2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
I AM HERE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, as I say author as long as you don't drop the novel we cool. I am going to give you a 5 star because I like the idea and you're a good author other than some translation problems everything is good.
Good start , please do not throw qiu to the robot =) ...........................................................................................
I AM HERE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, as I say author as long as you don't drop the novel we cool. I am going to give you a 5 star because I like the idea and you're a good author other than some translation problems everything is good.
Good start , please do not throw qiu to the robot =) ...........................................................................................