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Demon_Of_Lust

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M7md_Star

this the the most well written ff i ever read unless another one is released this will at the top of my list this was a roller coaster to say the least the story was smooth the character development was apparent i just didn't really like that you abondoned the idea of writing more about the fairy tail world but its kind of understand you killed off the final boss if the entire thing early so yeah and i didnt Really like that you gave important characters no screen time at all like the original set of protagonists really became just background characters like natsu ,Lucy, gray,luxas and etc and you Really didn't do an epilogue it would have been nice to have one but all in all it was an excellent read to be honest so in my book that's 5 stars

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Godsreader_15

Ok bruh imma keep this real short. The story pre canon has a lot of personality. OC and his powers are balanced, the fights are good and the plot develops nicely. This all somehow changes after the timeskip to canon where author does like 3 short chapters with timestamps of events that would have been really cool to see. Then after canon starts it just seems like MC lost all of his character and braincells. I stopped at chap. 98 but I could feel how it would continue already. The sad thing is that I had this novel saved for a long time and had anticipated much more than this. Suffice to say that despite it's downfall the pre-timeskip arcs were rather wonderful -> OVR: 4.0/5

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5mth
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Deuteragonista

Una nueva y entretenida historia por parte del Cuervo. Me parecio un poco forzado y apresurado el final, ademas de que me hubiera gustado que el cuervo en si tuviera un poco mas de participacion, aportando algunos de sus habilidades al MC, pero aun asi fue una buena historia.

5mth
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DaoistBjmNT3

idk i got to like 130 or sum and i don't care about this anymore seeing as adam is the only important character and he's the only one able to fight every big bad because "only he can"😒i can't even root for him because he "has" to win alone. That's not fairy tail imo🤷‍♂️

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Chaoseer

Read about 10 chapters. Story decent. but forced character development, really?

6mth
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ludwing_zamora

me gusta la historia, pero no sabia que hay un limite de palabras minimo para comentar aqui

8mth
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Daoist239562

Really enjoyed this novel, the pacing was a bit rushed at the end and more screen time could have been given to the original cast of fairy tail...but I like how the author merged the two different concepts and made it look natural and not forced. All in all I enjoyed my experience and look forward to your future novels author. Thank you for creating a good piece ☺️ I m cheering for you

8mth
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Gold_Phoenix777

Muy buena historia, la historia de fondo del protagonista es muy completa y está muy bien hecha. También me gustó mucho el crecimiento de los personajes, no solo el protagonista, sino también otros personajes como Laxus o Gildarts. El desarrollo de la historia también está muy bien hecho y el trasfondo para el viaje entre mundos no fue para nada forzado. El romance estuvo decente, aunque lento para mi gusto. Además, es una opinión personal pero me hubiera gustado ver un romance con Mavis ya que lo acompañó toda la historia, o al menos un harem(como dije esto no es una critica sino una opinión personal). Lo único que tengo para criticar es la falta de un epilogo(cuando escribo esto pasó 1 mes desde el ultimo capitulo así que lo pudieron haber subido después) y algunas escenas que omitiste o explicaste por encima que me hubiera gustado ver como el reencuentro entre Adam y la gente de Tenro que lo creían muerto, el reencuentro entre Ur y Ultear o lo que pasó con la maldición de Mavis y Zeref, ademas que le diste cierta relevancia a Irene en la historia pero después se olvidó, creo que aunque se concluyó todo el asunto en el mundo de Bleach, todavía podías agregar varias cosas al mundo de Fairy Tail.

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Wise_AF

I love and hate this story, a classical Cornbringer to the point you can almost play bingo with his tropes and clichés... This story is equivalent to using the highest-quality ingredients on the market and a professional kitchen to make a cake. You spend hours on preparation and mixing only to get distracted by a squirrel behind a window and wander away, then come back few hours later and decide to continue by pouring a masterly done dough into old shoes and shoving it into a far too hot oven and yet somehow taking it out raw inside... Great story and characters, rushed tempo in the second half, and an outright painful ending... still worth a read I would say.

