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Is this a Harem? Cuz the 100 is like a breeding ground for it if the MC is capable since none of the girls have a good relationship in this cuz they either have to kill their partner or they die!
Shameless review from the author here. Everyone else does it so why not. Anyway give me your honest reviews of the story [img=recommend]
grammar needs work use these "sup" for conversation and this 'thoughts' and these for him thinking it's hard to understand.
Is this a Harem? Cuz the 100 is like a breeding ground for it if the MC is capable since none of the girls have a good relationship in this cuz they either have to kill their partner or they die!
Shameless review from the author here. Everyone else does it so why not. Anyway give me your honest reviews of the story [img=recommend]
grammar needs work use these "sup" for conversation and this 'thoughts' and these for him thinking it's hard to understand.