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The story is pretty good but the grammar mistakes are awful . Usually I can over look grammar errors but it has gotten so bad the story has become confusing and lost my interest. Please put more effort into reviewing and editing before posting. I would love to come back to this story if there are corrections made.
This is my review after reading every chapter except privileged. Best part about story not cliche rebirth revenge from MC/FL. It's about building family.Charater reasoning and few chapters concept blew my mind. I read many fantasy genre webnovels.You can definitely invest your precious time on this novel.All the best author. You deserve more recognition!
It is my first book from this Author, After reading almost 450 chapter I am giving review. I don't want to reveal any spoiler so you won't get book details but you will know if it's worth reading from this review. 1. world background is clear and set with good imagination. Reader can easily paint the picture in their mind.2. Character design is also good. Their coldness and various emotions are totally justified. why certain characters act that way is explained in book so we can understand their emotions. 3. Story Development is little slow paced but their are lots of mysteries so it's justified that they are revealed at the right time. There are many different developments(arcs) which are interesting to read. 4. update stability is regular , no lags so I'm happy with it.5. Writing Quality : Author is creative and have added many interesting situations but I am disappointed with writing because there are some errors in Grammer, names and tenses. sometimes it's confusing to understand in 1st reading. I hope you find Editor or re-read it before posting.overall it's great read , I'm always on tenterhooks thinking what will happen next and when I will get more chapter. So from my POV it's totally WORTH READING. [img=recommend]
Another great novel from this author! A well paced revenge plot with lots of characters and mystery. Strong FL and lots of story to sink into. A satisfying read that speaks to the heart of relationships. You are going to love this book from the start and won’t be able to put it down.
The story is a captivating exploration of reincarnation and revenge, masterfully written by the author. It offers readers a unique and engaging journey of the female lead and the human psyche, all while challenging our understanding of justice and morality. A must-read for those who is a lover of reincarnation, revenge and romance-comedy theme.
Spelling mistakes and Grammer errors, nothing a little editing couldn't fix but if you can get past that it is an enjoyable read.
Love the story with a strong female lead. I can read this story all day. On the other hand, there are just some parts that got me confused with the pronouns. But overall, it is a good read. 😊
I highly recommend this book. Good plot if you like rebirth genre. The development is just right. Characters are awesome too making you want to attempt murder on those villains like Meredith lol. But i really like Lord Rowan, I hope that tge twist and turns of this story won't disappoint me. [img=recommend][img=update]
I read 80 chapters in one sitting. So I guess I couldn't put it down. Thank you Author for writing this word so I can fuel my imagination ❤️
hey author,why are you not uploading non privileged chapters after uploading privileged ones......
I wish the author did a second reading to check the grammar before releasing the book then this book would have been great. Still, I would recommend this to others, it’s a good read.
The plot is well written and the world building is well done. I like the heroine and the son. Their interactions are very cute. There could be improvements in the grammar, tense, and spelling. It's nothing too major, but the author uses sweets instead of sweats, stairs instead of stares, along with other little mistakes. There are sentences like, "she wanted to reach out, unfortunately my hands were tied behind her back." So, nothing that detracts from the story as far as I've read, but it is something to note. As I go further in reading I'll update my review.
The cover looks exactly the same from the translated manwa "I found a husband when I pick up the male lead". I hope this is it! I've been looking for the novel!
At first I was hesitant on this story, but then it started to grow on me and now I definetly like it, the development of the characters is fairly fast paced so you don't get bored with crazy large interior monologues, the story keeps you guessing but never strays from the main point of the story which is nice. I like where the story is going and I hope the author keeps the good work and gets even more creative. I'll keep an eye on this one
A heartwarming tale of a mother who fights injustice and claims what is rightfully hers. Read it, you won't be disappointed. Keep it up, creator!!
the book keeps me on edges. it has equal proportion of a cold woman who knew nothing but revenge and a emotional mother who could put her life at stake for the protection of her child. her struggles feel real against most of the novels where a person change completely after rebirth. I feel connected to Ana. well done author
As expected of my favorite author, he never misses with his stories. I am specially liking this one because of the great dynamic. The kid added to this was a bonus and made it more spicy. Also, kids are easily a win for me cuz I like them, they are sooo CUTE!!!!~(*♡∀♡)
I really like the story. It was a fresh plot for me. The pacing was just alright. Anastasia is a very strong fl after her rebirth and Rowan...he is a very cute boy. I would like to see Anastasia and Rowan's interactions when the former would be the latter's mother(already excited for it). Garrison still didn't leave any deep expression on me. I wonder why he is sometimes cold and warm to his child. I don't know if he loved his first wife who is still a mystery but I would love to know more. The story is very nice. All the best for competition creator!!!
You must be pulling my leg if you are not intending to read this. [img=faceslap] Like... This is creator's work! Expect a lot of updates and wonderful work from him! Just his previous works alone only indicated this is another masterpiece created from him! So what are you waiting now! Go read and enjoy![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the writing in this book is top-notch... the author has a way of painting vivid picture with their words that made me feel like I was there with Anastasia...
I love your new work I am creato,,r. It's not so cliche and the Fl started differently. Can't wait to see the Fl and Ml fight for the child[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]. It's gonna be epic. Pls update it so I can enjoy more of this[img=fp][img=fp]
It has many grammatical errors & editing is much needed. Decent for a free read although it isn’t complete. Author was diligent with the characters but, they don’t stick to their original morals and change too much even with character development taken into consideration. I would recommend as a free reading experience.
