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Keep up the good work, this is a fantastic story,so please continue to upload it I'll love to read rest of the chapters too............................... ...................................... . .. ..
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So it started innocently enough but then.... All I had in mind was : "Who hurt you lil bro" Creativity in torture scenes, humor and a tiny bit of Insanity(I lied about tiny bit) makes it easily top 10 ff on my list. And it's not all of course. So you should at least try it out I wish the author will have all the will power and inspiration they need to continue that wonderful fanfiic.
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It is a slow-burn story, but very entertaining. The world-building is nice, and the characters are interesting. Even though the author only releases 1 chapter/week, the wait is well rewarded.
I think it would be better to name the decild fruit the transmutation,change,molecular, or the reality devil fruit with those powers because it can't be called the life life fruit because it does more than change non living thing into living things like he uses it to make huge holes in the ground made giant rocks fall from the sky those are not abilities associated with life it could be like the natural or nature devil fruit or even the planet devil fruit where he can change the planet around him
if you skip the first 4 chapters and ignore the broly rob, it's a decent story
Couldn’t get past the first chapter, it was too boring for me. Story might or might not be good, I have no clue. To be honest, I don’t even know why I’m making this review, you could call this a whim I guess.
This is honestly probably one of the best one piece fanfics out there it takes its time to develop the characters and their relationships and the mc is cool and has huge potential. Cant wait till we reach canon
At first I really enjoyed it but the graphic things explained happening to the women kidnapped by pirates including those he and his friends care about really ruined it for me…
I started this with high expectations but it's just disappointing. The writing is bad, it's too verbose, author is proud of his long chapters when it's mostly extra paragraphs of nothing. The dialogues are also separated by new lines, why tf would you do that? The story isn't slow paced, it's just filled with unneccessary fluff. The prologue is way too long just to setup a punchline. The other characters are okay but MC is an isekai'd 29 yo man 9/10 yo currently and his inner monologues are just cringey weeb stuff! all the freaking time! updates are slow. world background is one piece, I still don't see a glimpse of Author's own One Piece story. I'll edit my review if I see any improvement.
One-This is not for those who can't read slow paced storyOther than that it's a full star for everything from writing,characters and world background especially how he build the hometown of mc
I usually read reviews first but your synopsis got me. Good work on that one
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(Up to Chapter 55) I'm not usually one to do a review, but this fanfic fascinated me, so I had to do one. Btw, sorry for my English; I'm not a native speaker. Writing Quality: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ I do not see a big issue with the grammar, probably because I am not a native speaker lol. Stability of Updates: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ It is not the best, but it is not the worst. Story Development: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ I really like the story's development. From his training until his interaction with his family. Yes, the fight was dragged out, but that is not a big issue with this story. Character Design: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ In my opinion, is this the best thing about this fanfic? The characters feel real. From their interaction to the emotions. And the main character also feels like a human who can feel sadness, pain and is capable of crying, which is quite rare in most of the fanfics. World Background: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ It is the one piece verse. What else is there to say. All in all, that is a rare gem that is not easy to find. I 100% recommend this to you, so don't let the first 4 chapters discourage you from stopping to read it; instead, read up to 10 chapters to decide if this suits your taste.
In general the story is good, but what didn't captivate me was the way the author wrote the ff, as if it were an anime and not a book or even the narrative about what is happening and the environment, And what's going on in the scene, but apart from that the proposal is good, it just didn't please my taste, but I recommend that everyone read it and draw their own conclusions (I recommend reading about 5-15 chapters before To decide if it will drop or not)
The story is good but feels extremely dragged out. The first major fight was nearly 10 chapters long which is dragged too much. I had to scheme through some of the chapters which felt like a chore to read. Also there is too much emotions with character. I think it would be better that you lowered that a bit. Also sometimes the main character feel unnatural.
when i first started reading the novel, i did not think i would like it due to excessive monologues in the first few chapters. However I was clearly wrong. the characters grow on you, and their interactions are so reminiscent of humor in actual one piece. Now my favorite part of the novel is that its actually realistic with dark moments. also MC isnt overpowered but has to work hard for eveything he has or developed. he doesnt shy away from danger and nor he does he let people walk over him. he uses eveytjing including his brain to his advantage in every situation. The characters are all also very likeable once you get to knpw them. i just finished the leech pirates arc and it was absolutely incredible. I really recommend this novel as its one of my favorite one piece fanfics now. Ps: RIP Schrodinger
Amazing story, hilarious comedy and great characters, but u spent too much time on the origin arc
Good read so far. MC is realistic, hard working and his monologue quite funny, i had fair share of laugh reading that, the only thing that i don't like is his tragic backstory before starting his adventure but that just my preferences. MC has golden finger like any other reincarnator but it's really weak and not explored more while I read till latest chapter. Update rate is quite long with one chap per week but the word count makes it passable. also there's a bit of typo in there and here so I suggest using Google docs or grammarly before upload it in here.
