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É muito bom, tenho 80% de certeza que você irá gostar desta FF Boa leitura :)(-_-)(:
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Please continue with this one it is really good and was just getting to the good part.
u coming back to this or is it dropped?? cuz its really hard to find supernatural fanfics and i liked this one
Atualiza aí guri, larga de ser Bahiano. ..................................................................................................................
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Thank you but this is why I try not too read anything with less then 100 chapters this is good but short it's like getting blued.[img=update][img=exp]
J'ai adoré c'est vraiment dommage que l'auteur l'ai abandonné, si l'auteur passe par ici s'il te plaît continue c'est incroyable. Aussi j'aimerai reprendre le concept j'en suis pas encore sur mais si l'auteur a vraiment abandonné alors je me ferai un plaisir de continué cette idée.
Please share supernatural fanfics , thank yoy ............................................................................................................
Bro I don't usually review any fan-fic since most are trash and illogical and usually the mc gets to strong to quick, again illogical, but I swear I was hooked on this one. Good Job bro keep it going. Moooooore
Awesome fic with heaps of potential. My only problem is the terrible update schedule. There has been no update in 26 days. I wouldn't be surprised if it's dropped
cool system decent mc who has problems that would actually result from suddenly getting transmigrated with a system and people acting at least mostly accurately so far overall 10/10
Please don’t add too many extra scenes other than maybe a 1.5 - 2 chapters fight scene by MC. Things are supposed to be a bit easier coz of his meta knowledge and thats fine. Good job tho!
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this is the best supernatural fanfic I have ever read so far please just increase the no of chapter a week
thank you so much for a good supernatural fanfiction + Mc with a good system. please don't drop it off. complete this fanfiction thank you so much for a good supernatural fanfiction + Mc with a good system. please don't drop it off. complete this fanfiction
It's a good story. If there are any other good supernatural stories can you guys comment the name of it?
I'm gonna be honest, this is an entertaining story. That said, there are two problems with it, first the chaps are too short, second the update rate is not exactly something to be proud of. Other than that, it's a genuinely good Supernatural Fanfic, it's a bit slow but I enjoy that kind of story more than a mess of words mashed together incoherently. I'm pretty most people who have a problem with how slow it is is like me, we don't actually think it's slow. The prolonged delays between each chapter just make it feel slow. Overall, good job.
I'm impressed, we've not gotten any consistent Supernatural fics in a while. Sensational, simply sensational.
J'ai bien aimé, j'attends la suite avec impatience.👌 N'abandonne pas l'histoire surtout. Le développement du personnage est bon mais pense également au développement du système afin qu'il ne sont pas trop op et délimiter des limitations. Enfin, ce n'est que mon avis. Fais de ton mieux déjà, en tout cas moi, ça me plaît déjà. 😏 En particulier, comme c'est Supernatural.
awesome fanfiction i love the series and could never find one that i enjoy keep it up 👍,...................................................
Such a wonderful supernatural fic, always wanted a good one cant wait for more scratch that I'm dying waiting for more
Superb Fanfic. I can see so many possibilities with this. First the system is amazing and I can see how strong it matches with the supernatural verse. A World filled with abillities to take. I hope the Author doesn't drop this, tho he will, because all do.
You know I had seen the description of supernatural and It looked pretty boring after I saw this fanfic couple months ago I thought why not try it out atleast to understand the fanfic. And I did I don’t think I have ever seen a show this good just finished the last episode like a couple minutes ago. It just an amazing show which has impacted me a lot and I am thankful because without you’re fanfic I would never have watched such a masterpiece. I am almost crying because it has ended. Thank you very much author!
É muito bom, tenho 80% de certeza que você irá gostar desta FF Boa leitura :)(-_-)(:
ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Please continue with this one it is really good and was just getting to the good part.
u coming back to this or is it dropped?? cuz its really hard to find supernatural fanfics and i liked this one
Atualiza aí guri, larga de ser Bahiano. ..................................................................................................................
揭示劇透 Thank you but this is why I try not too read anything with less then 100 chapters this is good but short it's like getting blued.[img=update][img=exp]
J'ai adoré c'est vraiment dommage que l'auteur l'ai abandonné, si l'auteur passe par ici s'il te plaît continue c'est incroyable. Aussi j'aimerai reprendre le concept j'en suis pas encore sur mais si l'auteur a vraiment abandonné alors je me ferai un plaisir de continué cette idée.
Please share supernatural fanfics , thank yoy ............................................................................................................
Bro I don't usually review any fan-fic since most are trash and illogical and usually the mc gets to strong to quick, again illogical, but I swear I was hooked on this one. Good Job bro keep it going. Moooooore
Awesome fic with heaps of potential. My only problem is the terrible update schedule. There has been no update in 26 days. I wouldn't be surprised if it's dropped
cool system decent mc who has problems that would actually result from suddenly getting transmigrated with a system and people acting at least mostly accurately so far overall 10/10
Please don’t add too many extra scenes other than maybe a 1.5 - 2 chapters fight scene by MC. Things are supposed to be a bit easier coz of his meta knowledge and thats fine. Good job tho!
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this is the best supernatural fanfic I have ever read so far please just increase the no of chapter a week
thank you so much for a good supernatural fanfiction + Mc with a good system. please don't drop it off. complete this fanfiction thank you so much for a good supernatural fanfiction + Mc with a good system. please don't drop it off. complete this fanfiction
It's a good story. If there are any other good supernatural stories can you guys comment the name of it?
I'm gonna be honest, this is an entertaining story. That said, there are two problems with it, first the chaps are too short, second the update rate is not exactly something to be proud of. Other than that, it's a genuinely good Supernatural Fanfic, it's a bit slow but I enjoy that kind of story more than a mess of words mashed together incoherently. I'm pretty most people who have a problem with how slow it is is like me, we don't actually think it's slow. The prolonged delays between each chapter just make it feel slow. Overall, good job.
I'm impressed, we've not gotten any consistent Supernatural fics in a while. Sensational, simply sensational.
J'ai bien aimé, j'attends la suite avec impatience.👌 N'abandonne pas l'histoire surtout. Le développement du personnage est bon mais pense également au développement du système afin qu'il ne sont pas trop op et délimiter des limitations. Enfin, ce n'est que mon avis. Fais de ton mieux déjà, en tout cas moi, ça me plaît déjà. 😏 En particulier, comme c'est Supernatural.
awesome fanfiction i love the series and could never find one that i enjoy keep it up 👍,...................................................
Such a wonderful supernatural fic, always wanted a good one cant wait for more scratch that I'm dying waiting for more
Superb Fanfic. I can see so many possibilities with this. First the system is amazing and I can see how strong it matches with the supernatural verse. A World filled with abillities to take. I hope the Author doesn't drop this, tho he will, because all do.
You know I had seen the description of supernatural and It looked pretty boring after I saw this fanfic couple months ago I thought why not try it out atleast to understand the fanfic. And I did I don’t think I have ever seen a show this good just finished the last episode like a couple minutes ago. It just an amazing show which has impacted me a lot and I am thankful because without you’re fanfic I would never have watched such a masterpiece. I am almost crying because it has ended. Thank you very much author!