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the story's really good and doesn't fall short at all compared to the authors' other stories, and my personal little favorite where the authors note at the end of the chapters as they were actually funny for once on this app, keep up the good work brotha 👏
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This is the third book from this author that I am currently reading. This book so far has flowed smoothly. The storyline progresses really well. Characters are written with a complete personality that shows in each of his books. Definitely worth the read, check it out!
My review as of right now. I am currently enjoying this story, as someone who is still making his way through the authors other work, I feel that this story has quite a few concurrent themes between that story and this one, that's not to say its bad, because regardless of a few overused cliches centered on the protagonists looks, they do not detract from the story in any way.I have noticed maybe one or two grammatical faults as or the latest chapter, but none that are immersion breaking as they are very minor. So far, the only part of the story that I'm not overly fond of, is the fact the the protagonists name changes to something that I feel doesn't really flow as well as his original name, which in the grand scheme of things is more of a personal gripe, than a fault with the story because the author explained the reason for the change and the lore behind the new name in a way that keeps it accurate withing the world itself. In conclusion, I'm very much enjoying my time with this story, it's characters are entertaining and it's world interesting.
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this is a masterpiece, same as your other novels, I'm glad that you got the idea of writing this and please don't quit writing the novel
Normally i don't review as if i do it's either long winded or oddly short so today, it'll be memey, is good yes? ( yes it's very good you should read it )
I just came from reading demonic dragon and I have to say this is great loving the character progression and am wondering if he is going to become apart of the war or if he is going to be more on the sidelines becaus I haven’t seen alot of assassin type MCs from your other books s I’m going I have the feeling going to enjoy this
Really good novel!! I love this persons novels and I think this one is definitely my favorite, I finished it in one go it was all great! The whole being the last of his kind and his personality is so likeable to me is all perfect. I just hope you will be updating more often!
after reading first demonic dragon,I had a lot of expectations for this novel and I'm glad i haven't been disappointed 😊... Authorsama we need more chapters and regular release 💙💙💙
Came here from demonic dragon, Im gonna be honest I really do like this book, it has good pacing and overall has enough information to make it interesting. My only issue is the update schedule I really want to read more but 4 chapters every week isn’t enough for me, I do recommend this book tho
came here from the authors previous novel "first demonic dragon", and I must say i was not disappointed, so far, imo, can't find anything wrong or to dislike about this novel, I just need more chapters. highly recommend giving it a read, 9/10 so far.
the story's really good and doesn't fall short at all compared to the authors' other stories, and my personal little favorite where the authors note at the end of the chapters as they were actually funny for once on this app, keep up the good work brotha 👏
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This is the third book from this author that I am currently reading. This book so far has flowed smoothly. The storyline progresses really well. Characters are written with a complete personality that shows in each of his books. Definitely worth the read, check it out!
My review as of right now. I am currently enjoying this story, as someone who is still making his way through the authors other work, I feel that this story has quite a few concurrent themes between that story and this one, that's not to say its bad, because regardless of a few overused cliches centered on the protagonists looks, they do not detract from the story in any way.I have noticed maybe one or two grammatical faults as or the latest chapter, but none that are immersion breaking as they are very minor. So far, the only part of the story that I'm not overly fond of, is the fact the the protagonists name changes to something that I feel doesn't really flow as well as his original name, which in the grand scheme of things is more of a personal gripe, than a fault with the story because the author explained the reason for the change and the lore behind the new name in a way that keeps it accurate withing the world itself. In conclusion, I'm very much enjoying my time with this story, it's characters are entertaining and it's world interesting.
揭示劇透 this is a masterpiece, same as your other novels, I'm glad that you got the idea of writing this and please don't quit writing the novel
Normally i don't review as if i do it's either long winded or oddly short so today, it'll be memey, is good yes? ( yes it's very good you should read it )
I just came from reading demonic dragon and I have to say this is great loving the character progression and am wondering if he is going to become apart of the war or if he is going to be more on the sidelines becaus I haven’t seen alot of assassin type MCs from your other books s I’m going I have the feeling going to enjoy this
Really good novel!! I love this persons novels and I think this one is definitely my favorite, I finished it in one go it was all great! The whole being the last of his kind and his personality is so likeable to me is all perfect. I just hope you will be updating more often!
after reading first demonic dragon,I had a lot of expectations for this novel and I'm glad i haven't been disappointed 😊... Authorsama we need more chapters and regular release 💙💙💙
Came here from demonic dragon, Im gonna be honest I really do like this book, it has good pacing and overall has enough information to make it interesting. My only issue is the update schedule I really want to read more but 4 chapters every week isn’t enough for me, I do recommend this book tho
came here from the authors previous novel "first demonic dragon", and I must say i was not disappointed, so far, imo, can't find anything wrong or to dislike about this novel, I just need more chapters. highly recommend giving it a read, 9/10 so far.
I like powerful mc and the romance is great so ……. Yay!