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Why do you need a system in Harry Potter he is a Black a pure blood with lots of money and influence Who needs a system to survive in Harry Potter should be killed immediately by Voldemort in my opinion. In Harry Potter you only have to train magic and if someone really needs a system he is lost. I'm sorry for the insult but I have to let my anger out I mean he is a Black rich and has a lot of influence so why have a system
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Why do you need a system in Harry Potter he is a Black a pure blood with lots of money and influence Who needs a system to survive in Harry Potter should be killed immediately by Voldemort in my opinion. In Harry Potter you only have to train magic and if someone really needs a system he is lost. I'm sorry for the insult but I have to let my anger out I mean he is a Black rich and has a lot of influence so why have a system
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