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I what you to make more chapters Bbecause I want to read more food wars and it been so long since someone made A food wars fanfic 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄🤩🤩
Amazing fanfiction. I love Soran's personality and how he is not hiding his cooking abilities.
fun fic. Definitely needs more characterization and chapters. Soma seems to be taking a back seat even though he's still a top tier cook. I think having Soma becoming just as good as MC but through the background grind seems like a good idea.
as a previous comment stated there few food wars fanfic and this definitely is one of the best.
everything is great so far the grammar is good, the character in interactions is great and close to their original personality, the plot does not strictly closely follow the common plot, though the updating schedule is atrocious i hope the author publish more chapters.
Don't get many Food Wars fanfic so this rating of 5/5 is relative compared to others of the same story and not a reflection of its overall quality. Still the story is pretty awesome and his new life origin meshes very well. No having to create a family and feelings from scratch, it would of been forced unless he wanted a drawn out pre-canon info dump that lasted a lot more chapters. I like the chemistry between them and the impact hes already had on them and canon. he's not afraid to change the plot, even if its just minimal at this point. I like the system, and as long as it stays simple then ill be happy. His growth rate was a bit worrying but I think that now that he's entered canon it should develop at a more normal speed. I dont think he should be king after a year and beat his dad already. and as long as the MC doesn't get hypocritical in his thoughts or attitude then I'd say he's pretty awesome all around. Id love for him to be with Alice but ultimately I don't really mind. I would like it if he left erina for his bro tho lol. Grammar is above average and I can only hope he updates this story more often!
Great so far. my only issue is that he got good really quickly but I think that is mostly a personal preference. 4.9/5
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I kidnapped your family if you don't give me more chapters you will never see them again😈😈😈😈😈😈
I tried reading this just for fun. Turns out it's really good. I recommend this if you're fine with a system.
10 chapter's in and has been a good read so far I hope people don't be pathetic and give 1 star's just because the fanfic isn't to their own liking
Wow just wow never seen any fanfic of food wars but im enjoying this one so much! Hope you continue this amazing story and don't drop it author!
Nice fanfiction. I really like Sorans system and hope that he is going to show Totsuki his skill. I do not want him to be looked down upon. Hope you are not going to drop
One of the best of the very few food wars fanfic, hard working and talented mc with a handsome appearance😉.Nice World background and carachter interactions.
Food wars fifa are rare, and so far this is an enjoyment to read especially our MC growth keep up the great work!!!
This was good, there aren’t enough good Food Wars stories, I just hope he doesn’t rely on the system TOO much. A system can REALLY wreck a story when it’s overused.
The story is progressing well, but there are not many chapters.I hope he doesn't become dependent on the system.----------------------------------------
There’s not much I can say as there is only one chapter but so far it’s pretty good tbh. The writing quality is superb as usual, can’t say much in the updating stability same with the story development and character design, as for world background it’s food wars
Do you itend to continue this novel in the future maybe, bc it has good potential?
I what you to make more chapters Bbecause I want to read more food wars and it been so long since someone made A food wars fanfic 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄🤩🤩
Amazing fanfiction. I love Soran's personality and how he is not hiding his cooking abilities.
fun fic. Definitely needs more characterization and chapters. Soma seems to be taking a back seat even though he's still a top tier cook. I think having Soma becoming just as good as MC but through the background grind seems like a good idea.
as a previous comment stated there few food wars fanfic and this definitely is one of the best.
everything is great so far the grammar is good, the character in interactions is great and close to their original personality, the plot does not strictly closely follow the common plot, though the updating schedule is atrocious i hope the author publish more chapters.
Don't get many Food Wars fanfic so this rating of 5/5 is relative compared to others of the same story and not a reflection of its overall quality. Still the story is pretty awesome and his new life origin meshes very well. No having to create a family and feelings from scratch, it would of been forced unless he wanted a drawn out pre-canon info dump that lasted a lot more chapters. I like the chemistry between them and the impact hes already had on them and canon. he's not afraid to change the plot, even if its just minimal at this point. I like the system, and as long as it stays simple then ill be happy. His growth rate was a bit worrying but I think that now that he's entered canon it should develop at a more normal speed. I dont think he should be king after a year and beat his dad already. and as long as the MC doesn't get hypocritical in his thoughts or attitude then I'd say he's pretty awesome all around. Id love for him to be with Alice but ultimately I don't really mind. I would like it if he left erina for his bro tho lol. Grammar is above average and I can only hope he updates this story more often!
Great so far. my only issue is that he got good really quickly but I think that is mostly a personal preference. 4.9/5
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I kidnapped your family if you don't give me more chapters you will never see them again😈😈😈😈😈😈
I tried reading this just for fun. Turns out it's really good. I recommend this if you're fine with a system.
10 chapter's in and has been a good read so far I hope people don't be pathetic and give 1 star's just because the fanfic isn't to their own liking
Wow just wow never seen any fanfic of food wars but im enjoying this one so much! Hope you continue this amazing story and don't drop it author!
Nice fanfiction. I really like Sorans system and hope that he is going to show Totsuki his skill. I do not want him to be looked down upon. Hope you are not going to drop
One of the best of the very few food wars fanfic, hard working and talented mc with a handsome appearance😉.Nice World background and carachter interactions.
Food wars fifa are rare, and so far this is an enjoyment to read especially our MC growth keep up the great work!!!
This was good, there aren’t enough good Food Wars stories, I just hope he doesn’t rely on the system TOO much. A system can REALLY wreck a story when it’s overused.
The story is progressing well, but there are not many chapters.I hope he doesn't become dependent on the system.----------------------------------------
There’s not much I can say as there is only one chapter but so far it’s pretty good tbh. The writing quality is superb as usual, can’t say much in the updating stability same with the story development and character design, as for world background it’s food wars
Do you itend to continue this novel in the future maybe, bc it has good potential?