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Boring, that's it. The male character is dumb, the female is extremely annoying. the plot is weak, the characters are shallow.
Very interesting so far with an OP protagonist framed for a crime and trying to figure it out and prove his innocence
I just don’t understand how the whole voting system works coz i just don’t believe that anyone will vote for this sort of trash novel.
Let me start by saying that I have not even read the title of the first chapter, the only thing I have read is the synopsis. So here is my gripe with this novel from just reading the synopsis. The girl - the MOTHER to his daughter- doesn't want to announce their relationship cause SHE - the MOTHER - will get humiliated. I mean come on and he says give "Buy ALL the cooperative properties of her family and give it to my lovely miss". Do I have to spell out how many red flags that brings up? If this was a HP fanfic I would have thought that he was under the influence of Amortentia. Correct me if I am wrong and I WILL read it and edit my review, but till then its a no from me fam. Also all the ones giving this novel anything above a 1 star either cant read cause they haven't read the synopsis or are women who love shojo novels or are just insecure virgins like the MC of the novel (And before you correct me, I know the MC is not a virgin, I am calling you one. I can read unlike you.)
Just reading the synopsis gave me goosebumps all over my body.... ..................................................... ......... ....... ..... .... .. .
Honestly there are times where I get annoyed reading, when ever the daughters mother is there all she does get mad and she doesn’t listen or let the mc explain what happened back then and she constantly talks about her daughter having autism when she doesn’t. And the fact that she doesn’t know about mcs identity is an overused concept in these types of novels. She sees her daughter happy with her dad and instead of telling him he’s the dad and letting him explain and solve their issue, she gets mad yells at him and forbid her from seeing her dad, arguably the only thing that makes her happy.
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this novel look that good at first, but after i read till chapter 30 i understood, chinese novel is just that bad, i cant understand how chinese people think, maybe iam dumb here? or maybe chinese author that so freakin trash? who knows
reminder from me, if you had bad temper dont read this. you will find mc character annoying and also the heroine. her temper is too annoying. i can understand that she has bullied too much but mc also victim. her temper is very annoying me. if i am in this situation i will find the truth about five years ago and slapped her face with the fact and show how much stupid she is. and also tell her that mc also victim and suffered bcoz of conspiracy.
I’m enjoying it I look forward to the rest if it passes I want more of ling’er if anyone knows any longer novel similar to this please let me know
Let's have an OP MC be a wimp and drag out simple problems for no real reason other than chapter count
trash,the whole story is basically him trying to prove his some big shot and the mother not believing it while the daughter has super smart autism superpower
I can't tell more about the story as I haven't come into conclusion yet. I just rated it as per context that I have already encountered about the novel.
A very interesting novel. I love the little quirks the characters have. The instability in the characters that allude to things that may be revealed, as it progresses, leaves me eager to read more.
Cliche things & drama ...... unreasonable people who are delusional .....
TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH
This story is a combination of two distinct story types commonly found on Webnovel. First off the mistreated married mercenary king. In this case we have the MC who transmigrated into a situation where he had a one night stand with this 'noble' girl from one of the noble families. It left a bad situation for the girl, while the MC was thrown onto a prison island to rot. There he found a grand opportunity and before he leaves to return 'home' he acquires the 'assets' of all the other prisoners on paper. Of course they do not believe he can utilize them as he is also one of the prisoners. But then he says goodbye and successful leaves. The second story type is the daddy/daughter story. The MC was not aware of this daughter and the time-frame also does not seem to quite line up, but the girl is very much drawn to him, and also looks a lot like him. The actual situation for this story is that the female has been very much mistreated by her family and the MC is not one of those guys who is going to hide his power and ability. He is going to go right out and deal with problems not hiding who and what he is. Finally the MC is not really all that faithful the the noble girl, though he does seem like he is going to be very faithful to his daughter. The MC is a shrewd guy who goes after what he is interested in, yet has enough self belief that he has no interest in forcing others into sexual relationships with him. He is pursuing those he want, yet is very pragmatic. There are two fantastical events in the story so far. One is the MC getting the technique that provides all of his powers and abilities, which we only get a very brief memo of the event occurring, the other is where the MC leaves the island and just so happens to come across a cruise ship that his girl and daughter are on.
That sounds exactly like a plot from a bad latin soap opera from last century. Really? 'Poor boy falls fot reach girl, her family is against it, but love conquers all'? Ugh, how many thousands of works there are with this plot?
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Bruh, the story claims the mc is smart but doesn't even want to consider all possibilities surrounding his daughter father and assume he isn't. Most of the problems in the beginning could be solved if he was stubborn with the fml, but he just took the long route in solving things about his relationship with her.