9mth
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Nishi_Patel_9666

I really like it. Would prefer a page showing his abilities at the end as it gets a little confusing but other than that it’s almost perfect. 🙂

9mth
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Boqpsn
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Can i ask you something author, I can understand that you like to give your MC a lot of plot armor, and i mean a lot or maybe all the time…., and i am okay with that, but cant you keep some hidden move or secret power in the MC which only the MC knows and not anyone else. I mean , in all the part of the story , everything is known about the MC to everyone , every move he makes , every power he has , etc. its like , he is not an MC but some character dancing like a puppet in someones hand all the time in the novel. He doesn’t even use his knowledge of fairy tale in the story for his advantage. It’s really frustrating . I like you writing quality a lot , but create a plot for the story is not your strong suit. Also his emotions, they change on drop . He feels like mentally challenged and not the type with terrible past, but actually genuinely emotionally challenged person!! I love your other work on the marvel and other story.. keep up the good work … I read your story because of your impeccable writing quality.. don’t loose that!! Thanks and best of luck!!

10mth
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Galaxy_Girl24

Good story……………………………… ……………………………………,,,

10mth
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the_acromancer

it's been a wonderful journey sir corn thank you for this creation

10mth
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Osiris_Dawns

If you want a good fanfic, this is it. The fanfic has already ended and Cornbringer has started a new fanfic already. One thing I do dislike is that there isn't an epilogue. Adam(?) just goes home and the story ends there, we don't get a chapter letting us know if he is still the same after absorbing the soul kind and the others, or if he left ezra and fairy tail or not due to being a new person of sorts. Still a great story, an absolutely must read, but the ending left more to be desired, even if it is just for a single chapter.

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MasterOfLight

Just love it... your writing is my favorite... The story is always top-notch... Keep up the good work... Thank you for taking the time to write a story...[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=fp]

10mth
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npc28
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A master piece of art, I only wish I waited for it to finish before I read it. The ending is amazing the characters feel alive, the fight scenes are amazing especially the ending scenes. This is staying in my library forever so that in the future I can look at this and remember this master piece

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KingOfWaves

Cornbringer you have once again shown me the light I bow before your greatness. Love your work’s especially cold paths. Give us more………….. please!!!!!!! P.S. Don’t care about the haters as long as you write I will read we the cornbringer loyal fans shall never falter. [img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]

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TheMudkipHomie

The author fell off so hard recently, he just lies and makes promises he can’t keep , The quality as well has been consistently deteriorating l.

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Hydra_Gairum

Hey Corn, pls do reply, I'm confused why you didn't accept a contract. Sort of seems like a charity work, for how well you write, you can learn lot of money..... There are plenty of people who would support you. So why are you giving a free ticket to something this good????

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Epic_Gaming_7548

i really like the novel, ive only read like half so far but it's top 2 for fairy tale fics. with that said some questions does she know how to make a hogyoku? and i haven't seen thousand year blood war but is there a second release or something? also second magic origin? does he get it with bankai or does he develop like second magic or just neither. thats all, thanks, i really like the book

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Crem_Y
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Fairy tail fan fics all have so much potential, this one was one of the best I have ever read. While web-novel stories are nefarious for their ‘plot’ and mc, this one was not and the author had a actual goal of writting a story which turned out to be amazing. The story was amazing because Adam as a character is well written for a fic like this one and also had in own struggles which I don’t see often. But to summarize this fic, it was great and paced very well in the beginning and characters were written amazingly.

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Servydaos

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1yr
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Erif_Red_hair

one of my fav's and also made me laugh every time

1yr
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Daoist5RvI4q

So happy back to fairytale didn’t like bleach as much

1yr
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Daoistnff2Xl

Me parece una gran historia!!!!!!!!!!!!; 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

1yr
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Hyraken

Can you write a Blue Lock fic, I really like the way you write and I want to read my favourite manga in you words. If possible please try it.

