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Honeslty, its unlike any other DxD fanfic I’ve seen. Maybe the novel “The Wish of a Dragon” comes close as in a character of DxD coming into contact with a greater being, but I see this one has more potential for pure romance and passion than the other novel did. Plus it aligns with my preferences I want in a fanfic. I am not averse to character development, but i despise it when physical and mental growth are attempted to be achieved at the same time while the antagonists grow greater in power and numbers. it makes everything chaotic while the MC is making stupid decisions with so much to focus on. so seeing something already at the top rung of the food chain achieving character development and personal growth is more entertaining for me. Just my preference. ALL-IN-ALL A very promising start. I look foward to seeing whats next.
had fun reading it until author dropped. first author said he going on hiatus but he's just making a new book and like the rest of author book just abandoned. every author out there will have ever to fulfill their promise
The story is interesting it's fun to read and i hope that ether and destiny will be part of harem
De las mejores historias que he leído solamente que decepciona que para seguir leyendo, debemos pagar ,cundo puede hacer como otros autores de subir no se , unos 10 capitulo en Patreon de paga y aquí uno hasta que se termine
De los mejores fics de DXD trama buena y personaje bien creado. ES literatura pura el fic ☝️🧐 Espero y la historia siga avanzando!!!! 😫😫😫
updating stability is slow, otherwise a solid DxD fanfiction, so please update soon......
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This the same guy who wrote vampire in my wife is a CEO? Can't be lol this is awful and the other story written wayyyyy better.
definitely one of my favorite DXD fic, it has a different take to the draconic deus, and i love it.
this is by far one of the best DXD fics I've read, author did a very good job with it. please continue to update this ans don't drop.
I will never understand how they can screw up the DXD Plot. its protagonist is terrible and its super simple plot, the only thing you have to do is not commit all the nonsense of the anime and you will have a decent story but even so they make mc as unbearable as the original, romance that sucks and a super basic plot
I've read pretty much every single decent dxd related fic and I have to say that this is certainly a rare gem among these. As long as you don't mind harems (which if you don't idk what you're doing for in dxd fanfiction) you'll love it.
I do not plan to insult or offend anyone. This got off to a good start along with an excellent romance. But the development of the world of dxd, against the gods was horrendous, the actions of the mc, the heroines and the characters were stupid, and also all the time showing meaningless flashbacks. Another annoying thing is the power levels, a total disaster, at first he shows you that he can only destroy planets, but the next moment we see the mc fighting and destroying at multiversal levels. richer leaving all those treasures just like that, just like jie yuan leaving the pearl and the samsara artifact...
I can't take it any more, the MC has been controlled by his women from the start, can' he have his own will, his own decisions? apart from his strength, he is nothing, at least Alucard in A Vampire in My Wife is a Beautiful CEO have a little say in his relationships, and the main lead of that novel Catherine in not overbearing to to this degree like Grayfia obsession of controlling the MC life, and this MC is happy to comply, honestly this novel is about Grayfia, and the MC is bonus.
This is great that's all I can say it just really unique with how it started and the fact that this is a mixture of being both a ml novel and fl and how they got together is such a good story lastly who doesn't like Grayfia Lucifuge so all in all godly author
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A good story however I am unable to enjoy it. The author is excellent at creating characters and the relationships between them aswell as building a living world for these characters to reside in. And it is because the world is so alive that I am unable to enjoy the story as it produces a stark contrast between the characters and the reality they exist in when compared to the original settings genre. I found myself loving the relationship between Grafia and the MC but then feeling horrible due to how the background factions of the original setting were treated. This is because author has a talent with writing what I would call real world fiction and it clashes with the genre. I am probably explaining this horribly however I am clear in the following, the author would excel in fiction with little to no fantasy or supernatural aspects.
