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寫檢討hello i don't want to look rude but can you recommend my novel "Cultivation with Immortal System " in your reading list please
I have to ask why you write and post the exact same story three times just with different titles. I'm just curious that's it
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I don't know what you are trying to do here author. I mean you can't possibly call those chapters. There isn't any content. If we take total chs. then hardly 2-4 complete chapters. I mean 1 para chapter ended. 2 para chapter ended. Seeshhh. I am out.
The premise is fun but the author's lack of experience and the rush to unfold the story takes away the introspection of the MC and his unusual situation, there is no interaction with the characters around him and goes straight to the system, how they reacted to the appearance of the system it was too abrupt and forced generating a bit of discomfort, with that the chapters are too short and with little information, the story was rushed and without immersion with the MC or the situation in which he finds himself.
Hello everyone if you like douluo fanfiction than go and read novel Douluo: Song of the Azure Dragon to the Nine Heavens I am sure you will like it
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hello i don't want to look rude but can you recommend my novel "Cultivation with Immortal System " in your reading list please
I have to ask why you write and post the exact same story three times just with different titles. I'm just curious that's it
Read "Level Up with Pills and Herbs" come and get to know author before he becomes a celebrity in Webnovel
i hoope there are more chpters of this novel jnfihiufhihfjhviuhfuhuhiuhiuhfsjbvjndsk fi uhiufhufjkjsdfkjhjsfgf j j j j j j j j j j j j j j j j
is this a fanfic translation? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I don't know what you are trying to do here author. I mean you can't possibly call those chapters. There isn't any content. If we take total chs. then hardly 2-4 complete chapters. I mean 1 para chapter ended. 2 para chapter ended. Seeshhh. I am out.
The premise is fun but the author's lack of experience and the rush to unfold the story takes away the introspection of the MC and his unusual situation, there is no interaction with the characters around him and goes straight to the system, how they reacted to the appearance of the system it was too abrupt and forced generating a bit of discomfort, with that the chapters are too short and with little information, the story was rushed and without immersion with the MC or the situation in which he finds himself.
Hello everyone if you like douluo fanfiction than go and read novel Douluo: Song of the Azure Dragon to the Nine Heavens I am sure you will like it
How cool is it to get ads instead of chapters-_-..................... ............................. ............................ ................................................. ((