3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
An entertaining story, nothing complex, nothing new and different, but I enjoy that sometimes. especially on this app where every story fights to be different and morally ambiguous, this kinda story is starting to become the outlier instead of the mainstream. Id say maybe update the synopsis and let the people know there are DC elements because that may discourage some folks from enjoying this as much. grammar is decent and the world isn't the normal cinematic one which I can appreciate. im a fan of superman and his struggle between his human and alien selves so I look forward to the future chapters. only true negative is the updating speed but people have lives outside of fanfics so its understandable. If you like a story that tries to stay to true to the Heroe's core identity id say give this a read.
well it's written that it's superman in marvel, not a fusion of dc and marvel '-', are you trolling the author?____________________________
Author I have three possible love interest candidates for the man of steel in marvel. Emma Frost, Wanda Maximoff, Jennifer Walters; these three woman deserve someone like the MC.
An entertaining story, nothing complex, nothing new and different, but I enjoy that sometimes. especially on this app where every story fights to be different and morally ambiguous, this kinda story is starting to become the outlier instead of the mainstream. Id say maybe update the synopsis and let the people know there are DC elements because that may discourage some folks from enjoying this as much. grammar is decent and the world isn't the normal cinematic one which I can appreciate. im a fan of superman and his struggle between his human and alien selves so I look forward to the future chapters. only true negative is the updating speed but people have lives outside of fanfics so its understandable. If you like a story that tries to stay to true to the Heroe's core identity id say give this a read.
well it's written that it's superman in marvel, not a fusion of dc and marvel '-', are you trolling the author?____________________________
Author I have three possible love interest candidates for the man of steel in marvel. Emma Frost, Wanda Maximoff, Jennifer Walters; these three woman deserve someone like the MC.