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- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
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Well I would say it seems like a pure girlish thing...going on 😂 although the character design and etc look amazing I guess....I mean the way you've deeply described everything...best wishes!
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Well I would say it seems like a pure girlish thing...going on 😂 although the character design and etc look amazing I guess....I mean the way you've deeply described everything...best wishes!
You have developed the story in a good way! Best of luck, raising author.