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Title of the book can be misleading. MC isnt building an Empire, he is barely building a city. The city is being build in the background without us knowing which I find terrible. Where the city building chapters or empire building??? Why the hell would he chill in other cities except the one hes building. It had a great start but everything went downhill when you stop focusing on character development and empire building development. I think the title is clickbait and false. Get back to empire/city building and focusing on leveing his city to see his GF from the start again
you have good record of completing books so I'm going to read this and also vote you always, wish you for completing the novel.
the title is such a lie from scratch? no u are rebuilding a city that already existed
Haven’t read it yet but sounds interesting. Question: Why does the main character look more like a woman than the female lead?
Initially, I thought this was a novel about empire building, but it turns out it's not. However, that doesn't diminish my love for this book in the slightest. The plot is simply brilliant, with each event intricately linked to the next, spanning thousands of years. I've been thoroughly captivated. I'm eager to see the moment when Alexander and Laura reunite to confront the demon together. You're doing a fantastic job, please keep it up! For humanity's last hope, let the City of Hope be great forever!
I love this novel.....................Oh, the annoying word count limit.....................................................................................
Although some chapters are somewhat bland, I like this novel. Its merits completely make up for its shortcomings.Please update mrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
I'm delighted to see this novel resuming updates, although the pace is a bit slow, the storyline remains highly captivating. The last hope of humanity, so the main character is destined to be a savior, right?
Dear readers, hello. I am now resuming the updates for this book. Before that, I have made some adjustments and modifications to parts of the plot. The specific changes are as follows: 1. The level of the pact between Alexander and Laura has been changed from 200 to 1000. 2. The form of the Turkey has been adjusted from a dragon to a thunderbird. 3. The name of the top structure in the City of Hope has been changed. 4. Alexander additionally acquires a pair of very powerful eyes. 5. Karu forges a sword for Alexander, but only completes half of it. 6. Some character names have been adjusted and unified. 7. Clichés have been removed to make the reading more fluid.
Excellent novel. I hope you won't give up and will continue to complete it. City of Hope is like the last hope of humanity, and I love it...
I don't like writing long reviews, so all I will say is I enjoyed what I've read up to the premium chapters.
Hello, dear readers! I hope you are all doing well and enjoying my stories so far. As an author, your support and feedback mean the world to me, and I want to ensure that we can establish a stronger connection with each other. 1.Please feel free to comment on my work, whether it's praise or criticism. I'm always eager to hear your opinions and suggestions, as they help me grow and improve as a writer. 2.If you have any questions about my work, the creative process, or sources of inspiration, please don't hesitate to ask. I'll do my best to answer your questions and provide you with more information about myself and my stories. 3.Let's discuss your favorite characters or plotlines, and share your thoughts and feelings during the reading process. This will help us gain a deeper understanding of each other's interests and preferences. 4.If you're interested, you can submit character information to be included in the novel. For example: Mike, a charming and suave beast tamer with a special talent for taming beasts. If you're up for it, please leave the relevant information in the comments, and I'll incorporate it into the subsequent content.
Its a new novel, with some admittedly cliche tropes, but so far it's interesting with an intriguing plot/mc
I highly recommend not reading this series. It’s title was truely and utterly miss leading. A previous review was responded by the author saying it was readers who requested a OP character. Yet who puts a book series together to completely flip the series at the beginning to be nothing like the title. I’ve made it to chapter 150 and the MC does nothing related to building or development of a city or empire. It’s all magically in the background. The author has a systems, skills and level and they mean nothing to the MC. He does the same things over and over way over powered beyond sense. Everything falls on his head. On top of that we sit in others cities for more than 90% of the series and just hear blimps about his city. The system is pointless and so distorted it is completely wiped out. No actual build or development in the story either. It’s maddening and deceitful. I’m sorry but no excuse to walk it off on the readers. I wouldn’t have left this review but the author had the galls to place the writing style or storyline on the readers not themselves. Own up to your own work and the misnomer that this series isn’t what the readers thought.
