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It's like sitting at the table waiting for food with your friend, while you know the food won't come and yet you wait watching your friend play with the cutlery. The story is entertaining overall, the protagonist has a realistic and raw way of thinking as I like. Everything is fine, Except that the story has 90 chapters, of which the 90th is where the GoT plot begins. Adding to that the fact that the story doesn't seem to be continuous, well... What's the point of reading? I'm looking for a GoT story, you know? Not a story about Jorah making 500 children and giving them Viking names. Maybe if the author decides to do a real GoT story in the future I could sign up, but this is not that.
Love the story so far, its got something more than the others because the mc is not à genius who knows everything from the start but is doing what he can. And love how the mc think about Westeros.
Good hestia, this was good. Can’t really say anything else enjoyed this one really much though.
Absolutely wonderful. Apotheosis, the very embodiment of human ascension into greatness.
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
I just wanted to thank you for writing this fantastic story. It was really enjoyable seeing Jorah grow and make the most of all his limited benefits in a brutal fashion to eventually ascend to godhood in a very satisfying conclusion. The only criticism I could have is perhaps just wishing the story was longer to allow for more interaction between Jorah and the other characters to flesh out the side cast more. Your dialogue between characters is very well written so just wish that had more room to shine. A good example is maybe more chapters dedicated to his romance with Elia and their interactions with each other? Would have made her eventual death and his choice to discard her for his goals more impactful. Anyways it’s a really great story and didn’t expected finding so much of your writing on here after reading your Zabuza story on QQ. Keep up the great work and look forward to reading your other stories.
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Read through this story when it was updating a few months ago, loved it then and I love it now. Just binged through this story now that its completed, and its an amazing ride, with good grammar and characters, especially Jorah's balls. Would love to see the author write a HotD story like he mentioned he might do at the end of this one.
Atrocious ending aside, this is the only ff where the Starks are described what they actually are. Also accurately handles the "Free Folks" how they should've been handled. Cudos about Ironborns they did pay the iron price by blood and iron. For this it automatically get 5 star.
Basically bad MC done right. Not a wimp with no follow-through, not an edgelord, and still human enough to understand. Sometimes you hate Jorah, sometimes you love him. The hero westeros might need but would never ask for. All in all, a great read, with JManM's signature hilarious takes sprinkled for good measure. -Extremely vague spoiler below- My only criticism is the way that Jorah became too powerful. Don't get me wrong, the story was still great, I just wish it could've ended more naturally/peacefully. I don't want to spoil anything so I'll leave this be. Great story!
Definitely my favourite GOF fanfic. Very interesting character, and direction for the story.
While it may not be perfect its a really good read and i recomend alteast trying it. WARNING the MC is NOT a good person
very good, well-told story got derailed at the end but it was good, I really liked it, I recommend reading it.
This is one of best fanfic,no doubt. In beginning I had doubts, but power reveals man or Mc. There was some good comedy.
I’m usually not a fan of super chad characters but this novel executes the premise perfectly. Here’s to hoping the author decides to make another story based in ASOIAF!
El fic de Jorah Mormont que necesitábamos. Momentos brutales en abundancia, al estilo completamente descarado de ASOIAF. No verás al MC tratando idiotamente de hacerse amigo de todos. Está bien escrito y es entretenido, eso es básicamente todo lo que necesitas saber. ¿A mí? Me tenía en "¡Chum the waters!"
I only one critique. The part of the story where he fights The Mountain is great except for the fact that he's making a bunch of references during the fight. He's doing this in a fight against a man who killed and ra#ed the woman he loved. I'm not sure how to describe it, but it makes the fight seem less meaningful. I'm not sure if that was the point, but it still feels like it could have been handled better.
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Carajo gran historia es realmente refrescante y tiene lo que pocas veces encuentras en esta plataforma. Una buena trama y un protagonista con un par de bolas bien puestas. Literalmente
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This is a review upon finishing this novel. Although this fanfic novel feels short, I couldn't even think of what could be done to make the story longer; Game of Thrones might just be one series that wouldn't fit well with being prolonged like shounen manga. Overall, it's a good Game of Thrones fanfic novel because it managed to be completed. Thanks to the author for finishing the story.
Easily my favorite story from this author, while I like his mass effect story the main character at times felt tired and repetitive to me much like his DXD MC, however this character felt real at times making this a much easier and more comfortable story to read. The ending fits his character perfectly and I wouldn’t have it any other way. While kind characters are usually more my speed a morally reprehensible character like this are a breath of fresh air. Keep up the good work.
Good read……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. …….
This is the Greatest game of thrones fic I have ever read !!! Ruthless MC , Characters as they should be , World setting accurate and a MC with some actual balls ....😈😈🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Kinda sad its reached climax ....
this is very good one of the best fanfic I have read I love the main character very much the world-building the character travels and his improvement of himself and his house
A truly excellent story. - Though be prepared for graphic violence and sexual content It's complete and ended on a good solid note. My only request would be an extra chapter (Omake) of Jorah curb-stomping the Night King in a few years time. - I think when the only suggestion is more it says it all.
