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Adorei a história e espero que continuem..................................................................................................................................................................................
for me the author brings an admirable plot with multiple emotions we feel with MC ... please author more chapter gathered with the awesome actions of hp series and yourz🔥🔥🔥🔥🙋♂️🙋♂️🙋♂️🙋♂️
You are writing MC like Gellert Grindelwald....................................................(hate of muggle) personally I like it.........................................................
I just have to write another review because this book is the best. I recommend it to anyone
Amazing work, a new concept. There are a few mistakes, but that doesn't matter, the story is good . That's all that matters,Definitely worth a try.
To pull such a story off takes hard work and alot of descriptive combined with creative writing there is a flaw here and there but nothing major storyline is good characterization is good creative writing etc chapter two the air smelled like blood, blood is compared to rust or metal but nevertheless hard work pays off and this deserves a five star
I instantly got attracted to the book, well because of the name cause hey who doesn't loves harry potter 😅😅😅... At instant I only read the first chapter but men, I never expected it to be this good, the writer really nailed the fanfic so well... A perfect five stars for a wonderful fascinating book 🙂🙂🙂
This book absolutely deserves a five star rate! Not only is the name intriguing, it's contents are also quite interesting. And it's Harry Potter, so why not give it a try!
This book is filled with great mystery and I must say it deserves a 5star rating...thats my way of showing support to the book
Ok guys who have not read potter? Or seen the movies? And this is freaking fanfic on that 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏. Eric, ml sounds interesting n I'm hoping to see how it develops. The writing n chapters r all well sorted out by the author. Definitely a good book to read amongst others...
Interesting plot. I really liked how the author integrated the Harry Potter world into this story and made the plot really interesting. Chapter 1 was a little confusing but afterwards the story was easier to read.
what a great read, I hope you keep it up and the story is interesting, I look forward to seeing how the story continues. . [img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
The title itself left my blood boiling. We are talking of Harry potter so why not! It is a story that's definitely worth a try.
Adorei a história e espero que continuem..................................................................................................................................................................................
for me the author brings an admirable plot with multiple emotions we feel with MC ... please author more chapter gathered with the awesome actions of hp series and yourz🔥🔥🔥🔥🙋♂️🙋♂️🙋♂️🙋♂️
You are writing MC like Gellert Grindelwald....................................................(hate of muggle) personally I like it.........................................................
I just have to write another review because this book is the best. I recommend it to anyone
Amazing work, a new concept. There are a few mistakes, but that doesn't matter, the story is good . That's all that matters,Definitely worth a try.
To pull such a story off takes hard work and alot of descriptive combined with creative writing there is a flaw here and there but nothing major storyline is good characterization is good creative writing etc chapter two the air smelled like blood, blood is compared to rust or metal but nevertheless hard work pays off and this deserves a five star
I instantly got attracted to the book, well because of the name cause hey who doesn't loves harry potter 😅😅😅... At instant I only read the first chapter but men, I never expected it to be this good, the writer really nailed the fanfic so well... A perfect five stars for a wonderful fascinating book 🙂🙂🙂
This book absolutely deserves a five star rate! Not only is the name intriguing, it's contents are also quite interesting. And it's Harry Potter, so why not give it a try!
This book is filled with great mystery and I must say it deserves a 5star rating...thats my way of showing support to the book
Ok guys who have not read potter? Or seen the movies? And this is freaking fanfic on that 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏. Eric, ml sounds interesting n I'm hoping to see how it develops. The writing n chapters r all well sorted out by the author. Definitely a good book to read amongst others...
Interesting plot. I really liked how the author integrated the Harry Potter world into this story and made the plot really interesting. Chapter 1 was a little confusing but afterwards the story was easier to read.
what a great read, I hope you keep it up and the story is interesting, I look forward to seeing how the story continues. . [img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
The title itself left my blood boiling. We are talking of Harry potter so why not! It is a story that's definitely worth a try.
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