1yr
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DaoistElxnbZ

When will there be a sequel to Avatar ColdPaths?................................................................................................................

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Demon_Of_Lust

No harem? OK[img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless]

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M7md_Star

this the the most well written ff i ever read unless another one is released this will at the top of my list this was a roller coaster to say the least the story was smooth the character development was apparent i just didn't really like that you abondoned the idea of writing more about the fairy tail world but its kind of understand you killed off the final boss if the entire thing early so yeah and i didnt Really like that you gave important characters no screen time at all like the original set of protagonists really became just background characters like natsu ,Lucy, gray,luxas and etc and you Really didn't do an epilogue it would have been nice to have one but all in all it was an excellent read to be honest so in my book that's 5 stars

1mth
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Godsreader_15

Ok bruh imma keep this real short. The story pre canon has a lot of personality. OC and his powers are balanced, the fights are good and the plot develops nicely. This all somehow changes after the timeskip to canon where author does like 3 short chapters with timestamps of events that would have been really cool to see. Then after canon starts it just seems like MC lost all of his character and braincells. I stopped at chap. 98 but I could feel how it would continue already. The sad thing is that I had this novel saved for a long time and had anticipated much more than this. Suffice to say that despite it's downfall the pre-timeskip arcs were rather wonderful -> OVR: 4.0/5

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Deuteragonista

Una nueva y entretenida historia por parte del Cuervo. Me parecio un poco forzado y apresurado el final, ademas de que me hubiera gustado que el cuervo en si tuviera un poco mas de participacion, aportando algunos de sus habilidades al MC, pero aun asi fue una buena historia.

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DaoistBjmNT3

idk i got to like 130 or sum and i don't care about this anymore seeing as adam is the only important character and he's the only one able to fight every big bad because "only he can"😒i can't even root for him because he "has" to win alone. That's not fairy tail imo🤷‍♂️

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Chaoseer

Read about 10 chapters. Story decent. but forced character development, really?

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ludwing_zamora

me gusta la historia, pero no sabia que hay un limite de palabras minimo para comentar aqui

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Daoist239562

Really enjoyed this novel, the pacing was a bit rushed at the end and more screen time could have been given to the original cast of fairy tail...but I like how the author merged the two different concepts and made it look natural and not forced. All in all I enjoyed my experience and look forward to your future novels author. Thank you for creating a good piece ☺️ I m cheering for you

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Gold_Phoenix777

Muy buena historia, la historia de fondo del protagonista es muy completa y está muy bien hecha. También me gustó mucho el crecimiento de los personajes, no solo el protagonista, sino también otros personajes como Laxus o Gildarts. El desarrollo de la historia también está muy bien hecho y el trasfondo para el viaje entre mundos no fue para nada forzado. El romance estuvo decente, aunque lento para mi gusto. Además, es una opinión personal pero me hubiera gustado ver un romance con Mavis ya que lo acompañó toda la historia, o al menos un harem(como dije esto no es una critica sino una opinión personal). Lo único que tengo para criticar es la falta de un epilogo(cuando escribo esto pasó 1 mes desde el ultimo capitulo así que lo pudieron haber subido después) y algunas escenas que omitiste o explicaste por encima que me hubiera gustado ver como el reencuentro entre Adam y la gente de Tenro que lo creían muerto, el reencuentro entre Ur y Ultear o lo que pasó con la maldición de Mavis y Zeref, ademas que le diste cierta relevancia a Irene en la historia pero después se olvidó, creo que aunque se concluyó todo el asunto en el mundo de Bleach, todavía podías agregar varias cosas al mundo de Fairy Tail.

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Wise_AF

I love and hate this story, a classical Cornbringer to the point you can almost play bingo with his tropes and clichés... This story is equivalent to using the highest-quality ingredients on the market and a professional kitchen to make a cake. You spend hours on preparation and mixing only to get distracted by a squirrel behind a window and wander away, then come back few hours later and decide to continue by pouring a masterly done dough into old shoes and shoving it into a far too hot oven and yet somehow taking it out raw inside... Great story and characters, rushed tempo in the second half, and an outright painful ending... still worth a read I would say.

