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Worderfull story... It is very much worth your time to read this book... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Warning: The story shifted towards Mtl version translation from chater 1411...MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....
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I deeply respect author for being consistent, still on the road to the same goal, added to it but it's basically the same, the world building and it's elements didn't just change halfway through, anything that was added meshed with whatever was already there. Most of the stuff I started out liking and reading around the time i started this i basically already dropped. This one stood tall. It reminds me of the old stuff like i shall seal the heavens and the desolate era, and stuff from that time. Where writers actually gave a shit about their work, instead of just writing for the sake of writing. Back then it took getting halfway through a thousand chapter book to even start to see inconsistencies, and the chapters were long, min 2000 words, some going all the way to 10000 and beyond. These days the problems start from the first chapter, the gimmicks and themes are the main plot devices, systems, golden fingers are the actual story and most of the time they're not even well thought out. I miss having face slapping situations that actually made sense. But i digress it's good author, thank you and i know it's not done and it might get worse but for now i am thankful and so i thank you. currently following closely 1400+ as i post this
One of the best book i have ever read. Has Solid world background, and author knows what he is doing. So far in story(1357), there is little to no unreasonable power ups. Though story takes time to develop more but it is amazing. Almost all characters have some purpose, almost no nonsense character. MC is low key and no harem(maybe romance at late) MC doesn't become OP from start but put lot of efforts for it. For people wanting Magic, yup there is but not from start. Magic intro was a good arc. Almost all Arcs are good. Long Story, worth to read.
I feel like the author is trying to disrespect every religion in the world through this novel.😐
I honestly thought that the author did a good job with power progression resets. I feel like a lot of authors bungle the power transition, and the story gets old. I found myself entertained. I have read up to 1270, and I plan on continuing. I also really appreciated a non harem or food based read. For an over saturated genre, this was really worth reading.
Overall I have enjoyed this book. 81 chapters in. Levi transmigrated on Holy Brilliance Calendar year 1000 into the body of a 10 year old. His father Earl Schneider was a powerful knight but was likely betrayed by his superior the Duke Montenegro and the Church of the Emerald Kingdom. With his father dead and the kingdom turning a blind eye the neighboring earls seize 2/3rds of his ancestral land only leaving him the least valuable area of Black Water Valley. Luckily his father had one loyal retainer, Sir Fred who takes it upon himself to raise and train Levi so that one day the Black Snake family can rise to prominence again. Levi will depend of his transmigration power of a proficiency panel to master different breathing techniques to become a Legendary Knight. Different kingdoms are pawns for religious conflict, untrustworthy nobles scheme and ancient evil stirs. Levi must not only become a knight but also find out how to master magic despite wizards and witches being as common as myth. So far, no harem or relationship. He’s not OP, at least yet. Very much a weak to strong story. Proficiency panel so far only works on knight breathing techniques, basic combat, and highly skilled professions like blacksmithing and alchemy. Maybe there will be more development later. The characters name did randomly change for one chapter, so hopefully they don’t screw up this novel because so far I have loved it.
the story is good so far, i like the progression. My only problem is chapter are divided to such a degree. There are cases wherein a chapter is divided into 8 parts, a very scummy move
AHEAD OF ITS'S TIME if your looking for a book similar to a record of a mortals journey to immortalality or warlock of the magus world . this is for you.
Idea base de los caballeros y sus niveles es algo interesante y podría hacer mucho con ella si lo desarrolla, pero se ve a lenguas distancia la mentalidad china y perro come perro y no hay sitio para más. Mentalidad de niño que se piensa que es el centro del mundo y solo sabe hacerse la pelota a si mismo, cuando no tiene porqué. Es un señor, un barón, piensa como tal, deberíamos ver desarrollo de personajes, desarrollo del reino y muchas intrigas y desafíos interesantes pero lo que veo es....una pena.
Honestly it took me like months to get past the first 100 chapters because the first bit was just so much information and at the same time nothing happened I got so bored. Then, the whole 100 chapters he just gets bullied constantly. I think this novel might be really entertaining for the right person, but I could NOT get through it..
