2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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It is a pretty good book so far but kinda short and need more chapters and hopefully wont be a disappointment like some other novels and then i will just spam can i cant be bothered to write a proper review
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It's got a few flaws as one would expect from a new writer. That said thos flaws will diminish as the writer hones their craft. If the writer keeps with this story then I anticipate a decently enjoyable story to be written
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It is a pretty good book so far but kinda short and need more chapters and hopefully wont be a disappointment like some other novels and then i will just spam can i cant be bothered to write a proper review
It's got a few flaws as one would expect from a new writer. That said thos flaws will diminish as the writer hones their craft. If the writer keeps with this story then I anticipate a decently enjoyable story to be written