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I have few issues with the story. First issue is that the story is way too slow paced, almost no progress even after 66 chapters. Second issue is the MC himself… Author has given us a cool backstory about a man who was deemed one of the best assassins of not the best, cold hearted individual who had almost no emotions, yet as soon as he wakes up, he is instant more caring, feels love towards a little sister and over all has a positive personality, he shows care towards everyone he meets, he knows he requires power in order to survive but instead of getting stronger, he makes stupid decisions that almost kill him and lands him in the hospital on numerous occasions. He is spending more time with “friends” than studying new was to improve his strength, he could try and mix his old skills with chakra and enhance them if possible but so far we haven’t seen much of that. Anyway, author informed us that the story will take a darker turn but Idk how long we have to wait, considering it took 66 chapters just for MC to age by 2 years (he is 7 currently) it might take 100 more chapters just for academy graduation and another 200 before mc becomes jonin. Aside from those issues the story isn’t bad compared to the rest of the things in Webnovel. I’ll save it in my library and keep an eye on it but so far it’s too boring to read. I hope my review doesn’t discourage the author from writing but I had to be honest. Ps. This is my personal opinion and someone else might see the story differently, if you are interested, I suggest you give it a try.
I came expecting a serious and dark plot. Unfortunately this is a slice of life fanfic. I'd rather read an original story about Silver the assassin. It's actually more interesting than the fluffy reincarnated kid in Narutoverse. It feels like Boruto was the inspiration behind this fanfic. Wouldn't recommend if quality fanfic is what you seek
Its a very ordinary novel with no hook even after reading 30+ story, its also very slowpaced, so far nothing have happend that makes you invested in the story. Author should just add "slice of life" tag since its what this books feels like.
Will you kill them or not? Btw I mean everyone Yuji cares for. Once they die, tell me so I can start reading further but for now it's a slice of life with MC not training and winning only due to plot armour. Either it's that or I'm underestimating his training since he holds back.
The idea is there and the execution is also great! Although the mc try to train, we don’t exactly know is it the best training for him yet. Just try it and i think u’ll love the novel!
I had extremely high hopes based upon the authors previous story and the description and so far I would say I am quite disappointed. As of 49 chapters this feels like a slice of life interspersed with random moments of drama wherein the MC gets injured and or hurt but his mysterious clans inheritance and needs to be rescued by tsunade. I think the inheritance of his clan is quite cool, but seeing a genius assassin rise in power within a unique bloodline would’ve been more interesting IMO. Also, the MC does not feel like an intelligent and cold blooded genius. He seems to barely train and to constantly put himself in danger. There are also some minor details like author seems to indicate that the MC has a good relationship with his younger sister and the we hear nothing of her after the start. Anyway, perhaps this will have an epic twist and get way darker and better but as of now I see nothing to set it aside from the usual MID naruto fic, 6/10 slightly above average at best.
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this story has massive potential pls dont drop or imma cry fr...............................................................................
One of my favourite Naruto Fan-fics I've read, it explores the Minato era with other characters who I like plus MC is cool too🔥, overall it's all amazing.
the story is really interesting, cant wait to see how it will progress from here on... so for now ill give you ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. btw, i love your other fic too.
it was forgotten life's fic so obviously I would like it it feels like dark elemeted story and that's what make it so intresting.....
This will be my second Naruto novel. The first being Reborn In Naruto As Madara's Grandson. This will be a long story with an expected 500 chapters with each chapter being around 1.5k words. I will use some elements from my previous novel but they will be specified. Now, for the novel and the main character. The main character is an anti-hero. There will be tragedy and lots of characters will die and shape the MC in a rogue demon. The start will be light-hearted and will progress gradually.
another trashy alternate universe with bs explanations. if you're into au you might like it, but i despise au so it's really trashy for me
I have few issues with the story. First issue is that the story is way too slow paced, almost no progress even after 66 chapters. Second issue is the MC himself… Author has given us a cool backstory about a man who was deemed one of the best assassins of not the best, cold hearted individual who had almost no emotions, yet as soon as he wakes up, he is instant more caring, feels love towards a little sister and over all has a positive personality, he shows care towards everyone he meets, he knows he requires power in order to survive but instead of getting stronger, he makes stupid decisions that almost kill him and lands him in the hospital on numerous occasions. He is spending more time with “friends” than studying new was to improve his strength, he could try and mix his old skills with chakra and enhance them if possible but so far we haven’t seen much of that. Anyway, author informed us that the story will take a darker turn but Idk how long we have to wait, considering it took 66 chapters just for MC to age by 2 years (he is 7 currently) it might take 100 more chapters just for academy graduation and another 200 before mc becomes jonin. Aside from those issues the story isn’t bad compared to the rest of the things in Webnovel. I’ll save it in my library and keep an eye on it but so far it’s too boring to read. I hope my review doesn’t discourage the author from writing but I had to be honest. Ps. This is my personal opinion and someone else might see the story differently, if you are interested, I suggest you give it a try.
I came expecting a serious and dark plot. Unfortunately this is a slice of life fanfic. I'd rather read an original story about Silver the assassin. It's actually more interesting than the fluffy reincarnated kid in Narutoverse. It feels like Boruto was the inspiration behind this fanfic. Wouldn't recommend if quality fanfic is what you seek
Its a very ordinary novel with no hook even after reading 30+ story, its also very slowpaced, so far nothing have happend that makes you invested in the story. Author should just add "slice of life" tag since its what this books feels like.
Will you kill them or not? Btw I mean everyone Yuji cares for. Once they die, tell me so I can start reading further but for now it's a slice of life with MC not training and winning only due to plot armour. Either it's that or I'm underestimating his training since he holds back.
The idea is there and the execution is also great! Although the mc try to train, we don’t exactly know is it the best training for him yet. Just try it and i think u’ll love the novel!
I had extremely high hopes based upon the authors previous story and the description and so far I would say I am quite disappointed. As of 49 chapters this feels like a slice of life interspersed with random moments of drama wherein the MC gets injured and or hurt but his mysterious clans inheritance and needs to be rescued by tsunade. I think the inheritance of his clan is quite cool, but seeing a genius assassin rise in power within a unique bloodline would’ve been more interesting IMO. Also, the MC does not feel like an intelligent and cold blooded genius. He seems to barely train and to constantly put himself in danger. There are also some minor details like author seems to indicate that the MC has a good relationship with his younger sister and the we hear nothing of her after the start. Anyway, perhaps this will have an epic twist and get way darker and better but as of now I see nothing to set it aside from the usual MID naruto fic, 6/10 slightly above average at best.
it’s good .........……….. [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]
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Thanks for this novel bro [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=update]
this story has massive potential pls dont drop or imma cry fr...............................................................................
One of my favourite Naruto Fan-fics I've read, it explores the Minato era with other characters who I like plus MC is cool too🔥, overall it's all amazing.
the story is really interesting, cant wait to see how it will progress from here on... so for now ill give you ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. btw, i love your other fic too.
it was forgotten life's fic so obviously I would like it it feels like dark elemeted story and that's what make it so intresting.....
This will be my second Naruto novel. The first being Reborn In Naruto As Madara's Grandson. This will be a long story with an expected 500 chapters with each chapter being around 1.5k words. I will use some elements from my previous novel but they will be specified. Now, for the novel and the main character. The main character is an anti-hero. There will be tragedy and lots of characters will die and shape the MC in a rogue demon. The start will be light-hearted and will progress gradually.
another trashy alternate universe with bs explanations. if you're into au you might like it, but i despise au so it's really trashy for me