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Hey witness, I'm going to make some videos of novels and fics narrated in Spanish, and I wanted to know if you would mind if I uploaded your novel? Of course I'll give the respective credits and everything.
Pretty good but it is a bit boring at many points. The fights and character interactions but it just feels like it is missing something, original lotm had the tarot club meetings that made you want to keep reading despite all the exposition, explanations and boring things, this story has all that that but lacks that “tarot club” aspect (doesn’t need to be an actual tarot club, but I feel a fanfic of lotm needs something similiar)
For me,this is my Best lotm fanfic so far. Character building is my favorite part ,I like the way adrayn acted, More like scammer than a clown. In part of writting that is good ,Even my bad english could read it smoothly. Downside of this novel?.. The named of Adrayn's beyonder items are so hard to remember When author came back to compose this story. Something tell me that i should write the review. Sorry for my bad english. I cant wait to read next chapter.👍
I have to say it's one of the best fanfics out there based on LOTM. The journey of the MC from the start to what he has become recently is a joy to watch. Thank you so much for the story👏
يجدر بك الأستمرار يا صديقي بشكل موسف لم يعد هناك الكثير من روايات "LOTM" أامتى أن تستمر و أقرأ هذه الرواية الرائعة و شكرا لك على مجهودك تحية لك من الشرق الأوسط
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Awesome, why didn't I find this fanfic earlier?. Each chapter makes me enter the story, the author also doesn't forget the mystery in it Saya dari indonesia! Ayo baca buku ini, menyenangkan melihat fanfic LOTM memiliki banyak bab seperti ini. Ah! Saya juga sudah mendukung penulis.
an interesting read if you have patience, I know it's a lotm fanfic but it's still a fanfic, the author dumps a lot of useless stuff at the beginning and forces many situations that shouldn't happen, besides making the mc be very stupid and putting elements that they are not from lotm, in fact sometimes it doesn't even feel like I'm reading a lotm fanfic since the way the author makes the characters interact is nothing like, really it's victorian england and all the characters are called by their first name name without even knowing each other, the mc should have continued at sea, there was no reason for him to go backlund.
Aku sangat menyukai ini, sangat bagus. Dari chapter awal hingga sampai saat ini tidak ada yang membuatku merasa ini ff yang buruk. Aku hanya berharap MC tidak menjadi genderbender, dan tetap menjadi pria.
Review: Writing Quality: 4 stars, it starts off okay with a few errors a chapter but it gradually improves to at most 1 error a chapter or 2 rarely. Stability of Updates: 5 stars, the author is consistent with when he updates his chapters. Story Development: 4 stars it starts off a little confusing but maybe that's because I finished LOTM 1 ages ago and am reading LOTM 2 right now. Character Design: 4 stars the author is great in how he expresses characters but sometimes he can have trouble expressing character's emotions, though he develops his character's amazing especially the MC. World Background: 5 stars (Its Lord of The Mysteries what ya expect?) Overall Rating: 4.4 stars out of 5, would reccomend.
Easily the best lotm fanfic I've ever read. It's originally in english too meaning that there aren't any wierd translations and no machine translation. The MC is very interesting and his hax are all in-universe. There's no such cheat the MC has that feels unfair or like it doesn't fit in the verse
I am in chapter 197 It is good, but the progression is slow he rushed Hunter and Provoker but his drug in Pyromaniac for a while when he will promote to Conspirer.
Hahahahahahahahah Chapter 198 is my favorite chapter gahahagahahahahaa This is one of the best lotm fanfic Kudos for you
I really like this fanfiction, it's a pity that the powers of the MC and the plot itself are a little slow, but I think that I'm just used to a faster pace, I hope you (the author) will be fine and you will continue to write this fanfic
very good fanfic. but I've noticed that it's slowly turning into one of those books that claim to be non harem but have almost all female characters it's ruining the LoTM feel of the book
Good fan-fiction. Please continue, there are too few lord of Mysteries fan-fiction. Keep writing.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
this could have been much better, don't get me wrong it's a fun read it it just could have been much better, but regardless I still thank the author for this one
Estou no capítulo 155 e sinceramente essa é a melhor fanfic de LOTM que eu li, A construção de mundo e as interações dos personagens dão vida a história, o formato de escrita é parecido com o LOTM mesmo e tem uma boa estabilidade de atualização. (Essa coisa do MC ser gay é fake e além de usar como um tema cômico foi feito para dar um peso maior a amizade, da mesma forma que não importa se quem morrer não for muito próximo do MC)
It is sooooo good! I cannot express it with words! This is the best LOTM fanfic i have ever read! I hope author wouldn't stop this midway because this is too good!
If you are searching for a good fic of LOTM that conserves the magic of the novel and bringd its own role, this is tour lecture
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Hello guys Author here. First I want to say thank you very much for your support, this continues to motivate me to write this story. I want to say that I am not a professional and I am just a fan writing for fans. I planned to see this story through to the end so I hope you enjoy along the way.
5/5 stars can t wait for the next chp. awesome fanfic i just hope u are not going to drop it also can t help but as is he going to have a love interest ?
Without a doubt the greatest LOTM fanfic which i have ever seen. The story itself is great, not just simply following cannon blindly, the main character actily feels alive
Hey witness, I'm going to make some videos of novels and fics narrated in Spanish, and I wanted to know if you would mind if I uploaded your novel? Of course I'll give the respective credits and everything.
