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Good, but too MS and OP. Not enough difficults, limitations for the character. Besides, where is the intrigue, conflict, what is the interest?
Very good story, but uploads have stopped. The character also gets OP (good or bad depending on your preferences), and some grammar/ spelling mistakes can make some paragraphs confusing. Besides all this, however, the story is intriguing and overall enjoyable. The story also doesn't cover the canon timeline until now (episode 23), which is just something to mention, even if it doesn't matter to you. I'd recommend, but it really depends on your preference.
it's really nice! It's a great story, I hope they don't forget it, please read it, it's one of the best MHA stories (not to say it's number one).
It's very good, I would like him to follow the world domination route along with immortality, but at the same time not forget to romance someone and not become someone without feelings. The only problem I see at this point in the romance is whether it will involve feelings between the two parties, leaving aside his suspicion if the other party loves him or just approaches him because of his power since he can detect lies and such. Please no harem. it only works with stupid, unrealistic partners. Having all the power in the world to become an Almighty God who watches humanity from afar isn't very attractive, why have the power if you can't be abused? Right? The reason for not getting 5 stars is the speed at which the chapters are posted.
thank you so much for continuing to write the story I really wondered if you were going to continue but I really like the story so I really hope you continue
can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please
I like it and i wish it was updated regularly. I would be grateful if the writer commented on this review and told us when the next chapter will be out.
It is rare to find a non-Harem fanfiction of MHA, I bless you good author of 5 star rating just for that
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It is one of the best MHA fanfictions I have read to date. The utility of his copy quirk is set realistically and within the boundaries of MHA. The world-building and pace of the novel could've been better but for a fanfic, it is acceptable. Grammar is good and can be understood very easily. I have been following this author for awhile now and most of his writings are very creative. Keep up the good work👍
ok i want to read this. I added it to my library and saved it in my private notebook. I will definitely go back and read it from start to finish. I hope you continue. Frankly, what attracts me is that mc is a sensible person. He doesn't make decisions like a random idiot. But that doesn't mean it will be like that in the future. If possible, keep the characters as they are and not start acting stupid. if he continues like this i am sure he will be one of the best ff.
Esto es bárbaro 🤣😃🤣😃🤣😃🤣😃🤣😃🤣😃🤣😃 No pensé que podría existir una buena historia con una habilidad tan rota sin irse del camino y convertirse en una monstruosidad jajaja Sabes cómo dejar al lector enganchado con la historia sin ir desviado en lo absurdo...
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Muy bueno 🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇 Me gusta mucho la historia 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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i give you 5 stars. i have yet to read this but i hope to come back in a few months and see it continuing. so many fan fics die in the first hundred chapters or the author jumps univers every 15 chapters. so this is my wish for the future.
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I really like the fact that Monoma is the mc. I feel like the anime didn't do him justice. I really wish that more of Monoma's potential is put to use. The story is really great so far. I am really hooked on this story.
-A fanfic about a underrated character and power like every single character in MHA, -Story is Good so far but I find that there are no major plot/Dream/want that the mc do/did aside from getting stronger so its character building so far(chapter 14). -So if the mc got in radar of Nezu so why does Twice or Toga not? Those quirks have AFO vibes if you ask me. Plus mc should have them on watch cause those quirks will be OP -no Shipping yet but Momo appeared so it might be momo X mc, BUT I want to see a TOGA X MC cause they have a similar quirk. HOPE TO SEE MORE
love the story what i like the most is that mc is making great use of there quirk not going to spoil how read to find out the mha universe is being developed step by step with decently complex characters all in all a fun read
It's an interesting concept, I will keep reading to see where the story goes.
This is an interesting and unique concept. i have read many reincarnation fanfictions but this is truly unique. i have read some reincarnated as monoma fanfics in the past but frankly... They were trash. but as this caught my interest and as i read your other fanfics and you don’t disappoint, take my 5 stars review.;)😉[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Neito Monoma's quirk was always strong, it's the user who left a lot to be desired, so what will happen if a man who knows what he is doing is given the key to unlimited quirks. This is the story of such a man, given access to the copy quirk.
Good, but too MS and OP. Not enough difficults, limitations for the character. Besides, where is the intrigue, conflict, what is the interest?