I read 140 chapters, a novel worth wasting your time on....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Interesting synopsis, i like the concept of the MC power. It’s original. I have been hooked during 100+ chapters What i didn’t like is the lack of life. The MC is alone. His enemy or the very few people he meets are not described in depts. And he is too cold blooded
Great story. Love the progression. It based on the “ Warlock of the Magus World and other similar stories. Love that the MC continues with the knight path and does not abandon it.
The description of this story is a lie. The real description should be something like this: A very coward and pathetic person that only knows how to crawl on the ground in front of others gets reincarnated into a fantasy world in order to fully display his way of the turtle and amaze everyone by showing them how much of a loser he can be! Btw, this story is a bad translation.
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not like typical Chinese novels where mc is unnecessarily op from start. mc is op but it is within limits and there is no stupid faceslapping .
the MC is narcissistic and is some work, I'm not evil, I won't enslave the mind of this guy who was nice to me, I know let's enslave the mind of the king then the kingdom will be mine. Hi little girl is your father home? when father gets home, where is your treasure, if you don't hand it over I will torture your kind daughter, thank you now become one of my zombies, kill everyone here and burn this place down and leave no survivors, I'm a nice guy I did not torture the little girl I gave her a quick death.
i just read it initially because it was free. But I have to say it's got me hooked. will wait another 3-4 months to come back and read. it's a pain waiting for updates
The main reason why I’m on Webnovel. Good story where the character’s personality and behavior stays consistent and reasonable.
It's a pretty good read. Far better than most trial novels that get picked up. Although pretty generic with nothing new, it offers pretty decent quality. My only nitpick is that webnovel started to split 1 chapter into 3 mini chapters and then they increased it to 5-7 mini chapters. The best thing to do is to not use your coins to unlock chapters cause you're just getting scammed when 5-7 chapters are really just 1 chapter.
Story is good. Translation not the best but readable. Knight power system is quite interesting, reach the mage power seems quite common. MC always want to stay in base and farm exp but always plot always make him come out.
Worderfull story... It is very much worth your time to read this book... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Warning: The story shifted towards Mtl version translation from chater 1411...MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....MTL.....
揭示劇透 I deeply respect author for being consistent, still on the road to the same goal, added to it but it's basically the same, the world building and it's elements didn't just change halfway through, anything that was added meshed with whatever was already there. Most of the stuff I started out liking and reading around the time i started this i basically already dropped. This one stood tall. It reminds me of the old stuff like i shall seal the heavens and the desolate era, and stuff from that time. Where writers actually gave a shit about their work, instead of just writing for the sake of writing. Back then it took getting halfway through a thousand chapter book to even start to see inconsistencies, and the chapters were long, min 2000 words, some going all the way to 10000 and beyond. These days the problems start from the first chapter, the gimmicks and themes are the main plot devices, systems, golden fingers are the actual story and most of the time they're not even well thought out. I miss having face slapping situations that actually made sense. But i digress it's good author, thank you and i know it's not done and it might get worse but for now i am thankful and so i thank you. currently following closely 1400+ as i post this
One of the best book i have ever read. Has Solid world background, and author knows what he is doing. So far in story(1357), there is little to no unreasonable power ups. Though story takes time to develop more but it is amazing. Almost all characters have some purpose, almost no nonsense character. MC is low key and no harem(maybe romance at late) MC doesn't become OP from start but put lot of efforts for it. For people wanting Magic, yup there is but not from start. Magic intro was a good arc. Almost all Arcs are good. Long Story, worth to read.
I feel like the author is trying to disrespect every religion in the world through this novel.😐
I honestly thought that the author did a good job with power progression resets. I feel like a lot of authors bungle the power transition, and the story gets old. I found myself entertained. I have read up to 1270, and I plan on continuing. I also really appreciated a non harem or food based read. For an over saturated genre, this was really worth reading.
