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Sigh* - I wish I could say something good... but I just cant , it's basically imposible for me to keep up with everything , like who is the MC , I already forgot , If posible , make it a bit better to follow when we are back to MC and when we are at someone else please (if posible) not sure if im the only one who strugles to keep up with where we are
First off , good wok author , I have been enjoying your story so far , only some place it confuses me , but thats something minor , at the latest chapter 52 you left me at a cliffhanger.. (angry face) hahaha but its good so far , really got confused in the last 3 chapters but i feel like ill know what has happened when reading the next chap. Hope it comes out aoon!!! Keep Up The Good Work!!
Great potential. Currently one of my favorites. Author keep it up! fillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerilleriller
I have read till chapter 22 and till now its really entertaining. really good story 👏. plz don't drop it.
Has potential, many grammatical mistakes and the names aren't capitalized It's readable tho and the the issue with capitalization has been fixed in the latest chapter.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Sigh* - I wish I could say something good... but I just cant , it's basically imposible for me to keep up with everything , like who is the MC , I already forgot , If posible , make it a bit better to follow when we are back to MC and when we are at someone else please (if posible) not sure if im the only one who strugles to keep up with where we are
First off , good wok author , I have been enjoying your story so far , only some place it confuses me , but thats something minor , at the latest chapter 52 you left me at a cliffhanger.. (angry face) hahaha but its good so far , really got confused in the last 3 chapters but i feel like ill know what has happened when reading the next chap. Hope it comes out aoon!!! Keep Up The Good Work!!
Great potential. Currently one of my favorites. Author keep it up! fillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerilleriller
I have read till chapter 22 and till now its really entertaining. really good story 👏. plz don't drop it.
Has potential, many grammatical mistakes and the names aren't capitalized It's readable tho and the the issue with capitalization has been fixed in the latest chapter.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!