Reviews of The Monk in the MCU by Cedric_7512 - Webnovel

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4.18

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Cafeytinto

me gusta mucho ya que esta historia cuenta con cosas que me gustas y muchas cosas mas como los personajes , la trama y como se desarrolla la misma aunque se puede mejoran muchas cosas me gusto bastante

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typicalanimewatchr

Just not good, the power is op but mc is stupid and no plotline development only training and using new powers. Mc is literally close to five creation gods in power and can tank the real phoenix force but mc doing unreasonable things like making gotei 13 in china for peace ✌

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Dominic_Smith_7238

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Narciss84

every fic of yours has a couple people criticising it needlessly, wagwan?So far its pretty good, the subjugation of the gang seemed to be a spur of the moment decision that have no purpose and would likely damage his image. The fact that a woman with good morals and had a following in the gang seemed a tad bit too practical when I read it but what do I know, I haven't gotten far anyway, anyway good luck and don't drop

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Green_Serpent

i just think thumbnail of ichibei would make the story more popular....otherwise it is a decent story.

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CandyChopper

1 Star for dropping and looking at your profile there is no finished story.

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Skyguy345

It's like something written by a chatbot. Everything tangentially makes sense in a semi-coherent fashion but drastically and repeatedly contradicts what was written 1-2 chapters ago.

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TheCameran

Just nothing to be expect. But I kinda like it.

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Odie_1255

If you are into good fanfics come and read this monk in mcu is truly exceptional ✅👏🏾 honest review. Just try it out 😌

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MellyK9
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Well, it started off iffy, but it had potential. unfortunately, everything happens really fast, not allowing the story to progress fluently. Also, for some reason, he became a pushover as soon he met the x-men. Read to chapter 24, but it got unbearable. Also, the Mc goes from wise monk to juvenile child, then to subpar mob boss, and it gets annoying.

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Sloth_sama

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SardonicPriest

This is a great fanfic.

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TheUlbertAlainOdle

I just discovered this piece of art. I hope I can see a lot more in the future![img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]

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ANANTA

This Fanfiction-Story is Omoshiroi (Interesting, Amusing, Fascinating, Funny, Enjoyable, Entertaining, Fun). Therefore, All 5☆. While i want to write more but that will become spoiler. Hope & pray that AUTHOR won't give up and drop but make the story one of the greatest, and complete the story with gracefullness! Will give a proper review after the completion of the story.

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Odie_1255

This Fanfic is just astonishing truly great. Author please continue this fanfic it’s just to good to be dropped 🥹✅✅. From one of your biggest fans I beg continue the story ✌🏾.

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AinceOlGon

Нормально

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Little_El

Realistic comments here I was very excited about the power he was going to have but ended up being disappointed. The writing is childish, the MC is weird and his feelings useless in the moments used, MC is already trying to control himself when he has just woken up in the middle of a genocide, in short everything is badly organized.

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Jose_Valter

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King_666

its story are exciting and alwys eager to know the next story and i cant stop reading hope you make chapter.

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ok_ok_1494

Its good, I do not know why there are some bad reviews, but I guess that the lack of anything sexual was too much for those people. There was one chapter where I was like wth happened but it is overall amazing!

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SlowWittedSong

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shin_rae_miu

okay first of all the mc feels like a dweeb cosplayer chūnibyō monk wannabe but knows nothing about monks and buddhism and is just introduced to monks due to Ichibe. now reading this made me cringe everytime he introduce himself but otherwise it the writing quality is good aside from later chapters (16-22) that feels a little bit rushed specially chapter 20-22. the author should really omit the words "-I'm the monk- that called names" but he should instead refer himself as "this monk" as this one projects humility while the original one projects arrogance and not confidence. the mc is not Ichibe Hyusobe. if the author really likes to add Ichibe's epithet then use "This monk (1) is the monk who calls the real name" this way it will be more natural or add the word "epithet" on number 1 in between the "monk" and "is". this changes the way the mc introduce himself greatly he won't be perceived by the readers as a chuni who is cosplaying as a monk but a real monk.

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Darth_Ullyses

.. .. .. .. .. .. keep up the good work.

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Miki_Marlo75

I was reading it out of curiosity but I ended up disappointed I only see things after another without context or explanations and there is no way to know if time passes or it is just a moment of a event to event, above all it is the typical op story where the mc or protagonist has everything as if nothing at the beginning of the story without serious development beyond the basics

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Alexrs99

Es ichibei in MC siempre me pregunte como sería THX.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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BLITZE_READER

I don't know what is good about this novel it's like reading re:monster but worse

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CRISTIAN_YULMA

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Cj_Ali
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More chapters dude plz ..........................................................................................................................................................................

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Rimurum
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Awesomeness is about to become a legend. This fic has amazing potential. I hope it reaches it and doesn't get dropped half way. Thank you for writing this amazing piece of art!