The story is pretty good but the grammar mistakes are awful . Usually I can over look grammar errors but it has gotten so bad the story has become confusing and lost my interest. Please put more effort into reviewing and editing before posting. I would love to come back to this story if there are corrections made.
This is my review after reading every chapter except privileged. Best part about story not cliche rebirth revenge from MC/FL. It's about building family.Charater reasoning and few chapters concept blew my mind. I read many fantasy genre webnovels.You can definitely invest your precious time on this novel.All the best author. You deserve more recognition!
It is my first book from this Author, After reading almost 450 chapter I am giving review. I don't want to reveal any spoiler so you won't get book details but you will know if it's worth reading from this review. 1. world background is clear and set with good imagination. Reader can easily paint the picture in their mind.2. Character design is also good. Their coldness and various emotions are totally justified. why certain characters act that way is explained in book so we can understand their emotions. 3. Story Development is little slow paced but their are lots of mysteries so it's justified that they are revealed at the right time. There are many different developments(arcs) which are interesting to read. 4. update stability is regular , no lags so I'm happy with it.5. Writing Quality : Author is creative and have added many interesting situations but I am disappointed with writing because there are some errors in Grammer, names and tenses. sometimes it's confusing to understand in 1st reading. I hope you find Editor or re-read it before posting.overall it's great read , I'm always on tenterhooks thinking what will happen next and when I will get more chapter. So from my POV it's totally WORTH READING. [img=recommend]
Another great novel from this author! A well paced revenge plot with lots of characters and mystery. Strong FL and lots of story to sink into. A satisfying read that speaks to the heart of relationships. You are going to love this book from the start and won’t be able to put it down.
The story is a captivating exploration of reincarnation and revenge, masterfully written by the author. It offers readers a unique and engaging journey of the female lead and the human psyche, all while challenging our understanding of justice and morality. A must-read for those who is a lover of reincarnation, revenge and romance-comedy theme.
Spelling mistakes and Grammer errors, nothing a little editing couldn't fix but if you can get past that it is an enjoyable read.
Love the story with a strong female lead. I can read this story all day. On the other hand, there are just some parts that got me confused with the pronouns. But overall, it is a good read. 😊
I highly recommend this book. Good plot if you like rebirth genre. The development is just right. Characters are awesome too making you want to attempt murder on those villains like Meredith lol. But i really like Lord Rowan, I hope that tge twist and turns of this story won't disappoint me. [img=recommend][img=update]
I read 80 chapters in one sitting. So I guess I couldn't put it down. Thank you Author for writing this word so I can fuel my imagination ❤️
hey author,why are you not uploading non privileged chapters after uploading privileged ones......
I wish the author did a second reading to check the grammar before releasing the book then this book would have been great. Still, I would recommend this to others, it’s a good read.
The plot is well written and the world building is well done. I like the heroine and the son. Their interactions are very cute. There could be improvements in the grammar, tense, and spelling. It's nothing too major, but the author uses sweets instead of sweats, stairs instead of stares, along with other little mistakes. There are sentences like, "she wanted to reach out, unfortunately my hands were tied behind her back." So, nothing that detracts from the story as far as I've read, but it is something to note. As I go further in reading I'll update my review.
The cover looks exactly the same from the translated manwa "I found a husband when I pick up the male lead". I hope this is it! I've been looking for the novel!
At first I was hesitant on this story, but then it started to grow on me and now I definetly like it, the development of the characters is fairly fast paced so you don't get bored with crazy large interior monologues, the story keeps you guessing but never strays from the main point of the story which is nice. I like where the story is going and I hope the author keeps the good work and gets even more creative. I'll keep an eye on this one
A heartwarming tale of a mother who fights injustice and claims what is rightfully hers. Read it, you won't be disappointed. Keep it up, creator!!
the book keeps me on edges. it has equal proportion of a cold woman who knew nothing but revenge and a emotional mother who could put her life at stake for the protection of her child. her struggles feel real against most of the novels where a person change completely after rebirth. I feel connected to Ana. well done author
As expected of my favorite author, he never misses with his stories. I am specially liking this one because of the great dynamic. The kid added to this was a bonus and made it more spicy. Also, kids are easily a win for me cuz I like them, they are sooo CUTE!!!!~(*♡∀♡)
I really like the story. It was a fresh plot for me. The pacing was just alright. Anastasia is a very strong fl after her rebirth and Rowan...he is a very cute boy. I would like to see Anastasia and Rowan's interactions when the former would be the latter's mother(already excited for it). Garrison still didn't leave any deep expression on me. I wonder why he is sometimes cold and warm to his child. I don't know if he loved his first wife who is still a mystery but I would love to know more. The story is very nice. All the best for competition creator!!!
You must be pulling my leg if you are not intending to read this. [img=faceslap] Like... This is creator's work! Expect a lot of updates and wonderful work from him! Just his previous works alone only indicated this is another masterpiece created from him! So what are you waiting now! Go read and enjoy![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the writing in this book is top-notch... the author has a way of painting vivid picture with their words that made me feel like I was there with Anastasia...
I love your new work I am creato,,r. It's not so cliche and the Fl started differently. Can't wait to see the Fl and Ml fight for the child[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]. It's gonna be epic. Pls update it so I can enjoy more of this[img=fp][img=fp]
It has many grammatical errors & editing is much needed. Decent for a free read although it isn’t complete. Author was diligent with the characters but, they don’t stick to their original morals and change too much even with character development taken into consideration. I would recommend as a free reading experience.