Overall I have enjoyed this book. 81 chapters in. Levi transmigrated on Holy Brilliance Calendar year 1000 into the body of a 10 year old. His father Earl Schneider was a powerful knight but was likely betrayed by his superior the Duke Montenegro and the Church of the Emerald Kingdom. With his father dead and the kingdom turning a blind eye the neighboring earls seize 2/3rds of his ancestral land only leaving him the least valuable area of Black Water Valley. Luckily his father had one loyal retainer, Sir Fred who takes it upon himself to raise and train Levi so that one day the Black Snake family can rise to prominence again. Levi will depend of his transmigration power of a proficiency panel to master different breathing techniques to become a Legendary Knight. Different kingdoms are pawns for religious conflict, untrustworthy nobles scheme and ancient evil stirs. Levi must not only become a knight but also find out how to master magic despite wizards and witches being as common as myth. So far, no harem or relationship. He’s not OP, at least yet. Very much a weak to strong story. Proficiency panel so far only works on knight breathing techniques, basic combat, and highly skilled professions like blacksmithing and alchemy. Maybe there will be more development later. The characters name did randomly change for one chapter, so hopefully they don’t screw up this novel because so far I have loved it.
the story is good so far, i like the progression. My only problem is chapter are divided to such a degree. There are cases wherein a chapter is divided into 8 parts, a very scummy move
AHEAD OF ITS'S TIME if your looking for a book similar to a record of a mortals journey to immortalality or warlock of the magus world . this is for you.
Idea base de los caballeros y sus niveles es algo interesante y podría hacer mucho con ella si lo desarrolla, pero se ve a lenguas distancia la mentalidad china y perro come perro y no hay sitio para más. Mentalidad de niño que se piensa que es el centro del mundo y solo sabe hacerse la pelota a si mismo, cuando no tiene porqué. Es un señor, un barón, piensa como tal, deberíamos ver desarrollo de personajes, desarrollo del reino y muchas intrigas y desafíos interesantes pero lo que veo es....una pena.
Honestly it took me like months to get past the first 100 chapters because the first bit was just so much information and at the same time nothing happened I got so bored. Then, the whole 100 chapters he just gets bullied constantly. I think this novel might be really entertaining for the right person, but I could NOT get through it..
I read 140 chapters, a novel worth wasting your time on....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Interesting synopsis, i like the concept of the MC power. It’s original. I have been hooked during 100+ chapters What i didn’t like is the lack of life. The MC is alone. His enemy or the very few people he meets are not described in depts. And he is too cold blooded
Great story. Love the progression. It based on the “ Warlock of the Magus World and other similar stories. Love that the MC continues with the knight path and does not abandon it.
The description of this story is a lie. The real description should be something like this: A very coward and pathetic person that only knows how to crawl on the ground in front of others gets reincarnated into a fantasy world in order to fully display his way of the turtle and amaze everyone by showing them how much of a loser he can be! Btw, this story is a bad translation.
.................................. .. . ........................................... .... ... . ................................................ . ........................................ .......... . .............................. .......... . ........................................ .......... . . ........................................... .. . ........................................... .... ... . ................................................ . ........................................ ........
not like typical Chinese novels where mc is unnecessarily op from start. mc is op but it is within limits and there is no stupid faceslapping .
the MC is narcissistic and is some work, I'm not evil, I won't enslave the mind of this guy who was nice to me, I know let's enslave the mind of the king then the kingdom will be mine. Hi little girl is your father home? when father gets home, where is your treasure, if you don't hand it over I will torture your kind daughter, thank you now become one of my zombies, kill everyone here and burn this place down and leave no survivors, I'm a nice guy I did not torture the little girl I gave her a quick death.
i just read it initially because it was free. But I have to say it's got me hooked. will wait another 3-4 months to come back and read. it's a pain waiting for updates
The main reason why I’m on Webnovel. Good story where the character’s personality and behavior stays consistent and reasonable.
It's a pretty good read. Far better than most trial novels that get picked up. Although pretty generic with nothing new, it offers pretty decent quality. My only nitpick is that webnovel started to split 1 chapter into 3 mini chapters and then they increased it to 5-7 mini chapters. The best thing to do is to not use your coins to unlock chapters cause you're just getting scammed when 5-7 chapters are really just 1 chapter.
Story is good. Translation not the best but readable. Knight power system is quite interesting, reach the mage power seems quite common. MC always want to stay in base and farm exp but always plot always make him come out.
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