My opinion? The fanfic is not bad, but the ending of the first volume is a bit long. At least it's not stupid romance or a typical harem, but that's something. I advise you to pay less attention to the violent scenes, as this is not quite in the spirit of one piece, although it gives this fanfic a distinctive feature. Also... I have no idea how the character of the protagonist will develop now and what place he wants to take in this fictional world now... Is this a reimagined version of his past famous incarnation?
It's kind of fun but it's slow so far and with no one piece characters, but it's going well and it's building the MC up pretty well, if a bit weird for general taste and with some plot holes, but it's pretty good so far.
smooth story development, unhurried story, good details. interesting story. mc that does not have cheats but depends on the potential of the human brain. The mc character is well explored and so are the other featured characters. so far it's a story that almost makes sense for a one piece fanfic. the story is a tragic reminder but acceptable for the story of this novel because i see much worse manga stories.the fighting skills of the mc is like an assassin and that is well done and easy to imagine. well i hope mc really hate pirates with this tragedy and take the path of assassin. hope the author continues to make mc who uses his brain compared to his strength and i'm sick of mc's using brain strength[power] and his horrible monologue, also hope the author doesn't make mc a babysister/luffy fan and keep mc away from luffy's crew and better not make them friends [neutral]
It's an extremely good book but it gets very dark very fast I've currently read all of the chapters currently released on webnovel and I gotta say their is a lot of fuvked up stuff depicted in this book
I really recommend it, at first it made me doubt but the character is developing well [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
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5 stars no doubt .....................................................................................................................................................................................
It's Meralman, its obviously going to be amazing like his Dragon Ball novel, which to this day remains my favourite, and the one I've reread the most. I've been looking forward to his new book from the time he first mentioned it and I am so happy its here
I really liked the fanfic with Broly, so I decided to give this one a try, but I have to say I'm very disappointed... Broly's personality made sense given his power and abilities, but the problem here is that the MC, with a strength level like East Blue Luffy, is even more arrogant than Broly was when he was at his strongest... x) Even though this story is better written and more serious, there are too many unnecessarily long plotlines, and we meet characters and crews who end up being irrelevant to the future of the story. In short, this is what keeps me from continuing to read this fanfic. It's a shame because I liked the pace and humor of the Broly fanfic.
Keep up the good work, this is a fantastic story,so please continue to upload it I'll love to read rest of the chapters too............................... ...................................... . .. ..
one of the best one piece fanfictions I have ever read[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
So it started innocently enough but then.... All I had in mind was : "Who hurt you lil bro" Creativity in torture scenes, humor and a tiny bit of Insanity(I lied about tiny bit) makes it easily top 10 ff on my list. And it's not all of course. So you should at least try it out I wish the author will have all the will power and inspiration they need to continue that wonderful fanfiic.
揭示劇透 It is a slow-burn story, but very entertaining. The world-building is nice, and the characters are interesting. Even though the author only releases 1 chapter/week, the wait is well rewarded.
I think it would be better to name the decild fruit the transmutation,change,molecular, or the reality devil fruit with those powers because it can't be called the life life fruit because it does more than change non living thing into living things like he uses it to make huge holes in the ground made giant rocks fall from the sky those are not abilities associated with life it could be like the natural or nature devil fruit or even the planet devil fruit where he can change the planet around him
if you skip the first 4 chapters and ignore the broly rob, it's a decent story
Couldn’t get past the first chapter, it was too boring for me. Story might or might not be good, I have no clue. To be honest, I don’t even know why I’m making this review, you could call this a whim I guess.
This is honestly probably one of the best one piece fanfics out there it takes its time to develop the characters and their relationships and the mc is cool and has huge potential. Cant wait till we reach canon
At first I really enjoyed it but the graphic things explained happening to the women kidnapped by pirates including those he and his friends care about really ruined it for me…
I started this with high expectations but it's just disappointing. The writing is bad, it's too verbose, author is proud of his long chapters when it's mostly extra paragraphs of nothing. The dialogues are also separated by new lines, why tf would you do that? The story isn't slow paced, it's just filled with unneccessary fluff. The prologue is way too long just to setup a punchline. The other characters are okay but MC is an isekai'd 29 yo man 9/10 yo currently and his inner monologues are just cringey weeb stuff! all the freaking time! updates are slow. world background is one piece, I still don't see a glimpse of Author's own One Piece story. I'll edit my review if I see any improvement.