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Nishi_Patel_9666

I really like it. Would prefer a page showing his abilities at the end as it gets a little confusing but other than that it’s almost perfect. 🙂

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Boqpsn
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Can i ask you something author, I can understand that you like to give your MC a lot of plot armor, and i mean a lot or maybe all the time…., and i am okay with that, but cant you keep some hidden move or secret power in the MC which only the MC knows and not anyone else. I mean , in all the part of the story , everything is known about the MC to everyone , every move he makes , every power he has , etc. its like , he is not an MC but some character dancing like a puppet in someones hand all the time in the novel. He doesn’t even use his knowledge of fairy tale in the story for his advantage. It’s really frustrating . I like you writing quality a lot , but create a plot for the story is not your strong suit. Also his emotions, they change on drop . He feels like mentally challenged and not the type with terrible past, but actually genuinely emotionally challenged person!! I love your other work on the marvel and other story.. keep up the good work … I read your story because of your impeccable writing quality.. don’t loose that!! Thanks and best of luck!!

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Galaxy_Girl24

Good story……………………………… ……………………………………,,,

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the_acromancer

it's been a wonderful journey sir corn thank you for this creation

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Osiris_Dawns

If you want a good fanfic, this is it. The fanfic has already ended and Cornbringer has started a new fanfic already. One thing I do dislike is that there isn't an epilogue. Adam(?) just goes home and the story ends there, we don't get a chapter letting us know if he is still the same after absorbing the soul kind and the others, or if he left ezra and fairy tail or not due to being a new person of sorts. Still a great story, an absolutely must read, but the ending left more to be desired, even if it is just for a single chapter.

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MasterOfLight

Just love it... your writing is my favorite... The story is always top-notch... Keep up the good work... Thank you for taking the time to write a story...[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=fp]

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npc28
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A master piece of art, I only wish I waited for it to finish before I read it. The ending is amazing the characters feel alive, the fight scenes are amazing especially the ending scenes. This is staying in my library forever so that in the future I can look at this and remember this master piece

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KingOfWaves

Cornbringer you have once again shown me the light I bow before your greatness. Love your work’s especially cold paths. Give us more………….. please!!!!!!! P.S. Don’t care about the haters as long as you write I will read we the cornbringer loyal fans shall never falter. [img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]

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TheMudkipHomie

The author fell off so hard recently, he just lies and makes promises he can’t keep , The quality as well has been consistently deteriorating l.

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Hydra_Gairum

Hey Corn, pls do reply, I'm confused why you didn't accept a contract. Sort of seems like a charity work, for how well you write, you can learn lot of money..... There are plenty of people who would support you. So why are you giving a free ticket to something this good????

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Epic_Gaming_7548

i really like the novel, ive only read like half so far but it's top 2 for fairy tale fics. with that said some questions does she know how to make a hogyoku? and i haven't seen thousand year blood war but is there a second release or something? also second magic origin? does he get it with bankai or does he develop like second magic or just neither. thats all, thanks, i really like the book

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Crem_Y
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Fairy tail fan fics all have so much potential, this one was one of the best I have ever read. While web-novel stories are nefarious for their ‘plot’ and mc, this one was not and the author had a actual goal of writting a story which turned out to be amazing. The story was amazing because Adam as a character is well written for a fic like this one and also had in own struggles which I don’t see often. But to summarize this fic, it was great and paced very well in the beginning and characters were written amazingly.

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Servydaos

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Erif_Red_hair

one of my fav's and also made me laugh every time

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Daoist5RvI4q

So happy back to fairytale didn’t like bleach as much

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Daoistnff2Xl

Me parece una gran historia!!!!!!!!!!!!; 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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Hyraken

Can you write a Blue Lock fic, I really like the way you write and I want to read my favourite manga in you words. If possible please try it.

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DaoistElxnbZ

When will there be a sequel to Avatar ColdPaths?................................................................................................................

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