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I enjoyed reading this novel and I love the character's names and the story development.Need more author.
if you hate spoilers, don't peak 😉 Marcel is suspicious! that's all I got to say but she won't last either, hehe
揭示劇透
so far it's nice. I really want to read others like this. Author come on, more update. 🥴🥴
This is a really good book. the story's progressing quite well and I really enjoy it
Great story so far with little to almost no grammar mistakes. Although not much is shown of the world, the characters came out perfectly...
I enjoyed reading this novel and I love the character's names and the story development.Need more author.
if you hate spoilers, don't peak 😉 Marcel is suspicious! that's all I got to say but she won't last either, hehe
揭示劇透 so far it's nice. I really want to read others like this. Author come on, more update. 🥴🥴
This is a really good book. the story's progressing quite well and I really enjoy it
Great story so far with little to almost no grammar mistakes. Although not much is shown of the world, the characters came out perfectly...