Very good story, but uploads have stopped. The character also gets OP (good or bad depending on your preferences), and some grammar/ spelling mistakes can make some paragraphs confusing. Besides all this, however, the story is intriguing and overall enjoyable. The story also doesn't cover the canon timeline until now (episode 23), which is just something to mention, even if it doesn't matter to you. I'd recommend, but it really depends on your preference.
it's really nice! It's a great story, I hope they don't forget it, please read it, it's one of the best MHA stories (not to say it's number one).
It's very good, I would like him to follow the world domination route along with immortality, but at the same time not forget to romance someone and not become someone without feelings. The only problem I see at this point in the romance is whether it will involve feelings between the two parties, leaving aside his suspicion if the other party loves him or just approaches him because of his power since he can detect lies and such. Please no harem. it only works with stupid, unrealistic partners. Having all the power in the world to become an Almighty God who watches humanity from afar isn't very attractive, why have the power if you can't be abused? Right? The reason for not getting 5 stars is the speed at which the chapters are posted.
thank you so much for continuing to write the story I really wondered if you were going to continue but I really like the story so I really hope you continue
can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please can you keep going please
I like it and i wish it was updated regularly. I would be grateful if the writer commented on this review and told us when the next chapter will be out.
It is rare to find a non-Harem fanfiction of MHA, I bless you good author of 5 star rating just for that
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It is one of the best MHA fanfictions I have read to date. The utility of his copy quirk is set realistically and within the boundaries of MHA. The world-building and pace of the novel could've been better but for a fanfic, it is acceptable. Grammar is good and can be understood very easily. I have been following this author for awhile now and most of his writings are very creative. Keep up the good work👍
ok i want to read this. I added it to my library and saved it in my private notebook. I will definitely go back and read it from start to finish. I hope you continue. Frankly, what attracts me is that mc is a sensible person. He doesn't make decisions like a random idiot. But that doesn't mean it will be like that in the future. If possible, keep the characters as they are and not start acting stupid. if he continues like this i am sure he will be one of the best ff.
Esto es bárbaro 🤣😃🤣😃🤣😃🤣😃🤣😃🤣😃🤣😃 No pensé que podría existir una buena historia con una habilidad tan rota sin irse del camino y convertirse en una monstruosidad jajaja Sabes cómo dejar al lector enganchado con la historia sin ir desviado en lo absurdo...
揭示劇透 Muy bueno 🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇 Me gusta mucho la historia 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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i give you 5 stars. i have yet to read this but i hope to come back in a few months and see it continuing. so many fan fics die in the first hundred chapters or the author jumps univers every 15 chapters. so this is my wish for the future.
🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🎉🎉🎉🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍✅✅✅✅✅✅✅♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️✨🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💫💫💫💫💫💫😙😙😙😚😚😚😚😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😇😇😇😇😇😇👻
I really like the fact that Monoma is the mc. I feel like the anime didn't do him justice. I really wish that more of Monoma's potential is put to use. The story is really great so far. I am really hooked on this story.
-A fanfic about a underrated character and power like every single character in MHA, -Story is Good so far but I find that there are no major plot/Dream/want that the mc do/did aside from getting stronger so its character building so far(chapter 14). -So if the mc got in radar of Nezu so why does Twice or Toga not? Those quirks have AFO vibes if you ask me. Plus mc should have them on watch cause those quirks will be OP -no Shipping yet but Momo appeared so it might be momo X mc, BUT I want to see a TOGA X MC cause they have a similar quirk. HOPE TO SEE MORE
love the story what i like the most is that mc is making great use of there quirk not going to spoil how read to find out the mha universe is being developed step by step with decently complex characters all in all a fun read
It's an interesting concept, I will keep reading to see where the story goes.
This is an interesting and unique concept. i have read many reincarnation fanfictions but this is truly unique. i have read some reincarnated as monoma fanfics in the past but frankly... They were trash. but as this caught my interest and as i read your other fanfics and you don’t disappoint, take my 5 stars review.;)😉[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Neito Monoma's quirk was always strong, it's the user who left a lot to be desired, so what will happen if a man who knows what he is doing is given the key to unlimited quirks. This is the story of such a man, given access to the copy quirk.