One-This is not for those who can't read slow paced storyOther than that it's a full star for everything from writing,characters and world background especially how he build the hometown of mc
I usually read reviews first but your synopsis got me. Good work on that one
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(Up to Chapter 55) I'm not usually one to do a review, but this fanfic fascinated me, so I had to do one. Btw, sorry for my English; I'm not a native speaker. Writing Quality: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ I do not see a big issue with the grammar, probably because I am not a native speaker lol. Stability of Updates: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ It is not the best, but it is not the worst. Story Development: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ I really like the story's development. From his training until his interaction with his family. Yes, the fight was dragged out, but that is not a big issue with this story. Character Design: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ In my opinion, is this the best thing about this fanfic? The characters feel real. From their interaction to the emotions. And the main character also feels like a human who can feel sadness, pain and is capable of crying, which is quite rare in most of the fanfics. World Background: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ It is the one piece verse. What else is there to say. All in all, that is a rare gem that is not easy to find. I 100% recommend this to you, so don't let the first 4 chapters discourage you from stopping to read it; instead, read up to 10 chapters to decide if this suits your taste.
In general the story is good, but what didn't captivate me was the way the author wrote the ff, as if it were an anime and not a book or even the narrative about what is happening and the environment, And what's going on in the scene, but apart from that the proposal is good, it just didn't please my taste, but I recommend that everyone read it and draw their own conclusions (I recommend reading about 5-15 chapters before To decide if it will drop or not)
The story is good but feels extremely dragged out. The first major fight was nearly 10 chapters long which is dragged too much. I had to scheme through some of the chapters which felt like a chore to read. Also there is too much emotions with character. I think it would be better that you lowered that a bit. Also sometimes the main character feel unnatural.
when i first started reading the novel, i did not think i would like it due to excessive monologues in the first few chapters. However I was clearly wrong. the characters grow on you, and their interactions are so reminiscent of humor in actual one piece. Now my favorite part of the novel is that its actually realistic with dark moments. also MC isnt overpowered but has to work hard for eveything he has or developed. he doesnt shy away from danger and nor he does he let people walk over him. he uses eveytjing including his brain to his advantage in every situation. The characters are all also very likeable once you get to knpw them. i just finished the leech pirates arc and it was absolutely incredible. I really recommend this novel as its one of my favorite one piece fanfics now. Ps: RIP Schrodinger
Amazing story, hilarious comedy and great characters, but u spent too much time on the origin arc
Good read so far. MC is realistic, hard working and his monologue quite funny, i had fair share of laugh reading that, the only thing that i don't like is his tragic backstory before starting his adventure but that just my preferences. MC has golden finger like any other reincarnator but it's really weak and not explored more while I read till latest chapter. Update rate is quite long with one chap per week but the word count makes it passable. also there's a bit of typo in there and here so I suggest using Google docs or grammarly before upload it in here.
My opinion? The fanfic is not bad, but the ending of the first volume is a bit long. At least it's not stupid romance or a typical harem, but that's something. I advise you to pay less attention to the violent scenes, as this is not quite in the spirit of one piece, although it gives this fanfic a distinctive feature. Also... I have no idea how the character of the protagonist will develop now and what place he wants to take in this fictional world now... Is this a reimagined version of his past famous incarnation?
It's kind of fun but it's slow so far and with no one piece characters, but it's going well and it's building the MC up pretty well, if a bit weird for general taste and with some plot holes, but it's pretty good so far.
smooth story development, unhurried story, good details. interesting story. mc that does not have cheats but depends on the potential of the human brain. The mc character is well explored and so are the other featured characters. so far it's a story that almost makes sense for a one piece fanfic. the story is a tragic reminder but acceptable for the story of this novel because i see much worse manga stories.the fighting skills of the mc is like an assassin and that is well done and easy to imagine. well i hope mc really hate pirates with this tragedy and take the path of assassin. hope the author continues to make mc who uses his brain compared to his strength and i'm sick of mc's using brain strength[power] and his horrible monologue, also hope the author doesn't make mc a babysister/luffy fan and keep mc away from luffy's crew and better not make them friends [neutral]
It's an extremely good book but it gets very dark very fast I've currently read all of the chapters currently released on webnovel and I gotta say their is a lot of fuvked up stuff depicted in this book
I really recommend it, at first it made me doubt but the character is developing well [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
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5 stars no doubt .....................................................................................................................................................................................
It's Meralman, its obviously going to be amazing like his Dragon Ball novel, which to this day remains my favourite, and the one I've reread the most. I've been looking forward to his new book from the time he first mentioned it and I am so happy its here
I really liked the fanfic with Broly, so I decided to give this one a try, but I have to say I'm very disappointed... Broly's personality made sense given his power and abilities, but the problem here is that the MC, with a strength level like East Blue Luffy, is even more arrogant than Broly was when he was at his strongest... x) Even though this story is better written and more serious, there are too many unnecessarily long plotlines, and we meet characters and crews who end up being irrelevant to the future of the story. In short, this is what keeps me from continuing to read this fanfic. It's a shame because I liked the pace and humor of the Broly fanfic.