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I'll write this review just because i think this novel would be good but the way this novel is written is so weird.. the novel is in 1st person all the time like mc is narrating the story.. this is not how it's supposed to be.. most parts should be in 3rd person.. only thinking and talking should be in 1st person
I'll write this review just because i think this novel would be good but the way this novel is written is so weird.. the novel is in 1st person all the time like mc is narrating the story.. this is not how it's supposed to be.. most parts should be in 3rd person.. only thinking and talking should be in 1st person