It's good. Very good, Can't wait for more.[img=actualización][img=actualización][img=actualización][img=actualización][img=actualización][img=actualización]
It's a futile endeavor. The tale involves a man reborn into the Game of Thrones universe, expected to possess ethical standards, yet he proves to be more despicable than the series' nobility. His presence fails to alter the course of events, rendering the plot nonsensical. My interest wanes as I struggle to appreciate such narratives
I didn't like the cutting of weirwood trees and not been old God worshiper
It's like sitting at the table waiting for food with your friend, while you know the food won't come and yet you wait watching your friend play with the cutlery. The story is entertaining overall, the protagonist has a realistic and raw way of thinking as I like. Everything is fine, Except that the story has 90 chapters, of which the 90th is where the GoT plot begins. Adding to that the fact that the story doesn't seem to be continuous, well... What's the point of reading? I'm looking for a GoT story, you know? Not a story about Jorah making 500 children and giving them Viking names. Maybe if the author decides to do a real GoT story in the future I could sign up, but this is not that.
Love the story so far, its got something more than the others because the mc is not à genius who knows everything from the start but is doing what he can. And love how the mc think about Westeros.
Good hestia, this was good. Can’t really say anything else enjoyed this one really much though.
Absolutely wonderful. Apotheosis, the very embodiment of human ascension into greatness.
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
I just wanted to thank you for writing this fantastic story. It was really enjoyable seeing Jorah grow and make the most of all his limited benefits in a brutal fashion to eventually ascend to godhood in a very satisfying conclusion. The only criticism I could have is perhaps just wishing the story was longer to allow for more interaction between Jorah and the other characters to flesh out the side cast more. Your dialogue between characters is very well written so just wish that had more room to shine. A good example is maybe more chapters dedicated to his romance with Elia and their interactions with each other? Would have made her eventual death and his choice to discard her for his goals more impactful. Anyways it’s a really great story and didn’t expected finding so much of your writing on here after reading your Zabuza story on QQ. Keep up the great work and look forward to reading your other stories.
揭示劇透 Read through this story when it was updating a few months ago, loved it then and I love it now. Just binged through this story now that its completed, and its an amazing ride, with good grammar and characters, especially Jorah's balls. Would love to see the author write a HotD story like he mentioned he might do at the end of this one.
Atrocious ending aside, this is the only ff where the Starks are described what they actually are. Also accurately handles the "Free Folks" how they should've been handled. Cudos about Ironborns they did pay the iron price by blood and iron. For this it automatically get 5 star.
Basically bad MC done right. Not a wimp with no follow-through, not an edgelord, and still human enough to understand. Sometimes you hate Jorah, sometimes you love him. The hero westeros might need but would never ask for. All in all, a great read, with JManM's signature hilarious takes sprinkled for good measure. -Extremely vague spoiler below- My only criticism is the way that Jorah became too powerful. Don't get me wrong, the story was still great, I just wish it could've ended more naturally/peacefully. I don't want to spoil anything so I'll leave this be. Great story!
Definitely my favourite GOF fanfic. Very interesting character, and direction for the story.
While it may not be perfect its a really good read and i recomend alteast trying it. WARNING the MC is NOT a good person
very good, well-told story got derailed at the end but it was good, I really liked it, I recommend reading it.
This is one of best fanfic,no doubt. In beginning I had doubts, but power reveals man or Mc. There was some good comedy.
I’m usually not a fan of super chad characters but this novel executes the premise perfectly. Here’s to hoping the author decides to make another story based in ASOIAF!
El fic de Jorah Mormont que necesitábamos. Momentos brutales en abundancia, al estilo completamente descarado de ASOIAF. No verás al MC tratando idiotamente de hacerse amigo de todos. Está bien escrito y es entretenido, eso es básicamente todo lo que necesitas saber. ¿A mí? Me tenía en "¡Chum the waters!"
I only one critique. The part of the story where he fights The Mountain is great except for the fact that he's making a bunch of references during the fight. He's doing this in a fight against a man who killed and ra#ed the woman he loved. I'm not sure how to describe it, but it makes the fight seem less meaningful. I'm not sure if that was the point, but it still feels like it could have been handled better.
揭示劇透 Carajo gran historia es realmente refrescante y tiene lo que pocas veces encuentras en esta plataforma. Una buena trama y un protagonista con un par de bolas bien puestas. Literalmente
揭示劇透 This is a review upon finishing this novel. Although this fanfic novel feels short, I couldn't even think of what could be done to make the story longer; Game of Thrones might just be one series that wouldn't fit well with being prolonged like shounen manga. Overall, it's a good Game of Thrones fanfic novel because it managed to be completed. Thanks to the author for finishing the story.
Easily my favorite story from this author, while I like his mass effect story the main character at times felt tired and repetitive to me much like his DXD MC, however this character felt real at times making this a much easier and more comfortable story to read. The ending fits his character perfectly and I wouldn’t have it any other way. While kind characters are usually more my speed a morally reprehensible character like this are a breath of fresh air. Keep up the good work.
Good read……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. ……. …….
This is the Greatest game of thrones fic I have ever read !!! Ruthless MC , Characters as they should be , World setting accurate and a MC with some actual balls ....😈😈🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Kinda sad its reached climax ....
this is very good one of the best fanfic I have read I love the main character very much the world-building the character travels and his improvement of himself and his house
A truly excellent story. - Though be prepared for graphic violence and sexual content It's complete and ended on a good solid note. My only request would be an extra chapter (Omake) of Jorah curb-stomping the Night King in a few years time. - I think when the only suggestion is more it says it all.
It's good. Very good, Can't wait for more.[img=actualización][img=actualización][img=actualización][img=actualización][img=actualización][img=actualización]
It's a futile endeavor. The tale involves a man reborn into the Game of Thrones universe, expected to possess ethical standards, yet he proves to be more despicable than the series' nobility. His presence fails to alter the course of events, rendering the plot nonsensical. My interest wanes as I struggle to appreciate such narratives
I didn't like the cutting of weirwood trees and not been old God worshiper