Eu gostei, gostei da construção de mundo e dos personagens principalmente. Principalmente a construção de mundo, é uma coisa simples mas bem feito, nada daquelas coisas extremamente complicadas que nem mesmo entendemos direito o que está acontecendo.
'must have been the wind' well your other novels were god but this is not. I don't know how to express myself.
A good and entertaining story. I am very curious how the the characters and lore will develop. Hopefully there isn't another 7 month gap because i am really curious to see how the MC grows.
Overall it's a good story except that the harem part is too much. If only the author can add character images then it would be easier to imagine.
another loser mc who gets his powers and changes his life around. tbh i don't have the Patience to read past chapter 10
honestly this author writes incredible books , the only reason i continued to read this was because the writing was that incredible. but i honestly dislike the tragedy genre too much to continue. It's a great tragedy story and if you like that genre then this is the perfect book for you . it's just not my cup of tea honestly but this is still one of the best writtern books i've read so far and the author is incredible . keep up the good work author 👍🔥
1. I have a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked
Im in chapter 188. Just wondering, does he get another right arm or does stay an amputee?
Unlike many novels in this genre, the MC has a realistic personality that doesn't inexplicably shift as he gets stronger. I highly recommend this book!
This book is just perfect. Not only is the plot really good, the characters are diverse and not one dimensional. I certainly recommend this book if you like darker stories.
I really like this take of ability users characters. we, well i have never seen a character that has to sleep with others to get abilities. usually how it works the main character never gets a girl in bed but I see authors are going a different direction for me i first noticed that by reading my vampire system but it was only one weak moment but this is so detailed like what I would read on Kindle. definitely needs to be 18 and up to read this, do to how dark and the adult situations.... I'm currently on chapter 23 and had to stop and rate this book before i dive back in. i don't think you would be disappointed if you read this, a little frustrated about the world this story takes place in, reminded me of shield hero how people would falsely blame something on an innocent person
This novel is a phenomenal work of art. It's funny, serious, and exciting. The MC is extremely likeable so that's a +1 for me. So please Author, do NOT drop the novel, I'm begging you 🙏
I give it 5 stars because I want to know if Spider Girl enters the harem, dear author, please, I hope you answer me since I want to clear up my doubt quickly.
Well not that interested after seeing the authors note on chapter 11 bc I took it the mc will be pethatic for a long time...well may be I'm wrong but I ain't staying to check it out.
This is a great book. Cultured, dark, funny and overall extremely entertaining, it has a bit of everything. Couldn't put it down once I started. I hope the author keeps writing it!
This book is fantastic! The characters are well thought out and the world building is intriguing, with so many books on here that do with gods and powers sometimes you find that the stories get boring and repetitive. THAT IS NOT THE CASE WITH THIS BOOK! The MC is original and while the story might have similarities to others like the power scaling or nobles vs commoners, the mc treads his own path not just moving through the ranks but completely destroying them and moving unfettered through society. The only downside I have to this book is the updating stability, as I looked through the authors history there are a lot of dropped works and we’re currently down to 1 chpt/week and right now on day 9 with no update. AUTHOR I KNOW YOU WANTED THIS BOOK TO DO BETTER IN THE RANKING BUT WE ARE HERE NOW AND WE WANT TO READ WHAT COMES NEXT, PLEASE KEEP GOING AND DONT DROP THIS BOOK 🙏🏽
Strange mixture of comedy and murders with lust. Sadly can't find this novel anywhere else. Does anyone know where to read this novel?
Good mornings for you too mate I hope it doesn't work for him to get to work and you too love you so so so much for your help with your work and I love it doesn't it be a bit better for you
揭示劇透 this is a magnificent novel i read the free chapters and it made me hunger for this 9.6 out of ten
Amazing book so far, only beef is the whole sister thing, with the power he has anyone would ve gone after it already, specially someone as broken as him, guess the author wants him as a final boss or smt but it leaves a real bad taste reading it and the whole Stockholm syndrom
If you're looking for a professional book promoter I can refer you to an expert she helped me in achieving my goal as an authornow my book is already sign and it's getting more views and salesYou can check her page on Facebook Her Facebook handle is "Leticia R.Miller"she is an expert in book promotion ..
Pretty good story and decent world building, the only disappointing aspect for me is the seggs which is under described or even skipped in some cases which is sad because you would expect good seggs scenes from a novel with this title
This one is carefully written while keeping moat of the things as realistic as possible
Love it please keep this one going! Everything is well written and easy to read and the plot is easy to get hooked on.
Great story! High quality writing, been a rollercoaster of emotions through out so far, and it keeps on giving! Keep it up 🙌🏼
Eu gostei, gostei da construção de mundo e dos personagens principalmente. Principalmente a construção de mundo, é uma coisa simples mas bem feito, nada daquelas coisas extremamente complicadas que nem mesmo entendemos direito o que está acontecendo.
'must have been the wind' well your other novels were god but this is not. I don't know how to express myself.
A good and entertaining story. I am very curious how the the characters and lore will develop. Hopefully there isn't another 7 month gap because i am really curious to see how the MC grows.
Overall it's a good story except that the harem part is too much. If only the author can add character images then it would be easier to imagine.