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This is terrible. MC is unlikable and the story itself is bad. I dont wanna waste any more words since there is nothing good i can say about this book and no amount of sugessions gonna fix what is already rotten from inside.
It seems like the typical poorly translated Chinese story and the development of the mc is horrible He says he has an adult mentality but he doesn't even seem like it all I see is the typical beta protagonist
Stop Mr. Translator, this mtl novel is rubbish. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
It felt like a chinese novel. The only good things about this is the author's determination to maintain updating his book and the writing quality. (The writing quality isnt exactly good though just passable.)
This is garbage, the main character without dignity. not the first chapter is normal, but the second is bad (I couldn't even finish reading it... so bad...). Dropped the book on the second chapter (when I saw how he reacts to insults from Pansy)
I know this may seem like a shameless request for a review, but I wanted to let you know that it's okay to criticize and point out my mistakes. I am aware that my work is not of the highest quality and that I have missed some important points, which may have led to disappointment for some people. However, I want to assure you that I am not angry or considering quitting the novel. In fact, the novel is not mine to begin with and I obtained it through machine translation (MTL). All I can do is edit the grammar and smooth out sentences that don't make sense. Of course, I am unable to completely edit everything due to time constraints. I am a graduating student and I only do this for fun and relaxation. Despite this, you can expect me to finish the novel. I can't promise that it will be a great story, as I haven't even finished the MTL version and don't have complete control over the content. I hope you can bear with me and join me on this journey. Sorry for ranting. My feelings just got the better of me.😅😅🤣 By the way, Merry Christmas everyone. I hope you enjoy Christmas day😊💕
Interesting premise, but the MTL kills the story for me. There are scenes that appear to be cut out, whether that is an Author or TL mistake I don't know. The TL seems to be doing well with grammar, but there are a lot of names and titles that get screwed up and mess with the immersion. It's fine if you can turn off your brain, but I couldn't with Melma McGonagall and Albus having a first class in Merlin Jazz.
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This is terrible. MC is unlikable and the story itself is bad. I dont wanna waste any more words since there is nothing good i can say about this book and no amount of sugessions gonna fix what is already rotten from inside.
It seems like the typical poorly translated Chinese story and the development of the mc is horrible He says he has an adult mentality but he doesn't even seem like it all I see is the typical beta protagonist
Stop Mr. Translator, this mtl novel is rubbish. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
It felt like a chinese novel. The only good things about this is the author's determination to maintain updating his book and the writing quality. (The writing quality isnt exactly good though just passable.)
This is garbage, the main character without dignity. not the first chapter is normal, but the second is bad (I couldn't even finish reading it... so bad...). Dropped the book on the second chapter (when I saw how he reacts to insults from Pansy)
I know this may seem like a shameless request for a review, but I wanted to let you know that it's okay to criticize and point out my mistakes. I am aware that my work is not of the highest quality and that I have missed some important points, which may have led to disappointment for some people. However, I want to assure you that I am not angry or considering quitting the novel. In fact, the novel is not mine to begin with and I obtained it through machine translation (MTL). All I can do is edit the grammar and smooth out sentences that don't make sense. Of course, I am unable to completely edit everything due to time constraints. I am a graduating student and I only do this for fun and relaxation. Despite this, you can expect me to finish the novel. I can't promise that it will be a great story, as I haven't even finished the MTL version and don't have complete control over the content. I hope you can bear with me and join me on this journey. Sorry for ranting. My feelings just got the better of me.😅😅🤣 By the way, Merry Christmas everyone. I hope you enjoy Christmas day😊💕
Interesting premise, but the MTL kills the story for me. There are scenes that appear to be cut out, whether that is an Author or TL mistake I don't know. The TL seems to be doing well with grammar, but there are a lot of names and titles that get screwed up and mess with the immersion. It's fine if you can turn off your brain, but I couldn't with Melma McGonagall and Albus having a first class in Merlin Jazz.
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