4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
I really loved this! It's so rare to find high-quality writing on WebNovel, and I devoured all 7 chapters. I love Eli so much; her personality is charming and endearing, and the story is surprisingly dark, which surprised me. There's some world-building happening at a nice measured pace, with an emphasis on character relations. Some of the writing in the last few chapters feels a little rushed compared to the brilliance of the first few chapters, but the author definitely has the capacity to produce a really high-quality story. Looking forward to see where the series goes! (Shipping Eli and Lara)
Interesting book from the get go. Makes me realise I still have a long way to go if I want to succeed as an author. Thumbs up to the author. Keep on the good work!
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong to 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
I really loved this! It's so rare to find high-quality writing on WebNovel, and I devoured all 7 chapters. I love Eli so much; her personality is charming and endearing, and the story is surprisingly dark, which surprised me. There's some world-building happening at a nice measured pace, with an emphasis on character relations. Some of the writing in the last few chapters feels a little rushed compared to the brilliance of the first few chapters, but the author definitely has the capacity to produce a really high-quality story. Looking forward to see where the series goes! (Shipping Eli and Lara)
Interesting book from the get go. Makes me realise I still have a long way to go if I want to succeed as an author. Thumbs up to the author. Keep on the good work!
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong to 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!