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It’s a decent story but overall it is just a worse version of the first one, it takes half the story to complete the first gold list which is crazy, and what is even the point of the gold list in this when Rohan just trains his students in 2 seconds?
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The fic is written well but there is no meaning to the golden list if Rifan just raises his disciples in 2sec and keep challenging the members of the list and all that items Rifan gives his disciples is alot then what he gets from it so yeah it's trash( there should not be a time-chamber or The things he gives to his disciples then this fic would have been really good but now here most of his disciples are being as strong as the god of ninjas in just 2sec ( 2years in time-chamber ) so yeah it does not have appeal ) so it's not for me
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So long.....😥😭i cant this long ...why you nat any chapter yet😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I remember reading a bit into One Piece Golden List and now I tried out this one. And well, once again I feel like novel would be 10x times better if Rifan didn't exist and we just had the golden list making a mess of the world with it's rewards and the actual characters being the main focus. Instead once again, it's just a wave after wave of highlights for Rifan and his disciple harem. It's get boring rather quickly and it feels even worse in Naruto world than it did in One Piece.
Sir Author can I ask how many gold list you created and how many it has, I like to ask before joining your patreon
loved the first story. this one is aweso.e aswell.Atwell.. At the end it would be awesome if Rifan went to Fairytail world or something else as exciting.
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Didn't finish the other book because of repeditiveness, won't finish this one because of the same reason as well.But the story is not bad in the first few chapters. It all seems so new and pretty cool. But after hearing so many, "Rifan is number 1" you would get too tired and quit.Id have liked this story more if it had a weak protagonist who grows slowly, or didn't have a protagonist at all.
Come from other novel, it better then a lot of other trash translator out there, nowaday you can’t even understand wth are they saying
Yooooo! I’m from the previous work, and I just have to say that I know this is gonna be a banger!!! I love the author’s work and stories. If u read this, I compell you to give the story a try and read the previous work in one piece. P.s It’s worth it!
again, thanks for this. I am re-reading this since the raws have not been updating since ch 1000+
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Hello Author, What Happen? Hiatus? Please Update or make some announcement🤔
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Would be alright to start reading this know or do i have to read the one piece novel and than continue reading this? -----------------------
2 5 3 4 4 ⭐ Karin 9 ??? Mean Naruto Sasuke Hinata should same age because Hinata around 3-4 year only at this time. Naruto timeline should error around 1-2 year only because Naruto anime manga already ends.
Lumayan Min kalau bisa langsung lebih bagus lagi min lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut lanjut dan lanjutkan Min semangat semangat semangat semangat semangat semangat semangat semangat semangat semangat semangat semangat Min buat cerita nya yah
It’s a decent story but overall it is just a worse version of the first one, it takes half the story to complete the first gold list which is crazy, and what is even the point of the gold list in this when Rohan just trains his students in 2 seconds?
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i lik this.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The fic is written well but there is no meaning to the golden list if Rifan just raises his disciples in 2sec and keep challenging the members of the list and all that items Rifan gives his disciples is alot then what he gets from it so yeah it's trash( there should not be a time-chamber or The things he gives to his disciples then this fic would have been really good but now here most of his disciples are being as strong as the god of ninjas in just 2sec ( 2years in time-chamber ) so yeah it does not have appeal ) so it's not for me
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So long.....😥😭i cant this long ...why you nat any chapter yet😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I remember reading a bit into One Piece Golden List and now I tried out this one. And well, once again I feel like novel would be 10x times better if Rifan didn't exist and we just had the golden list making a mess of the world with it's rewards and the actual characters being the main focus. Instead once again, it's just a wave after wave of highlights for Rifan and his disciple harem. It's get boring rather quickly and it feels even worse in Naruto world than it did in One Piece.
Sir Author can I ask how many gold list you created and how many it has, I like to ask before joining your patreon
loved the first story. this one is aweso.e aswell.Atwell.. At the end it would be awesome if Rifan went to Fairytail world or something else as exciting.
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Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
揭示劇透 Didn't finish the other book because of repeditiveness, won't finish this one because of the same reason as well.But the story is not bad in the first few chapters. It all seems so new and pretty cool. But after hearing so many, "Rifan is number 1" you would get too tired and quit.Id have liked this story more if it had a weak protagonist who grows slowly, or didn't have a protagonist at all.
Come from other novel, it better then a lot of other trash translator out there, nowaday you can’t even understand wth are they saying
Yooooo! I’m from the previous work, and I just have to say that I know this is gonna be a banger!!! I love the author’s work and stories. If u read this, I compell you to give the story a try and read the previous work in one piece. P.s It’s worth it!
again, thanks for this. I am re-reading this since the raws have not been updating since ch 1000+
good story... i like the direction of this story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hello Author, What Happen? Hiatus? Please Update or make some announcement🤔
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
揭示劇透 Would be alright to start reading this know or do i have to read the one piece novel and than continue reading this? -----------------------
2 5 3 4 4 ⭐ Karin 9 ??? Mean Naruto Sasuke Hinata should same age because Hinata around 3-4 year only at this time. Naruto timeline should error around 1-2 year only because Naruto anime manga already ends.