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This story is very good so far, I really like the cuteness of it but also the deep background that's being provided for the characters. I'm happy to be asking questions to myself as the story moves forward and then get an answer as I read. The writing is pretty good with some minor errors here and there, and the world could have a little more detail, however I don't fault the story at all. I find this story to be really pleasant so far and judging by the release timeframe from the author I will be glued to this. Worthwhile read!
This story is very good so far, I really like the cuteness of it but also the deep background that's being provided for the characters. I'm happy to be asking questions to myself as the story moves forward and then get an answer as I read. The writing is pretty good with some minor errors here and there, and the world could have a little more detail, however I don't fault the story at all. I find this story to be really pleasant so far and judging by the release timeframe from the author I will be glued to this. Worthwhile read!