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The story is great. there is nothing more to say about the book as it is interesting and worth reading, except that the first 1/2 chapters were quite boring to me . ...but later the story is great. Just one request to the author is to make the mc more heartily (like kill the ones who deserve it but don't harm the unlucky ones. There is one tip from me that since the mc has god mode why not use a karma system and decide whom to kill.) Just keep the story at the same pace PLEASE DON'T DROP IT.
The story is great. there is nothing more to say about the book as it is interesting and worth reading, except that the first 1/2 chapters were quite boring to me . ...but later the story is great. Just one request to the author is to make the mc more heartily (like kill the ones who deserve it but don't harm the unlucky ones. There is one tip from me that since the mc has god mode why not use a karma system and decide whom to kill.) Just keep the story at the same pace PLEASE DON'T DROP IT.