Pretty good but it is a bit boring at many points. The fights and character interactions but it just feels like it is missing something, original lotm had the tarot club meetings that made you want to keep reading despite all the exposition, explanations and boring things, this story has all that that but lacks that “tarot club” aspect (doesn’t need to be an actual tarot club, but I feel a fanfic of lotm needs something similiar)
For me,this is my Best lotm fanfic so far. Character building is my favorite part ,I like the way adrayn acted, More like scammer than a clown. In part of writting that is good ,Even my bad english could read it smoothly. Downside of this novel?.. The named of Adrayn's beyonder items are so hard to remember When author came back to compose this story. Something tell me that i should write the review. Sorry for my bad english. I cant wait to read next chapter.👍
I have to say it's one of the best fanfics out there based on LOTM. The journey of the MC from the start to what he has become recently is a joy to watch. Thank you so much for the story👏
يجدر بك الأستمرار يا صديقي بشكل موسف لم يعد هناك الكثير من روايات "LOTM" أامتى أن تستمر و أقرأ هذه الرواية الرائعة و شكرا لك على مجهودك تحية لك من الشرق الأوسط
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Awesome, why didn't I find this fanfic earlier?. Each chapter makes me enter the story, the author also doesn't forget the mystery in it Saya dari indonesia! Ayo baca buku ini, menyenangkan melihat fanfic LOTM memiliki banyak bab seperti ini. Ah! Saya juga sudah mendukung penulis.
an interesting read if you have patience, I know it's a lotm fanfic but it's still a fanfic, the author dumps a lot of useless stuff at the beginning and forces many situations that shouldn't happen, besides making the mc be very stupid and putting elements that they are not from lotm, in fact sometimes it doesn't even feel like I'm reading a lotm fanfic since the way the author makes the characters interact is nothing like, really it's victorian england and all the characters are called by their first name name without even knowing each other, the mc should have continued at sea, there was no reason for him to go backlund.
Aku sangat menyukai ini, sangat bagus. Dari chapter awal hingga sampai saat ini tidak ada yang membuatku merasa ini ff yang buruk. Aku hanya berharap MC tidak menjadi genderbender, dan tetap menjadi pria.
Review: Writing Quality: 4 stars, it starts off okay with a few errors a chapter but it gradually improves to at most 1 error a chapter or 2 rarely. Stability of Updates: 5 stars, the author is consistent with when he updates his chapters. Story Development: 4 stars it starts off a little confusing but maybe that's because I finished LOTM 1 ages ago and am reading LOTM 2 right now. Character Design: 4 stars the author is great in how he expresses characters but sometimes he can have trouble expressing character's emotions, though he develops his character's amazing especially the MC. World Background: 5 stars (Its Lord of The Mysteries what ya expect?) Overall Rating: 4.4 stars out of 5, would reccomend.
Easily the best lotm fanfic I've ever read. It's originally in english too meaning that there aren't any wierd translations and no machine translation. The MC is very interesting and his hax are all in-universe. There's no such cheat the MC has that feels unfair or like it doesn't fit in the verse
I am in chapter 197 It is good, but the progression is slow he rushed Hunter and Provoker but his drug in Pyromaniac for a while when he will promote to Conspirer.
Hahahahahahahahah Chapter 198 is my favorite chapter gahahagahahahahaa This is one of the best lotm fanfic Kudos for you
I really like this fanfiction, it's a pity that the powers of the MC and the plot itself are a little slow, but I think that I'm just used to a faster pace, I hope you (the author) will be fine and you will continue to write this fanfic
very good fanfic. but I've noticed that it's slowly turning into one of those books that claim to be non harem but have almost all female characters it's ruining the LoTM feel of the book
Good fan-fiction. Please continue, there are too few lord of Mysteries fan-fiction. Keep writing.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
this could have been much better, don't get me wrong it's a fun read it it just could have been much better, but regardless I still thank the author for this one
Estou no capítulo 155 e sinceramente essa é a melhor fanfic de LOTM que eu li, A construção de mundo e as interações dos personagens dão vida a história, o formato de escrita é parecido com o LOTM mesmo e tem uma boa estabilidade de atualização. (Essa coisa do MC ser gay é fake e além de usar como um tema cômico foi feito para dar um peso maior a amizade, da mesma forma que não importa se quem morrer não for muito próximo do MC)
It is sooooo good! I cannot express it with words! This is the best LOTM fanfic i have ever read! I hope author wouldn't stop this midway because this is too good!
If you are searching for a good fic of LOTM that conserves the magic of the novel and bringd its own role, this is tour lecture
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Hello guys Author here. First I want to say thank you very much for your support, this continues to motivate me to write this story. I want to say that I am not a professional and I am just a fan writing for fans. I planned to see this story through to the end so I hope you enjoy along the way.
5/5 stars can t wait for the next chp. awesome fanfic i just hope u are not going to drop it also can t help but as is he going to have a love interest ?
Without a doubt the greatest LOTM fanfic which i have ever seen. The story itself is great, not just simply following cannon blindly, the main character actily feels alive
el mc es gay? y si si es ponelo en las etiquetas porfavor