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Found a hidden gem, the start looks kinda rough but once you get past it, Trust me. The author seems update the story very frequently. Keep up your great work!
Great work so far, character development is one of the best I've seen recently. Story has a nice feel and is quite enjoyable also bonus for writing in this anime vers first time I read one like this. So up to now amazing work keep it up 🙂!
The story in itself is not bad but there are some things that just seem kinda forced or unreal like when the mc goes after the monkey guy from pauls party just because she saw him get imprisoned in a cage and even tries to convince the tribesmen to release the guy when she doesn't even know the guy and has no reason to do so, I mean nobody just goes ahead and talks to random prisoners in jail just because they live in the same cell someone you knew was in, since ya know prisoners usually commit a crime and can be dangerous. Another thing is that she almoast cought up with rudeus and eris even though she only trained during the rainy season with is like a few months while the other two trained for a few years to get where they are at now which is kinda sus but what do I know
Like the start now hope for funny event. And when everyone separates hope find her own way but who knows maybe she stay but sounds boring world vast make stuff up XD good luck
Good story so far, there aren't many mushoku fanfics and the decent ones are usually abandoned ah. The main character is likable, different enough and the development is interesting (although we haven't progressed much, but, reading it doesn't get boring and tedious like certain fanfics that just copy and paste what happens with small additions). Humble prayers to the author, hope he's a good doggo as he says.
it was quite good it is just that story was not making sense everything was happening without any explanation
Found a hidden gem, the start looks kinda rough but once you get past it, Trust me. The author seems update the story very frequently. Keep up your great work!
Great work so far, character development is one of the best I've seen recently. Story has a nice feel and is quite enjoyable also bonus for writing in this anime vers first time I read one like this. So up to now amazing work keep it up 🙂!
The story in itself is not bad but there are some things that just seem kinda forced or unreal like when the mc goes after the monkey guy from pauls party just because she saw him get imprisoned in a cage and even tries to convince the tribesmen to release the guy when she doesn't even know the guy and has no reason to do so, I mean nobody just goes ahead and talks to random prisoners in jail just because they live in the same cell someone you knew was in, since ya know prisoners usually commit a crime and can be dangerous. Another thing is that she almoast cought up with rudeus and eris even though she only trained during the rainy season with is like a few months while the other two trained for a few years to get where they are at now which is kinda sus but what do I know
Like the start now hope for funny event. And when everyone separates hope find her own way but who knows maybe she stay but sounds boring world vast make stuff up XD good luck
Good story so far, there aren't many mushoku fanfics and the decent ones are usually abandoned ah. The main character is likable, different enough and the development is interesting (although we haven't progressed much, but, reading it doesn't get boring and tedious like certain fanfics that just copy and paste what happens with small additions). Humble prayers to the author, hope he's a good doggo as he says.
it was quite good it is just that story was not making sense everything was happening without any explanation