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Omg, please ignore whatever review that was before, they couldn’t even tell you what was wrong with your writing!! Just super rude and disrespectful and not specific at all if you want something constructive, some of the writing in the later parts don’t rrly match up with the beginning, like the sword’s attitude and the way he talks. Would def go back to proofread but that’s typical. cant be perfect! I love this story so much because it reminds me of nier, but it’s so much more intriguing and mysterious. i love interpreting this stuff and i have a lot of fun following the mc’s journey. don’t let the bad review get to you, you’re doing fine [img=recommend]
Omg, please ignore whatever review that was before, they couldn’t even tell you what was wrong with your writing!! Just super rude and disrespectful and not specific at all if you want something constructive, some of the writing in the later parts don’t rrly match up with the beginning, like the sword’s attitude and the way he talks. Would def go back to proofread but that’s typical. cant be perfect! I love this story so much because it reminds me of nier, but it’s so much more intriguing and mysterious. i love interpreting this stuff and i have a lot of fun following the mc’s journey. don’t let the bad review get to you, you’re doing fine [img=recommend]