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missing such a nice story. all the elements we search in fantasy-reincarnation-magic world are there. sometimes the characters seems too good natured, always changing the behavior from bad guy to good one... even those from the face slapping arcs but despite this everything is sweet.
the beginning of the novel was good, but around chapter 25 the author starts to plagiarize word for word the novel 'the reincarnated assassin is a genius swordsman'. so you can find several inconsistencies between the events (since the protagonist of this novel is stronger than that of the other), sometimes the author is wrong in his age, 10 years old instead of 6 years old, random events, for example the MC says that his grandfather has been training him since he was 3 years old with a difficult training but he is suddenly tired from a run, while his grandfather made him run with all his strength with an added gravity. I will continue to read that novel, but if the plagiarism does not stop before chapter 40 I will stop.
It is really a disappointment: unfortunately, the author has copied many ideas bluntly. Until chapter 80 it is more or less in modified version of The Reincarnated Assassin is a Genius Swordman. The worse is that the author copies his own story again and again. Since I can say of luck that I read the chapters for free, but to read the same chapters three times is then too much of a good thing.
I hope one day you will write a novel in which an Indian man got transferred or reincarnated in Another world and what kind of adventure he is going to have. I would love to see him spreading Indian culture and make his country.
chapter 59 and 60 are repeated please check and make sure that the chapters are not repeated
hey author, are you by chance an Indian. I have heard that the Moryan empire comes in Indian history
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I love this stuff , thank you for making something form Indain history , keep it up will support you 🎈
this novel's good, I see you have taken inspiration from reincarnated assassin is a genius swordsmen. that novel was good in starting but got too repetitive so i dropped it. do something unique in this which isn't there and this novel will flourish.
very slow paced, felt like it could be improved. Other than that, very good novel.
The novel looks good and has potential. We'll see how long the author takes it.
Good world building, happy to see that the author is actually putting effort to make a good world background. The story is good so far, waiting for more chapters.
The Novel is of great quality, there is a lot of interesting parts, one of which is the cliffhangers which make me want to know what’s next, the authors grammar and sentence’s are also good. I really like this Book.
Great Concept of the story but for any indian out there our world shown is too small like it has some part of up and only bihar.The real mauryan empire was bigger or atleast had many enemies sorrounding it.If mc's kingdom has contol of the whole continent then give more regions give more backstory and keep up the good work its really great concept and i loved it (its noble)
Great story building and right amount of cliffhanger to keep the excitement
This is GOLD... I totally love it, the story development, while a bit slow paced, doesn't affect the reader's attention span. You described the characters and their situations really well. Also, your intercharacter conversations flow really well, with all the descriptions in the right place. Definitely going to keep reading this one, It's already in the library
missing such a nice story. all the elements we search in fantasy-reincarnation-magic world are there. sometimes the characters seems too good natured, always changing the behavior from bad guy to good one... even those from the face slapping arcs but despite this everything is sweet.
the beginning of the novel was good, but around chapter 25 the author starts to plagiarize word for word the novel 'the reincarnated assassin is a genius swordsman'. so you can find several inconsistencies between the events (since the protagonist of this novel is stronger than that of the other), sometimes the author is wrong in his age, 10 years old instead of 6 years old, random events, for example the MC says that his grandfather has been training him since he was 3 years old with a difficult training but he is suddenly tired from a run, while his grandfather made him run with all his strength with an added gravity. I will continue to read that novel, but if the plagiarism does not stop before chapter 40 I will stop.
It is really a disappointment: unfortunately, the author has copied many ideas bluntly. Until chapter 80 it is more or less in modified version of The Reincarnated Assassin is a Genius Swordman. The worse is that the author copies his own story again and again. Since I can say of luck that I read the chapters for free, but to read the same chapters three times is then too much of a good thing.
I hope one day you will write a novel in which an Indian man got transferred or reincarnated in Another world and what kind of adventure he is going to have. I would love to see him spreading Indian culture and make his country.
chapter 59 and 60 are repeated please check and make sure that the chapters are not repeated
hey author, are you by chance an Indian. I have heard that the Moryan empire comes in Indian history
.......................,,.....,..................,.,..,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,,.,..,..,.,.,,...,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.
I love this stuff , thank you for making something form Indain history , keep it up will support you 🎈
this novel's good, I see you have taken inspiration from reincarnated assassin is a genius swordsmen. that novel was good in starting but got too repetitive so i dropped it. do something unique in this which isn't there and this novel will flourish.
very slow paced, felt like it could be improved. Other than that, very good novel.
The novel looks good and has potential. We'll see how long the author takes it.
Good world building, happy to see that the author is actually putting effort to make a good world background. The story is good so far, waiting for more chapters.
The Novel is of great quality, there is a lot of interesting parts, one of which is the cliffhangers which make me want to know what’s next, the authors grammar and sentence’s are also good. I really like this Book.
Great Concept of the story but for any indian out there our world shown is too small like it has some part of up and only bihar.The real mauryan empire was bigger or atleast had many enemies sorrounding it.If mc's kingdom has contol of the whole continent then give more regions give more backstory and keep up the good work its really great concept and i loved it (its noble)
Great story building and right amount of cliffhanger to keep the excitement
This is GOLD... I totally love it, the story development, while a bit slow paced, doesn't affect the reader's attention span. You described the characters and their situations really well. Also, your intercharacter conversations flow really well, with all the descriptions in the right place. Definitely going to keep reading this one, It's already in the library