Winter Rain

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Deborah_13

I love the way the Author started the book, it was fantastic and the character design is awesome

LV 12

prajnya_shriyan

Very interesting start and plot. The character design is amazingly done. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work and keep updating.

LV 13

AceAmbrosia

Amazing! I love the plot since it's something I haven't read before, and the way the author puts a dot after each paragraph or segment helps maintain the flow of the reading. The only advice I could possibly offer is to implement more descriptive writing. Otherwise, the novel is wonderful! Keep up the good work, author!

LV 1

Vigilant_Dreamer

First of all, I like the conversations between the characters, the start was nice and interesting. I will be looking forward to more chapters!

LV 13

Imsuperberbs20

I love how straightforward the story telling was. Plus the interaction are cute and the characters have chemistry. Looking forward for more chapter!

LV 2

Rainandstorm

Okay for starters, love the way the writer began the story, the characters are great and overall the book really do have potentials, Great work

LV 1

Stardust_Nexus

This story has a lot of potential. I would recommend the author to work on grammar, and sentence structure. Other than that, I found no major issues.

LV 3

Stardreamer12

The genre is my favorite, and I really enjoy your story. I especially like the character of Ling, and I find your writing to be well-crafted, easy to understand, and with a good flow. I am looking forward to reading more chapters in the future