The writing quality is amazing by web novel standards. Though the storytelling could further improve if it were written in the third person POV. The MC is far too strong in the DXD world which renders the build-up and suspense stale. It could've been a good slice-of-life type of story, but ruined by the author's overt enthusiasm. If you thought DXD women were already too many, the author introduces more OCs and crossovers characters. It is ambitious on the author's part. However, it falls short due to speed-running the build-up of relationships. All I have read is that almost every woman the MC meet is thirsting for him. Whilst understandable since strength attracts, because of the MCs laid back easy personality relationships felt shallow, and currently 145 chapters in it get harder to read. Conclusion of "MY" opinion; High-quality grammar, storytelling could have been better, too many characters, no build-up of romance(except for maybe Grayfia), predictable events, confusing world background(the original world of the MC), good character design for the MC but most of the women are left to be desired("bland" if I would've been more direct). It has potential but with the current state of the story, it has been boring. Finally, what I like about the author is that he is a God updating three stories! what a mad lad. Everything is of my opinion and I hope I have not offended somebody. Author, you may correct me if I might have misinterpreted.
Well, what can I say, I like ur books. U got mah interest in the first few chaps and u got me hook in the lemon parts or so. U got the plot, u got the good grammars, u got the little bit of drama, u got the multiverse travel, u got the OCs, u got the gals and lasses in the harem, and u got the big D that hold them together, last but not the least and the main reason I'm reading this fic cause u cuck Sirzech.God!!!! I hate that guy.....
Hi bro, I have a crazy story idea in my mind and I need a prologue that is familiar with your book. I mean, the part where Grayfia chases the guy (MC). That's all, but I feel like I need your permission to do it. Just to ease my guilt a bit, is that okay?
The Writing Quality is very good. The problem is with the pacing and characters, they look too chinese or too edgy (which is the same thing but not in chinese way), 20 chapters past this and im still reading the prologue not wasting my time reading more of that too slow for me
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Review: Shameless. First World: High-School DxD. First Waifu: Grayfia Lucifuge. Genres: Action, Romance, Harem, Overpowered. Lemons: Yes. Multiverse travel: Yes. *** How much character development do you want? Yes. How many girls do you want in the harem? Yes. How many lemons do you want? Yes. Is the person reading this gay? Yes. What else do you want? start reading.
Honeslty, its unlike any other DxD fanfic I’ve seen. Maybe the novel “The Wish of a Dragon” comes close as in a character of DxD coming into contact with a greater being, but I see this one has more potential for pure romance and passion than the other novel did. Plus it aligns with my preferences I want in a fanfic. I am not averse to character development, but i despise it when physical and mental growth are attempted to be achieved at the same time while the antagonists grow greater in power and numbers. it makes everything chaotic while the MC is making stupid decisions with so much to focus on. so seeing something already at the top rung of the food chain achieving character development and personal growth is more entertaining for me. Just my preference. ALL-IN-ALL A very promising start. I look foward to seeing whats next.
had fun reading it until author dropped. first author said he going on hiatus but he's just making a new book and like the rest of author book just abandoned. every author out there will have ever to fulfill their promise
The story is interesting it's fun to read and i hope that ether and destiny will be part of harem
De las mejores historias que he leído solamente que decepciona que para seguir leyendo, debemos pagar ,cundo puede hacer como otros autores de subir no se , unos 10 capitulo en Patreon de paga y aquí uno hasta que se termine
De los mejores fics de DXD trama buena y personaje bien creado. ES literatura pura el fic ☝️🧐 Espero y la historia siga avanzando!!!! 😫😫😫
updating stability is slow, otherwise a solid DxD fanfiction, so please update soon......
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I’m love your novel. please update more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This the same guy who wrote vampire in my wife is a CEO? Can't be lol this is awful and the other story written wayyyyy better.
definitely one of my favorite DXD fic, it has a different take to the draconic deus, and i love it.
this is by far one of the best DXD fics I've read, author did a very good job with it. please continue to update this ans don't drop.
I will never understand how they can screw up the DXD Plot. its protagonist is terrible and its super simple plot, the only thing you have to do is not commit all the nonsense of the anime and you will have a decent story but even so they make mc as unbearable as the original, romance that sucks and a super basic plot
I've read pretty much every single decent dxd related fic and I have to say that this is certainly a rare gem among these. As long as you don't mind harems (which if you don't idk what you're doing for in dxd fanfiction) you'll love it.
