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You rushed it at the end but, it would have taken another few years, after writing for four it’s completely understandable you wanna go live It’s was beautiful with descriptive writing that made you feel like you were looking at the creatures and sucked you in to the story. Also had some wise proverbs scattered through out. I’m glad this was my first web novel P.s I could see this maybe becoming a comic taken up by a young artist in the future… who knows. Thank you for the story, it was nice 👍
this bit isn't a review but a question? or a series of statements with a question in the mix? so when he goes from tide master to tide dominator (red to orange rarity) it says he goes form one lake of mana to TEN and that he could beat ten of himself/ten times stronger and he was level like 15 or something, then 100 chaps (360ish) later he's level 35 or so and gets double suppressed (being on land and mana suppressed) and it says he's lost 90% of his mana or something, so... wouldn't he still be a level 35 legacy tier combatant? cause you know... he was ten times stronger... but could only use 1/10? but instead he had access to 'a trickle of mana' and could control almost no water until he used his domain skill
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Managed to get to ch.40 before I had to just stop, the MC is just not that interesting at all and his personality is just flat, the units he recruits are murlocs, nagas,and sea pixies and are just about as uninteresting as it gets, when he recruited his first hero unit I thought there might be some actually dialogue but nope, she says less than 15 words in 20 chapters.
I honestly love the lords concept and wish there were more books like this. You did really well balancing the characters and unit's along with displaying the important administrative and economic points. while not super in depth, it is still noticeable. I can't wait for more.
It started very well. But the author puts several things in the story and simply doesn't develop it, he doesn't even develop the city system properly... besides there are several holes, many numbers are just thrown around and don't follow a linear progression. the mc simply gets strong and has a population of 100k+ when he is at a super low level...
The MC brain has problem. He always disdainful towards enemy surrendering. But his purpose is to have more people joining him and always say he has the bigger fist
The writer is not even good at copying.🤮🤮🤮🤮 The writer is not even good at copying.🤮🤮🤮🤮 I only lasted 3 chapters. 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
This novel has been really fun to read but I feel like it favors short chapters with many releases at a medium price. I‘d rather see more substantial chapters at a decent higher price. The latest chapter at the time if me writing this was six pages (I’m reading from phone) and cost as much as a novel with 12-15 pages a chapter. I am paying the same for less and twice as often just to get the same amount of content. The novels I get privileged chapters for are the ones that give good discounts and I get to feel like I get to at least tell myself I recoup some of the losses while supporting an author I love doing what they enjoy but this novel is just losing me. This novel is good, but not worth what feels like intentionally smaller chapters at the same price more often to get more money.
So is he a lord of the ocean? Or lord of that small island or is that just like his post
I finished it. I didn't expect it to suddenly end like that! The plot is nice, and so is the development of it. And like what one of the reviews said, it really has some similar concepts/ideas as the Desert Lord novel. Fortunately, it's not mirroring each other, just some similarities. What I'm disappointed about is the rushed ending (?). I feel like the battle of the plane could be expanded more into an arc, but it just rushed straight through it with a flashforward. I still have some questions, but anyway, since it's already finished, it can't be answered. This is an entertaining novel to me, you can read it to pass time. The total of chapters is 452. As I see in WN currently, they haven't divided the chapters yet, I'm not sure if they'll do it in further chapters because that's what they usually do. So the chapter count might change, but in raws, it's 452 chapters.
Bruh, this novel for being fantasy is getting many of the fantasy creatures wrong. Like, bruh, it is the translation issue or author trolling. I can understand messing up in the difference between mermaid and siren, but messing on goblin vs. kobold is just bad. The novel describes something else, but the name of the creature is another kind.
trash. it's just copy paste of the global lord series. don't read this if you're looking for something good. read this if you're looking for popcorn.
Really was starting to enjoy this story. It's a shame that it wasn't picked Hopefully the author will go ahead with it.
i know it's like a copy or something, but it's not bad, not bad at all, have fun reading it, :)
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Not half bad tbh, its still a very basic lord story, but the mechanics are quite well thought out and interesting. It's similar to Global Lord: 100% Drop Rate and Lord Of The World: I Become The Lord Of The Desert From The Start, much more so similar to the desert one however. It's more interesting than the desert one tbh tho since the environment has more variety compared to the desert.
