Reviews of Biokinetic Ability in Dragon ball by Kaioshin - Webnovel

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4.53

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eduardo_quintero

Está muy bien espero que puedas continuar con la historia si es posible Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias

1yr
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MadDevilBR

Harem stories in dragon ball are rare, so I'm looking forward to more, if I'm ever displeased I'll change this review as a warning.................

1yr
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Kaioshin

Many of the 2-star voters did not read the story until chapter 20 or 10. The problems have already been solved in general, so enjoy it~~ I started doing translations and corrections using chatgpt, so most if not all of the problems are likely already resolved. Enjoy~~

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CouchPotatoDandy

This fanfic has an interesting concept but poor execution. As of chapter 5, the flow was too rigid and it wasn't easy to read, the grammar had plenty of mistakes, and the conversations felt like reading a diary. I'm not writing this to off put the author, I really appreciate his hard work. I'm just pointing out what I noticed in this fanfic in hope to encourage improvement.

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Story development: 1 star. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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SKAJ
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I'm confused why is there a same book? are they different?

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Mina_Emad_7648

what happened I was reading it then the chapters are gone

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Master_Steve

why this story is dropped 😭😭😭😭..... .

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Master_Steve

hello author is this story dropped ? .

7mth
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Gilgameshthebrave

The story itself is very good, there are fan fics that start and I don't understand anything that's happening, it's already here to understand because it explains

1yr
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Beardy
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Though you have what could be a solid FF there is a few teething issues, mainly the flow of the story is a little off putting. PS. Bio-kinetic is about the manipulation of energy and not biology, either you have misunderstood the abilities or your title is wrong. If you need to know what Bio-kinetic is, search about Gambit from Marvel or Hisoka Morow from Hunter x Hunter. All the best.

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THE_GreatRed

bro this fanfic is lit.But pls continue iron man fanfiction

1yr
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Kaioshin

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jhesus_curtus

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CONNER_Jackson

more please, really good so far has great potential

1yr
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Magicial

The story is interesting, some people complain about the writing, but this story is readable, with an understandable story, I'll see how it develops in the future.

1yr
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Sergio_Navarrete

Nice concept, I'll see where this goes!

1yr
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eduardo_quintero

Está muy bien espero que puedas continuar con la historia si es posible Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias

1yr
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MadDevilBR

Harem stories in dragon ball are rare, so I'm looking forward to more, if I'm ever displeased I'll change this review as a warning.................

1yr
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Kaioshin

Many of the 2-star voters did not read the story until chapter 20 or 10. The problems have already been solved in general, so enjoy it~~ I started doing translations and corrections using chatgpt, so most if not all of the problems are likely already resolved. Enjoy~~

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1yr
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CouchPotatoDandy

This fanfic has an interesting concept but poor execution. As of chapter 5, the flow was too rigid and it wasn't easy to read, the grammar had plenty of mistakes, and the conversations felt like reading a diary. I'm not writing this to off put the author, I really appreciate his hard work. I'm just pointing out what I noticed in this fanfic in hope to encourage improvement.

28d
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Story development: 1 star. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

1mth
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SKAJ
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I'm confused why is there a same book? are they different?

3mth
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Mina_Emad_7648

what happened I was reading it then the chapters are gone

6mth
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Master_Steve

why this story is dropped 😭😭😭😭..... .

7mth
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Master_Steve

hello author is this story dropped ? .

7mth
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Gilgameshthebrave

The story itself is very good, there are fan fics that start and I don't understand anything that's happening, it's already here to understand because it explains

1yr
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Beardy
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Though you have what could be a solid FF there is a few teething issues, mainly the flow of the story is a little off putting. PS. Bio-kinetic is about the manipulation of energy and not biology, either you have misunderstood the abilities or your title is wrong. If you need to know what Bio-kinetic is, search about Gambit from Marvel or Hisoka Morow from Hunter x Hunter. All the best.

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1yr
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THE_GreatRed

bro this fanfic is lit.But pls continue iron man fanfiction

1yr
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Kaioshin

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jhesus_curtus

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1yr
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CONNER_Jackson

more please, really good so far has great potential

1yr
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Magicial

The story is interesting, some people complain about the writing, but this story is readable, with an understandable story, I'll see how it develops in the future.

1yr
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Sergio_Navarrete

Nice concept, I'll see where this goes!

1yr
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