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I really like this book. The idea, the characters, but a good edition of this book would really be useful. This would really help with the reading and flow of the story...
it just took me 5 chapters to get hooked...ah author you really wrote an amazing novel
This was a good story and a nice quick read. I will be honest there are a few typos and the grammar is not the best. However, if you appreciate the journey more than those details then this is decent story. I recommend this is you’re looking for a relatively light hearted, fast paced read that has adventure and fluffy romance.
Quite a good yet sweet book. Some spelling and grammar errors in the later chapters, though. I highly recommend this book. Aiya, if only there were more to the story.
I love this Book😍😍😍😍😍🥰 Can't beleive it's finished😍😍I Can't wait for their next adventure
There are some grammatical errors but they are small and far between. They don't deminish from the story or they story telling. This is an excellent book and worth all the coins.
I love it, read it to the last update. I just hope the book get's to be updated regularly.
Quite okay for me. Just need a proper check up on spelling, punctuation marks, uppercase and lowercase in a sentence. I think the world background and character design can be more refine to make the story more interesting. Just my 2 cents.
This a incredible book! Every chapter is so warm! [img=strong][img=Smitten]
Such an intriguing novel. This novel really warrant a 5 star rating. I really love how the author commenced with the opening. I love everything about this novel, from the story development all the way to the world background. Keep it up author. Will need more.
5 star because I dont want to negatively affect the rating with all the author's hard work. But for those looking for reader reviews, the mc may be male and have manly powers. But his personality is very feminine, soft, emotional, shy, and submissive. You can just exchange his gender to female and it would be no different from majority of female-lead chinese novels.The male lead is a typical OP gong who is sweet to his wife, fearsome to others. He fell in love with his wife ger apparently because of his 'strong personality' and expefience of being betrayed, but again the mc doesnt have such a personality.If youre into that, i think this would be a good light hearted read.Its just not my style.
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Absolutely awesome, brilliant overpowered couple with cute deciples and epic world building. Definitely worth the read and money to unlock More Chapters.
I am enjoying this book very much. It's so fun to read and the world is interesting as well. The characters are fun and their development is steady. I can't wait to continue reading this. Please keep updating, you know what I'm waiting on 😁🤭😂
Wow!![img=gift][img=gift] I was captivated by the synopsis of the book. The story have a nice story development!!! I like the first chapter
This is a very good story the pacing is fine and I love the characters I don't review much and when I do then the story gets my stamp of improval I'm looking forward to seeing them grow together and build a family their journey may not be smooth however I'm looking forward to it
I love this novel! Sequel please!!! It’s worth the read without one but setup perfectly for a book two and leave you wanting more. P.S. I really can’t comment on Update Stability because I started reading when it was completed, but I wanted it to have the stars I thought it was worth and it won’t let you post without something in that category to begin with.🤷♀️
I really like this book. The idea, the characters, but a good edition of this book would really be useful. This would really help with the reading and flow of the story...
it just took me 5 chapters to get hooked...ah author you really wrote an amazing novel
This was a good story and a nice quick read. I will be honest there are a few typos and the grammar is not the best. However, if you appreciate the journey more than those details then this is decent story. I recommend this is you’re looking for a relatively light hearted, fast paced read that has adventure and fluffy romance.
Quite a good yet sweet book. Some spelling and grammar errors in the later chapters, though. I highly recommend this book. Aiya, if only there were more to the story.
I love this Book😍😍😍😍😍🥰 Can't beleive it's finished😍😍I Can't wait for their next adventure
There are some grammatical errors but they are small and far between. They don't deminish from the story or they story telling. This is an excellent book and worth all the coins.
I love it, read it to the last update. I just hope the book get's to be updated regularly.
Quite okay for me. Just need a proper check up on spelling, punctuation marks, uppercase and lowercase in a sentence. I think the world background and character design can be more refine to make the story more interesting. Just my 2 cents.
This a incredible book! Every chapter is so warm! [img=strong][img=Smitten]
Such an intriguing novel. This novel really warrant a 5 star rating. I really love how the author commenced with the opening. I love everything about this novel, from the story development all the way to the world background. Keep it up author. Will need more.
5 star because I dont want to negatively affect the rating with all the author's hard work. But for those looking for reader reviews, the mc may be male and have manly powers. But his personality is very feminine, soft, emotional, shy, and submissive. You can just exchange his gender to female and it would be no different from majority of female-lead chinese novels.The male lead is a typical OP gong who is sweet to his wife, fearsome to others. He fell in love with his wife ger apparently because of his 'strong personality' and expefience of being betrayed, but again the mc doesnt have such a personality.If youre into that, i think this would be a good light hearted read.Its just not my style.
揭示劇透 Absolutely awesome, brilliant overpowered couple with cute deciples and epic world building. Definitely worth the read and money to unlock More Chapters.
I am enjoying this book very much. It's so fun to read and the world is interesting as well. The characters are fun and their development is steady. I can't wait to continue reading this. Please keep updating, you know what I'm waiting on 😁🤭😂
Wow!![img=gift][img=gift] I was captivated by the synopsis of the book. The story have a nice story development!!! I like the first chapter
This is a very good story the pacing is fine and I love the characters I don't review much and when I do then the story gets my stamp of improval I'm looking forward to seeing them grow together and build a family their journey may not be smooth however I'm looking forward to it
I love this novel! Sequel please!!! It’s worth the read without one but setup perfectly for a book two and leave you wanting more. P.S. I really can’t comment on Update Stability because I started reading when it was completed, but I wanted it to have the stars I thought it was worth and it won’t let you post without something in that category to begin with.🤷♀️