You rushed it at the end but, it would have taken another few years, after writing for four it’s completely understandable you wanna go live It’s was beautiful with descriptive writing that made you feel like you were looking at the creatures and sucked you in to the story. Also had some wise proverbs scattered through out. I’m glad this was my first web novel P.s I could see this maybe becoming a comic taken up by a young artist in the future… who knows. Thank you for the story, it was nice 👍
this bit isn't a review but a question? or a series of statements with a question in the mix? so when he goes from tide master to tide dominator (red to orange rarity) it says he goes form one lake of mana to TEN and that he could beat ten of himself/ten times stronger and he was level like 15 or something, then 100 chaps (360ish) later he's level 35 or so and gets double suppressed (being on land and mana suppressed) and it says he's lost 90% of his mana or something, so... wouldn't he still be a level 35 legacy tier combatant? cause you know... he was ten times stronger... but could only use 1/10? but instead he had access to 'a trickle of mana' and could control almost no water until he used his domain skill
揭示劇透 Managed to get to ch.40 before I had to just stop, the MC is just not that interesting at all and his personality is just flat, the units he recruits are murlocs, nagas,and sea pixies and are just about as uninteresting as it gets, when he recruited his first hero unit I thought there might be some actually dialogue but nope, she says less than 15 words in 20 chapters.
I honestly love the lords concept and wish there were more books like this. You did really well balancing the characters and unit's along with displaying the important administrative and economic points. while not super in depth, it is still noticeable. I can't wait for more.
It started very well. But the author puts several things in the story and simply doesn't develop it, he doesn't even develop the city system properly... besides there are several holes, many numbers are just thrown around and don't follow a linear progression. the mc simply gets strong and has a population of 100k+ when he is at a super low level...
The MC brain has problem. He always disdainful towards enemy surrendering. But his purpose is to have more people joining him and always say he has the bigger fist
The writer is not even good at copying.🤮🤮🤮🤮 The writer is not even good at copying.🤮🤮🤮🤮 I only lasted 3 chapters. 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
This novel has been really fun to read but I feel like it favors short chapters with many releases at a medium price. I‘d rather see more substantial chapters at a decent higher price. The latest chapter at the time if me writing this was six pages (I’m reading from phone) and cost as much as a novel with 12-15 pages a chapter. I am paying the same for less and twice as often just to get the same amount of content. The novels I get privileged chapters for are the ones that give good discounts and I get to feel like I get to at least tell myself I recoup some of the losses while supporting an author I love doing what they enjoy but this novel is just losing me. This novel is good, but not worth what feels like intentionally smaller chapters at the same price more often to get more money.
So is he a lord of the ocean? Or lord of that small island or is that just like his post
I finished it. I didn't expect it to suddenly end like that! The plot is nice, and so is the development of it. And like what one of the reviews said, it really has some similar concepts/ideas as the Desert Lord novel. Fortunately, it's not mirroring each other, just some similarities. What I'm disappointed about is the rushed ending (?). I feel like the battle of the plane could be expanded more into an arc, but it just rushed straight through it with a flashforward. I still have some questions, but anyway, since it's already finished, it can't be answered. This is an entertaining novel to me, you can read it to pass time. The total of chapters is 452. As I see in WN currently, they haven't divided the chapters yet, I'm not sure if they'll do it in further chapters because that's what they usually do. So the chapter count might change, but in raws, it's 452 chapters.
Bruh, this novel for being fantasy is getting many of the fantasy creatures wrong. Like, bruh, it is the translation issue or author trolling. I can understand messing up in the difference between mermaid and siren, but messing on goblin vs. kobold is just bad. The novel describes something else, but the name of the creature is another kind.
trash. it's just copy paste of the global lord series. don't read this if you're looking for something good. read this if you're looking for popcorn.
Really was starting to enjoy this story. It's a shame that it wasn't picked Hopefully the author will go ahead with it.
i know it's like a copy or something, but it's not bad, not bad at all, have fun reading it, :)
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Not half bad tbh, its still a very basic lord story, but the mechanics are quite well thought out and interesting. It's similar to Global Lord: 100% Drop Rate and Lord Of The World: I Become The Lord Of The Desert From The Start, much more so similar to the desert one however. It's more interesting than the desert one tbh tho since the environment has more variety compared to the desert.
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