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Just two words; exciting, interesting. But in case you're a lover of a fantasy, erotic, succubus themed story, then 'My perfect demon' is definitely a book you should read. Go ahead and try it, you'll love it.
the story has great promise, but the writing quality is so poor at times that it's nerve-racking. writing a story I should never see short hand like lol, it's lazy. using the wrong pronouns or words in general, there are so many tools out there that could edit this for you, such as Google doc or even chat gpt
Realized I never gave a review for this story so I'm doing it now. Great Story with interesting Lore and Worldbuilding and a great continuation of the snow bloodline.
Just two words; exciting, interesting. But in case you're a lover of a fantasy, erotic, succubus themed story, then 'My perfect demon' is definitely a book you should read. Go ahead and try it, you'll love it.
the story has great promise, but the writing quality is so poor at times that it's nerve-racking. writing a story I should never see short hand like lol, it's lazy. using the wrong pronouns or words in general, there are so many tools out there that could edit this for you, such as Google doc or even chat gpt
Realized I never gave a review for this story so I'm doing it now. Great Story with interesting Lore and Worldbuilding and a great continuation of the snow bloodline.