3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
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I like that you're showing a grittier side of the world. Very good, keep it up!
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I like that you're showing a grittier side of the world. Very good, keep it up!
hoping to read more, here's hoping the writer continues.