Boring, that's it. The male character is dumb, the female is extremely annoying. the plot is weak, the characters are shallow.
Very interesting so far with an OP protagonist framed for a crime and trying to figure it out and prove his innocence
I just don’t understand how the whole voting system works coz i just don’t believe that anyone will vote for this sort of trash novel.
Let me start by saying that I have not even read the title of the first chapter, the only thing I have read is the synopsis. So here is my gripe with this novel from just reading the synopsis. The girl - the MOTHER to his daughter- doesn't want to announce their relationship cause SHE - the MOTHER - will get humiliated. I mean come on and he says give "Buy ALL the cooperative properties of her family and give it to my lovely miss". Do I have to spell out how many red flags that brings up? If this was a HP fanfic I would have thought that he was under the influence of Amortentia. Correct me if I am wrong and I WILL read it and edit my review, but till then its a no from me fam. Also all the ones giving this novel anything above a 1 star either cant read cause they haven't read the synopsis or are women who love shojo novels or are just insecure virgins like the MC of the novel (And before you correct me, I know the MC is not a virgin, I am calling you one. I can read unlike you.)
Just reading the synopsis gave me goosebumps all over my body.... ..................................................... ......... ....... ..... .... .. .
Honestly there are times where I get annoyed reading, when ever the daughters mother is there all she does get mad and she doesn’t listen or let the mc explain what happened back then and she constantly talks about her daughter having autism when she doesn’t. And the fact that she doesn’t know about mcs identity is an overused concept in these types of novels. She sees her daughter happy with her dad and instead of telling him he’s the dad and letting him explain and solve their issue, she gets mad yells at him and forbid her from seeing her dad, arguably the only thing that makes her happy.
揭示劇透 this novel look that good at first, but after i read till chapter 30 i understood, chinese novel is just that bad, i cant understand how chinese people think, maybe iam dumb here? or maybe chinese author that so freakin trash? who knows
reminder from me, if you had bad temper dont read this. you will find mc character annoying and also the heroine. her temper is too annoying. i can understand that she has bullied too much but mc also victim. her temper is very annoying me. if i am in this situation i will find the truth about five years ago and slapped her face with the fact and show how much stupid she is. and also tell her that mc also victim and suffered bcoz of conspiracy.
I’m enjoying it I look forward to the rest if it passes I want more of ling’er if anyone knows any longer novel similar to this please let me know
Let's have an OP MC be a wimp and drag out simple problems for no real reason other than chapter count
trash,the whole story is basically him trying to prove his some big shot and the mother not believing it while the daughter has super smart autism superpower
I can't tell more about the story as I haven't come into conclusion yet. I just rated it as per context that I have already encountered about the novel.
A very interesting novel. I love the little quirks the characters have. The instability in the characters that allude to things that may be revealed, as it progresses, leaves me eager to read more.
Cliche things & drama ...... unreasonable people who are delusional .....
TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH TRASH....TRASH....TRASH....TRASH
This story is a combination of two distinct story types commonly found on Webnovel. First off the mistreated married mercenary king. In this case we have the MC who transmigrated into a situation where he had a one night stand with this 'noble' girl from one of the noble families. It left a bad situation for the girl, while the MC was thrown onto a prison island to rot. There he found a grand opportunity and before he leaves to return 'home' he acquires the 'assets' of all the other prisoners on paper. Of course they do not believe he can utilize them as he is also one of the prisoners. But then he says goodbye and successful leaves. The second story type is the daddy/daughter story. The MC was not aware of this daughter and the time-frame also does not seem to quite line up, but the girl is very much drawn to him, and also looks a lot like him. The actual situation for this story is that the female has been very much mistreated by her family and the MC is not one of those guys who is going to hide his power and ability. He is going to go right out and deal with problems not hiding who and what he is. Finally the MC is not really all that faithful the the noble girl, though he does seem like he is going to be very faithful to his daughter. The MC is a shrewd guy who goes after what he is interested in, yet has enough self belief that he has no interest in forcing others into sexual relationships with him. He is pursuing those he want, yet is very pragmatic. There are two fantastical events in the story so far. One is the MC getting the technique that provides all of his powers and abilities, which we only get a very brief memo of the event occurring, the other is where the MC leaves the island and just so happens to come across a cruise ship that his girl and daughter are on.
That sounds exactly like a plot from a bad latin soap opera from last century. Really? 'Poor boy falls fot reach girl, her family is against it, but love conquers all'? Ugh, how many thousands of works there are with this plot?
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Bruh, the story claims the mc is smart but doesn't even want to consider all possibilities surrounding his daughter father and assume he isn't. Most of the problems in the beginning could be solved if he was stubborn with the fml, but he just took the long route in solving things about his relationship with her.