/ Anime & Comics / Rise of the Common Devil [DXD FanFic]
摘要
Finding himself, as a servant in a manor, wasn't how Ryuu was expecting to spend his twilight years. But as one would expect from a former mercenary he adapted quickly to his new surroundings.
It wasn't until he found out the name of the family he now serves, that he understood just how unusual his situation really is.
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A/N: I claim nothing aside from my OC(MC). All rights reserved to the rightful owner.
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Starts out pretty good but by chapter 12 some inconsistencies begin. Devils vomiting at violence? (these devils were willingly watching potential death matches) Thinking "thank god" instead of lucifer or some other devily alternative? Luckily there has only been one chapter of 'face-slapping' and then none after that. There's also a weird focus on the MC randomly singing songs from the future for some reason. Despite all this, I'm still reading and I know others aren't as particular as I am so give this a try.
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I like it at first before god suddenly appeared and give him something like a cheat, which just made it feel the story lost its direction. This is just in my opinion but it would have been better if he got it later, you just have to gave to him earlier which lower my expectation. Anyway I stopped when god appears and good luck Author to your story
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Honestly enjoyed reading so far and hope for regular updates, can settle for super long waits as long you don't drop it please :)) The character dynamics are fun. Liked the lack of sacred gear everyone seems to do and explore actual reliable devil improvement that doesn't take like 1-2 years to become stronger than Big G like in many others I have seen. Keep up the great work.
Started out good but it didn’t take long before the author started looking like he was either A. Running out of ideas or B. That he didn’t have a plan at all and the author puts the novel on indefinite hiatus or what is usually known as the death of the novel
What a nice read, I like your story. There is nothing more I can say, I am too bad at being a critic, so I will just wish you luck. And will there be a harem?, if not then I hope it would be a beautiful girl not a loli-oh wait, how can I forget about Hestia-sama. I might get my Dao cultivation cut of by her. (Pardon my English)
Story is nice and developing nicely, if you are thinking about harem, you should limit it to minimum.....,👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Great story.I'm looking forward to the development of the main character.and Let's get Tiamat on the team......................................................
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Good fic was an interesting premise shame it’s not gonna be continued. I’ll keep an eye out for more of your work your writing shows much promise.
Idk what to say 🤔 its a great fanfic and I hope it doesn't get dropped [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Solo diré, me gusta mucho esta hermosa historia, que no se enfoque en volver op al protagonista y los papeles que les da a los personajes secundarios es genial. ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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Sadly there are only six chapters written as of writing this but so far I find it impeccably structured and the story looks solid going forward, the only minor negatives I can see at present is the occasional spelling error which would easily be solved with any kind writing program that points out spelling mistakes. The fact the MC starts as a regular devil is also a rather unique spin on things although it is unfortunate that he's a servant. (not the evil pieces kind) but again, that's a unique starting point for an MC set in DxD as well. I sincerely look forward to how this novel progresses in the future and hope to see MC find someone to confide in eventually. (PS. Serafall best girl)
卷 1
- 1 [Re] Chapter 1 1 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2 1 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3 1 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4/Interlude 1 1 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5 1 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6 1 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7 1 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8 1 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9/Interlude 2 1 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10 1 years ago
- 11 Chapter 11 1 years ago
- 12 Chapter 12 1 years ago
- 13 Chapter 13 1 years ago
- 14 Chapter 14 1 years ago
- 15 Chapter 15 1 years ago
- 16 Chapter 16 1 years ago
- 17 Chapter 17 1 years ago
- 18 Chapter 18 1 years ago
- 19 Chapter 19/Interlude 3 1 years ago
- 20 Chapter 20/Interlude 4 1 years ago
- 21 Chapter 21 1 years ago
- 22 Chapter 22 1 years ago
- 23 Chapter 23 1 years ago
- 24 Indefinite Hiatus 1 years ago
Honestly this is really well done y'all, it has pretty good pacing and decent grammar. and the best part? there's no harem.