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Bro how did you make something so good that bad. Man it takes someone special to do that. Not to mention you made it hide under a paywall as a some sort of apreiciation bullshit.
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Awesome Fanfic I love it. I hope you don't drop it and continue the best of luck.
Hope you continue the story. But yes, need some improvement in the new chapters. Thanks for the Novel and some good time.🙂🙂
I usually skip simulation fanfic, but his one is not bad to read -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Started out really good definitely worth a read but unfortunately it just stops storytelling and just lists events mc did this mc did that. Basically the author kills all story immersion with lazy writing. Character interactions, thoughts, feelings and descriptive writing become less as the chapter number increases. Shame wasted potential
Well story started very well, but soon fic went from potential 5 star to 2 star and still going downhill, no correct use of his previous life, MC is simp and this fic is HAREM, Mc indirectly making his future enemies strong, Mc is too trusting for being an killer, Fic downgrades world IQ so that MC can shine.. Too many poison for my taste.
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Please continue this story.......!.!..!.!..!. It's great I hope you continue this Arthur-san
Bro how did you make something so good that bad. Man it takes someone special to do that. Not to mention you made it hide under a paywall as a some sort of apreiciation bullshit.
Good.....….......................................................................................................................................................................
Awesome Fanfic I love it. I hope you don't drop it and continue the best of luck.
Hope you continue the story. But yes, need some improvement in the new chapters. Thanks for the Novel and some good time.🙂🙂
I usually skip simulation fanfic, but his one is not bad to read -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Started out really good definitely worth a read but unfortunately it just stops storytelling and just lists events mc did this mc did that. Basically the author kills all story immersion with lazy writing. Character interactions, thoughts, feelings and descriptive writing become less as the chapter number increases. Shame wasted potential
Well story started very well, but soon fic went from potential 5 star to 2 star and still going downhill, no correct use of his previous life, MC is simp and this fic is HAREM, Mc indirectly making his future enemies strong, Mc is too trusting for being an killer, Fic downgrades world IQ so that MC can shine.. Too many poison for my taste.
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Please continue this story.......!.!..!.!..!. It's great I hope you continue this Arthur-san