Title of the book can be misleading. MC isnt building an Empire, he is barely building a city. The city is being build in the background without us knowing which I find terrible. Where the city building chapters or empire building??? Why the hell would he chill in other cities except the one hes building. It had a great start but everything went downhill when you stop focusing on character development and empire building development. I think the title is clickbait and false. Get back to empire/city building and focusing on leveing his city to see his GF from the start again
you have good record of completing books so I'm going to read this and also vote you always, wish you for completing the novel.
the title is such a lie from scratch? no u are rebuilding a city that already existed
Haven’t read it yet but sounds interesting. Question: Why does the main character look more like a woman than the female lead?
Initially, I thought this was a novel about empire building, but it turns out it's not. However, that doesn't diminish my love for this book in the slightest. The plot is simply brilliant, with each event intricately linked to the next, spanning thousands of years. I've been thoroughly captivated. I'm eager to see the moment when Alexander and Laura reunite to confront the demon together. You're doing a fantastic job, please keep it up! For humanity's last hope, let the City of Hope be great forever!
I love this novel.....................Oh, the annoying word count limit.....................................................................................
Although some chapters are somewhat bland, I like this novel. Its merits completely make up for its shortcomings.Please update mrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
I'm delighted to see this novel resuming updates, although the pace is a bit slow, the storyline remains highly captivating. The last hope of humanity, so the main character is destined to be a savior, right?
Dear readers, hello. I am now resuming the updates for this book. Before that, I have made some adjustments and modifications to parts of the plot. The specific changes are as follows: 1. The level of the pact between Alexander and Laura has been changed from 200 to 1000. 2. The form of the Turkey has been adjusted from a dragon to a thunderbird. 3. The name of the top structure in the City of Hope has been changed. 4. Alexander additionally acquires a pair of very powerful eyes. 5. Karu forges a sword for Alexander, but only completes half of it. 6. Some character names have been adjusted and unified. 7. Clichés have been removed to make the reading more fluid.
Excellent novel. I hope you won't give up and will continue to complete it. City of Hope is like the last hope of humanity, and I love it...
I don't like writing long reviews, so all I will say is I enjoyed what I've read up to the premium chapters.
Hello, dear readers! I hope you are all doing well and enjoying my stories so far. As an author, your support and feedback mean the world to me, and I want to ensure that we can establish a stronger connection with each other. 1.Please feel free to comment on my work, whether it's praise or criticism. I'm always eager to hear your opinions and suggestions, as they help me grow and improve as a writer. 2.If you have any questions about my work, the creative process, or sources of inspiration, please don't hesitate to ask. I'll do my best to answer your questions and provide you with more information about myself and my stories. 3.Let's discuss your favorite characters or plotlines, and share your thoughts and feelings during the reading process. This will help us gain a deeper understanding of each other's interests and preferences. 4.If you're interested, you can submit character information to be included in the novel. For example: Mike, a charming and suave beast tamer with a special talent for taming beasts. If you're up for it, please leave the relevant information in the comments, and I'll incorporate it into the subsequent content.
Its a new novel, with some admittedly cliche tropes, but so far it's interesting with an intriguing plot/mc
I highly recommend not reading this series. It’s title was truely and utterly miss leading. A previous review was responded by the author saying it was readers who requested a OP character. Yet who puts a book series together to completely flip the series at the beginning to be nothing like the title. I’ve made it to chapter 150 and the MC does nothing related to building or development of a city or empire. It’s all magically in the background. The author has a systems, skills and level and they mean nothing to the MC. He does the same things over and over way over powered beyond sense. Everything falls on his head. On top of that we sit in others cities for more than 90% of the series and just hear blimps about his city. The system is pointless and so distorted it is completely wiped out. No actual build or development in the story either. It’s maddening and deceitful. I’m sorry but no excuse to walk it off on the readers. I wouldn’t have left this review but the author had the galls to place the writing style or storyline on the readers not themselves. Own up to your own work and the misnomer that this series isn’t what the readers thought.