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This is the third book that I am writing after gaining lots of writing experience from my first two popular books. Join me as I tell you this interesting story, a fantasy which will leave you feel excited and awed. Feel free to ask any question here~
it has a very good story development I just wish you would update a lot more frequently thank you for the hard work
i just have the request to the author to release chapters regularly as you can see this story has a lot of potential
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This story is high recommended and just love the Mc love for his wives. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️👌👌👌♥️
37... chapter? ahh.... I'll wait then, till fate bring us together again. at that time I'll give a new review, a better one.... maybe.
Chapter 24 is end for me. I cringe at plot. I'm out. It was fun, but this twist is too predictable and kill all my expectations. Good luck :)
Good story...... Waiting for it to improve more by the way. Also, What's your Discord Channel, boss?
Great Novel. Ever since i read "Tales of the Reincarnated Lord", I've always wanted to read another work like this where mc raises a family and has children. Author has no problem having a big Harem but try to work on each heroine at a time, so as not to rain women on the mc, without even gaining the reader's empathy, even if you put a lot of women, try to keep something around 15, so as not to become very large and even difficult for us readers to remember who is who. The only part that I didn't like was the issue of existing floors, it would be better if the mc had a fixed territory to establish the family and maybe even build your forces whether it's a kingdom or a sect.
can someone suggested a novel with more than a hundred chapters with similar idea like this one??
Writing Quality: The overall writing quality is good, but there are some errors and incomplete words that can be spotted. (4 stars) Story Development: The story has a slow pace and is quite boring. In the first 20 chapters, there is no fighting, only talking and romance. It would be better to classify this novel as "slice of life." (3 stars) Character Design: The main character has a likable personality, and I also enjoy his wife's interactions with him. However, some characters feel bland and lack depth. (4 stars) World Background: The author doesn't provide enough details about the world. The descriptions are limited to generic terms like "cave" and "(Mc Name) House," making it difficult to fully imagine the setting. (3 stars) Updating Stability: The author wrote a chapter mentioning that the novel is free, which shows dedication and hard work. This deserves a 5-star rating. (5 stars) Evaluation: The story is decent, but it becomes boring due to the lack of action. It feels more like a slice-of-life romance than an engaging plot. However, I won't drop the novel because of this. Note to the author: I spent 15 minutes writing this review, so please don't remove it, even if it doesn't align with your preferences. I enjoy your other novel, particularly "Stealing the Protagonist's Yandere Lovers." Keep up the good work, and I hope you continue writing it.
Loved it and i"m gonna powerstone everyday been a while since i had a new and good slice of life novel with cultivation trope. I hope the author san reads this and continues his work, i have read too many good webnovels which are actually good but have been abandoned because of not enough readers.
That is definitely one of the stories made. 140 word count, 140 word count, 140 word count, 140 word count, 140 word count, 140 word count, 140 word count.
Xenia hahaha well written character, do not drop pls................[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
If this book was a person, I would not hesitate to confess my feelings to her. It's good and addictive. Shenshan is a well designed character placed in wisely developed story. His death is not a cliche like in many transmigration novels and he is not overpowered. He earns through luck and scheming. Updates are not daily but stable. I like that. The only problem I have is about POV. The author jumps from head to head showing every character's thoughts. I think it's good when there's one camera for a scene.
Author-san, this novel is great. It made me addicted just after reading the first chapter, and without knowing I finished reading all the chapters. As a senior, please impart your word of wisdom to this humble and poor fellow Author. 🥺🙇🥰
💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Great novel and unique concept. Author do suggest some other novel with the same concept as I wait for your chap releases[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nice
am liking this a lot, clear goals and good intristing events. only grips is the update rate, and no lemons 😂🤦♂️.
I'm going to read your book because you dislike those type of novels [Ntr] and [Yuri] Expect my power stones 😭😭😭😭😭
I really love this novel 😍 ❤ ❤ ❤ . pls I need more? mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Good book, updates are slow for now but I have been enjoying it, it’s cultivation one but it doesn’t go too far in depth with all the details about cultivation like other novels which makes it a nicer and easier read, the world seems a little wonky though but overall it’s a good read, would recommend.