I do not plan to insult or offend anyone. This got off to a good start along with an excellent romance. But the development of the world of dxd, against the gods was horrendous, the actions of the mc, the heroines and the characters were stupid, and also all the time showing meaningless flashbacks. Another annoying thing is the power levels, a total disaster, at first he shows you that he can only destroy planets, but the next moment we see the mc fighting and destroying at multiversal levels. richer leaving all those treasures just like that, just like jie yuan leaving the pearl and the samsara artifact...
I can't take it any more, the MC has been controlled by his women from the start, can' he have his own will, his own decisions? apart from his strength, he is nothing, at least Alucard in A Vampire in My Wife is a Beautiful CEO have a little say in his relationships, and the main lead of that novel Catherine in not overbearing to to this degree like Grayfia obsession of controlling the MC life, and this MC is happy to comply, honestly this novel is about Grayfia, and the MC is bonus.
This is great that's all I can say it just really unique with how it started and the fact that this is a mixture of being both a ml novel and fl and how they got together is such a good story lastly who doesn't like Grayfia Lucifuge so all in all godly author
揭示劇透 A good story however I am unable to enjoy it. The author is excellent at creating characters and the relationships between them aswell as building a living world for these characters to reside in. And it is because the world is so alive that I am unable to enjoy the story as it produces a stark contrast between the characters and the reality they exist in when compared to the original settings genre. I found myself loving the relationship between Grafia and the MC but then feeling horrible due to how the background factions of the original setting were treated. This is because author has a talent with writing what I would call real world fiction and it clashes with the genre. I am probably explaining this horribly however I am clear in the following, the author would excel in fiction with little to no fantasy or supernatural aspects.
The writing quality is amazing by web novel standards. Though the storytelling could further improve if it were written in the third person POV. The MC is far too strong in the DXD world which renders the build-up and suspense stale. It could've been a good slice-of-life type of story, but ruined by the author's overt enthusiasm. If you thought DXD women were already too many, the author introduces more OCs and crossovers characters. It is ambitious on the author's part. However, it falls short due to speed-running the build-up of relationships. All I have read is that almost every woman the MC meet is thirsting for him. Whilst understandable since strength attracts, because of the MCs laid back easy personality relationships felt shallow, and currently 145 chapters in it get harder to read. Conclusion of "MY" opinion; High-quality grammar, storytelling could have been better, too many characters, no build-up of romance(except for maybe Grayfia), predictable events, confusing world background(the original world of the MC), good character design for the MC but most of the women are left to be desired("bland" if I would've been more direct). It has potential but with the current state of the story, it has been boring. Finally, what I like about the author is that he is a God updating three stories! what a mad lad. Everything is of my opinion and I hope I have not offended somebody. Author, you may correct me if I might have misinterpreted.
Well, what can I say, I like ur books. U got mah interest in the first few chaps and u got me hook in the lemon parts or so. U got the plot, u got the good grammars, u got the little bit of drama, u got the multiverse travel, u got the OCs, u got the gals and lasses in the harem, and u got the big D that hold them together, last but not the least and the main reason I'm reading this fic cause u cuck Sirzech.God!!!! I hate that guy.....
Hi bro, I have a crazy story idea in my mind and I need a prologue that is familiar with your book. I mean, the part where Grayfia chases the guy (MC). That's all, but I feel like I need your permission to do it. Just to ease my guilt a bit, is that okay?
The Writing Quality is very good. The problem is with the pacing and characters, they look too chinese or too edgy (which is the same thing but not in chinese way), 20 chapters past this and im still reading the prologue not wasting my time reading more of that too slow for me
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Review: Shameless. First World: High-School DxD. First Waifu: Grayfia Lucifuge. Genres: Action, Romance, Harem, Overpowered. Lemons: Yes. Multiverse travel: Yes. *** How much character development do you want? Yes. How many girls do you want in the harem? Yes. How many lemons do you want? Yes. Is the person reading this gay? Yes. What else do you want? start reading.