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Cafeytinto

me gusta mucho ya que esta historia cuenta con cosas que me gustas y muchas cosas mas como los personajes , la trama y como se desarrolla la misma aunque se puede mejoran muchas cosas me gusto bastante

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typicalanimewatchr

Just not good, the power is op but mc is stupid and no plotline development only training and using new powers. Mc is literally close to five creation gods in power and can tank the real phoenix force but mc doing unreasonable things like making gotei 13 in china for peace ✌

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Dominic_Smith_7238

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Narciss84

every fic of yours has a couple people criticising it needlessly, wagwan?So far its pretty good, the subjugation of the gang seemed to be a spur of the moment decision that have no purpose and would likely damage his image. The fact that a woman with good morals and had a following in the gang seemed a tad bit too practical when I read it but what do I know, I haven't gotten far anyway, anyway good luck and don't drop

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Green_Serpent

i just think thumbnail of ichibei would make the story more popular....otherwise it is a decent story.

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CandyChopper

1 Star for dropping and looking at your profile there is no finished story.

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Skyguy345

It's like something written by a chatbot. Everything tangentially makes sense in a semi-coherent fashion but drastically and repeatedly contradicts what was written 1-2 chapters ago.

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TheCameran

Just nothing to be expect. But I kinda like it.

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Odie_1255

If you are into good fanfics come and read this monk in mcu is truly exceptional ✅👏🏾 honest review. Just try it out 😌

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MellyK9
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Well, it started off iffy, but it had potential. unfortunately, everything happens really fast, not allowing the story to progress fluently. Also, for some reason, he became a pushover as soon he met the x-men. Read to chapter 24, but it got unbearable. Also, the Mc goes from wise monk to juvenile child, then to subpar mob boss, and it gets annoying.

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Sloth_sama

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SardonicPriest

This is a great fanfic.

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TheUlbertAlainOdle

I just discovered this piece of art. I hope I can see a lot more in the future![img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]

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ANANTA

This Fanfiction-Story is Omoshiroi (Interesting, Amusing, Fascinating, Funny, Enjoyable, Entertaining, Fun). Therefore, All 5☆. While i want to write more but that will become spoiler. Hope & pray that AUTHOR won't give up and drop but make the story one of the greatest, and complete the story with gracefullness! Will give a proper review after the completion of the story.

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Odie_1255

This Fanfic is just astonishing truly great. Author please continue this fanfic it’s just to good to be dropped 🥹✅✅. From one of your biggest fans I beg continue the story ✌🏾.

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Karma_T3000

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AinceOlGon

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Little_El

Realistic comments here I was very excited about the power he was going to have but ended up being disappointed. The writing is childish, the MC is weird and his feelings useless in the moments used, MC is already trying to control himself when he has just woken up in the middle of a genocide, in short everything is badly organized.

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Jose_Valter

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King_666

its story are exciting and alwys eager to know the next story and i cant stop reading hope you make chapter.

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ok_ok_1494

Its good, I do not know why there are some bad reviews, but I guess that the lack of anything sexual was too much for those people. There was one chapter where I was like wth happened but it is overall amazing!

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SlowWittedSong

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shin_rae_miu

okay first of all the mc feels like a dweeb cosplayer chūnibyō monk wannabe but knows nothing about monks and buddhism and is just introduced to monks due to Ichibe. now reading this made me cringe everytime he introduce himself but otherwise it the writing quality is good aside from later chapters (16-22) that feels a little bit rushed specially chapter 20-22. the author should really omit the words "-I'm the monk- that called names" but he should instead refer himself as "this monk" as this one projects humility while the original one projects arrogance and not confidence. the mc is not Ichibe Hyusobe. if the author really likes to add Ichibe's epithet then use "This monk (1) is the monk who calls the real name" this way it will be more natural or add the word "epithet" on number 1 in between the "monk" and "is". this changes the way the mc introduce himself greatly he won't be perceived by the readers as a chuni who is cosplaying as a monk but a real monk.

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Darth_Ullyses

.. .. .. .. .. .. keep up the good work.

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Miki_Marlo75

I was reading it out of curiosity but I ended up disappointed I only see things after another without context or explanations and there is no way to know if time passes or it is just a moment of a event to event, above all it is the typical op story where the mc or protagonist has everything as if nothing at the beginning of the story without serious development beyond the basics

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Alexrs99

Es ichibei in MC siempre me pregunte como sería THX.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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BLITZE_READER

I don't know what is good about this novel it's like reading re:monster but worse

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CRISTIAN_YULMA

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Cj_Ali
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More chapters dude plz ..........................................................................................................................................................................

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Rimurum
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Awesomeness is about to become a legend. This fic has amazing potential. I hope it reaches it and doesn't get dropped half way. Thank you for writing this amazing piece of art!

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