I lost count of how many weeks I had been searching for an interesting story to read. However, after reading the synopsis, I decided to give it a try and the story didn't disappoint me. If you're just like me that keeps searching for new things to read, try reading this. Maybe you'll experience what I did. I'll tell you what I experience after reading this story "EXCITEMENT"
This is the third book that I am writing after gaining lots of writing experience from my first two popular books. Join me as I tell you this interesting story, a fantasy which will leave you feel excited and awed. Feel free to ask any question here~
it has a very good story development I just wish you would update a lot more frequently thank you for the hard work
i just have the request to the author to release chapters regularly as you can see this story has a lot of potential
[img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update]
This story is high recommended and just love the Mc love for his wives. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️👌👌👌♥️
37... chapter? ahh.... I'll wait then, till fate bring us together again. at that time I'll give a new review, a better one.... maybe.
Chapter 24 is end for me. I cringe at plot. I'm out. It was fun, but this twist is too predictable and kill all my expectations. Good luck :)
Good story...... Waiting for it to improve more by the way. Also, What's your Discord Channel, boss?
Great Novel. Ever since i read "Tales of the Reincarnated Lord", I've always wanted to read another work like this where mc raises a family and has children. Author has no problem having a big Harem but try to work on each heroine at a time, so as not to rain women on the mc, without even gaining the reader's empathy, even if you put a lot of women, try to keep something around 15, so as not to become very large and even difficult for us readers to remember who is who. The only part that I didn't like was the issue of existing floors, it would be better if the mc had a fixed territory to establish the family and maybe even build your forces whether it's a kingdom or a sect.
can someone suggested a novel with more than a hundred chapters with similar idea like this one??
Writing Quality: The overall writing quality is good, but there are some errors and incomplete words that can be spotted. (4 stars) Story Development: The story has a slow pace and is quite boring. In the first 20 chapters, there is no fighting, only talking and romance. It would be better to classify this novel as "slice of life." (3 stars) Character Design: The main character has a likable personality, and I also enjoy his wife's interactions with him. However, some characters feel bland and lack depth. (4 stars) World Background: The author doesn't provide enough details about the world. The descriptions are limited to generic terms like "cave" and "(Mc Name) House," making it difficult to fully imagine the setting. (3 stars) Updating Stability: The author wrote a chapter mentioning that the novel is free, which shows dedication and hard work. This deserves a 5-star rating. (5 stars) Evaluation: The story is decent, but it becomes boring due to the lack of action. It feels more like a slice-of-life romance than an engaging plot. However, I won't drop the novel because of this. Note to the author: I spent 15 minutes writing this review, so please don't remove it, even if it doesn't align with your preferences. I enjoy your other novel, particularly "Stealing the Protagonist's Yandere Lovers." Keep up the good work, and I hope you continue writing it.
Loved it and i"m gonna powerstone everyday been a while since i had a new and good slice of life novel with cultivation trope. I hope the author san reads this and continues his work, i have read too many good webnovels which are actually good but have been abandoned because of not enough readers.
That is definitely one of the stories made. 140 word count, 140 word count, 140 word count, 140 word count, 140 word count, 140 word count, 140 word count.
Xenia hahaha well written character, do not drop pls................[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
If this book was a person, I would not hesitate to confess my feelings to her. It's good and addictive. Shenshan is a well designed character placed in wisely developed story. His death is not a cliche like in many transmigration novels and he is not overpowered. He earns through luck and scheming. Updates are not daily but stable. I like that. The only problem I have is about POV. The author jumps from head to head showing every character's thoughts. I think it's good when there's one camera for a scene.
Author-san, this novel is great. It made me addicted just after reading the first chapter, and without knowing I finished reading all the chapters. As a senior, please impart your word of wisdom to this humble and poor fellow Author. 🥺🙇🥰
💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Great novel and unique concept. Author do suggest some other novel with the same concept as I wait for your chap releases[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nice
am liking this a lot, clear goals and good intristing events. only grips is the update rate, and no lemons 😂🤦♂️.
I'm going to read your book because you dislike those type of novels [Ntr] and [Yuri] Expect my power stones 😭😭😭😭😭
I really love this novel 😍 ❤ ❤ ❤ . pls I need more? mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Good book, updates are slow for now but I have been enjoying it, it’s cultivation one but it doesn’t go too far in depth with all the details about cultivation like other novels which makes it a nicer and easier read, the world seems a little wonky though but overall it’s a good read, would recommend.
I lost count of how many weeks I had been searching for an interesting story to read. However, after reading the synopsis, I decided to give it a try and the story didn't disappoint me. If you're just like me that keeps searching for new things to read, try reading this. Maybe you'll experience what I did. I'll tell you what I experience after reading this story "EXCITEMENT"